AvNeil 2S : 'New Beginings.!!' (Complete) - Page 7

Originally posted by: Binh

It was sooo cute!! Loved it!

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

Hhawww.. that was so cute! I liked how you ended it with him acknowledging her as Mrs Neil Khanna.. just too cute.. I wish there's more to this, nevertheless, its perfect!!! Keep writing more

Originally posted by: -shenz-

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this write up of yours. It was such a refreshing read for me. It served the purpose of a much needed break. I am glad i could be of some help u, in anyway.! And the purpose of this story is fulfilled😉

Neil took me by surprise in this whole write up . He clarified her doubts about him while his identity was still under the rug. He gave her a different perspective to her thoughts while speaking for himself in a third person context. God! That's messy to even explain. Hahahaa 😆 I get the feeling ! I understand what you are trying to say. I fact that i could make u explain what i wanted to, is satisfying.!

Her doubts were valid. All were intriguing as well. I mean who would go around and claim a guy to be selfish just because he isn't helping his dad in their family business? But she did. Her wish to have her mother staying along with her amused me. Ikr.! But then she is Avni, our Miss Ajooba, how could she behave like a normal gal. She never was she never will.! Though i was worked up finding the reasons, i could only come up with this.! I am glad that are well received and u guys enjoyed them

Though the best shot for this one would be the way he closed the conversation as a stranger, "Nice to meet you would be Mrs. Neil Khanna." 🤣 While there she was cringing over the being called as "Mrs. Tillu Khanna" Hahaha 😆 That was so fun to write.! Neil ki punchline hamesha damdaar hoti hai 😉

Thanks for sharing this azing piece of work. It was really a good dosage of AvNeil for the weekend; and much needed. Pleasure i sall mine. 😊

PS: Initially thsi write up reminded me of a particular thought I had days back. But after reading the complete story, I can say it played out differently. Gladly so 😆 Accha.!! Then grace us with ur thought too.! Write it up. Would love to read it.

Originally posted by: Sami72

This is literally so cute!!!! I loved this. Relevation was awesome. But i wished it was a short story!!!!Then we could see their lives till marriage!!! Thank u so much.! Nah, no continuation.! I am satisfied with th way it has ended

Finger licking and munchkin update!!!!

I enjoyed a lot reading this write up of yours. (of course i always do) . It was such a refreshing piece from a stressed out mind. Serving the purpose of a much needed break, it relieved my stress. So happy to know that.!

Neil never amazes to surprise me. Neither does avni. It felt like i should call them, Mr Ajooba Khanna and Mrs Ajooba Khanna. Hahaha, they are really so different and unique

Giving a different perspective to someone thoughts while speaking for themselves, god this is my favourite thing to do. Neil stole it. This is not fair!!!!🤔😔. Ek chiz toh rehne do mere paas!!!! I am gald u have something in common with Neil. Cheers for that

Avni''s doubts, lmao, exactly doubting about a person like me. But the biggest surprise was, she spoke so easily with a stranger, who was to be hubby!!! And that was so innocent of her to say that if she could live with her mother in her new home!!This amused me. Another magic miracle of yours.. Feels good to know u have enjoyed her reason and his reasonings.! I also enjoyed writing them

The ending of the conversation proved u are a great writer of course!! Thank u fpr believing and saying that

Much love

Sami

(There will be 2 stories for you , by me, on wattpad. If you like, i would update that here as well.)

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Hey Riya Heya

I have a complaint how could u be such a miser to not let us read such a beautiful peace of its and how dare u to forget it . I am a real clumsy person, and somehow end up doing such mishaps. And honestly i wasnt convinced whether this story is worth to be posted. I was skeptical.

And after this complaining mode a tiny winy request. Pls try to convert it into a ss or ff as it can be stretched u know and I would personally love it a lot. I would like to read about their journey after such a strange first meet. Nahi yaar.! Wont be possible.! Let us leave it like this only. I have never planned a continuation of this. 😉

And now sorry for my dare as I don't know I should say such things in the 2nd para to u as I have no rights for that. Choti bachchi samajh ke maaf Kar Dena .Pls. Dont be.! You have full right to say whatever u feel like

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

so cute loved it

Originally posted by: RomComFan

How adorable...loved the way he addressed her worries , esp bout her mom and OfCOURSE the flip to the flirty tillu we all adore. Terrific jib

Originally posted by: lenageorge

Riya it was superb and cute one.pls do continue yaar.and the Tillu part was funny😆

Originally posted by: docritu99

Hey,
Thank u so much dear fpr ur amazing words.!
They mean a lot to me.!
Much love.!

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Naah! My words won't be sufficient enough or as amazing as this story of yours to read. The pleasure was all mine to have discovered this piece of gem.

About jotting my thoughts, well, I might happen to do that some day! Hopefully not after ages😆