AvNeil 2S : 'New Beginings.!!' (Complete)

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docritu99

@docritu99

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: prathe
I loved reading this 2s of yours cos it kind of relaxed me. So glad to know that
This was so natural and he flow if events n your story makes it easy for me to imagine too Thank u so much dear.!
Simple stories are magical always😳 I second that.! I personally like short stories.!

Hey,
Thank u so much dear.!
Means a lot.!

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Totally loved the way Neil turned tabled speaking from third party POV 😆 He totally dropped a bomb with his single dialogue " nice to meet you to be Mrs.Neil Khanna " . Clean bowled ! 😆

I loved the reason she accused him to be selfish 😆 . Lol ! She was totally sympathizing with Prakash as Neil joined police force.. How can he not feel the reason for accusations to be cute . She wanted him to assist his dad . He brilliantly tackled her by declaring that tillu might be helping his dad too.

Last was so cute !😳 She wants her mother to come and stay with her so she is not left alone😳 Awww ! My heart melted for her . Neil will definitely keep everything in his mind and speak to his family . He will definitely not mind Neela staying in Khanna house 😉

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AvNeil123

@AvNeil123

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#43

This was such a cute and funny story.

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Chocolatebond

@Chocolatebond

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

This was even more cute chapter I'm already feeling greedy to read more but I know this is two shot I really loved it yaar thanks a lot for this weekend dose It really brought a smile on my face while reading both the chapters and yeah the revealation part was fabulous I'm re-reading it again and again and avni's cute reasons for rejection was really funny and sweet

I would love to read more such os or two shots and offcourse ff from you

Much love to you

🤗

Edited by Chocolatebond - 7 years ago

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Janeavneil

@Janeavneil

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Aww Riya,loved this to infinity, Mrs.Tillu Khanna,kya baat hai ,the second part was really a fun filled chapter and laughed too much reading this,Neil answering and clearing each of her doubts was really a fun to read ,thanks for the weekend delight,it really made my day

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neetu

@mayurg2010

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Hey Riya...

That was Soo cute. I mean I was all smiles when I was reading the part.

I request you to please continue this and don't end it right here. I love naughty Neil. The way he stumped her was a treat to read. I am just bowled over the simplicity of the story. I mean I never thought that such simple conversation can be so damn romantic, funny, mysterious, naughty and at the same time flirtatious.

I think it'll take some time for me to get out of the dreamland.

Loved it to the core!

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Binh

@Binh

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#47

It was sooo cute!! Loved it!

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Hhawww.. that was so cute! I liked how you ended it with him acknowledging her as Mrs Neil Khanna.. just too cute.. I wish there's more to this, nevertheless, its perfect!!! Keep writing more

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#49

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this write up of yours. It was such a refreshing read for me. It served the purpose of a much needed break.

Neil took me by surprise in this whole write up . He clarified her doubts about him while his identity was still under the rug. He gave her a different perspective to her thoughts while speaking for himself in a third person context. God! That's messy to even explain.

Her doubts were valid. All were intriguing as well. I mean who would go around and claim a guy to be selfish just because he isn't helping his dad in their family business? But she did. Her wish to have her mother staying along with her amused me.

Though the best shot for this one would be the way he closed the conversation as a stranger, "Nice to meet you would be Mrs. Neil Khanna." 🤣 While there she was cringing over the being called as "Mrs. Tillu Khanna"

Thanks for sharing this azing piece of work. It was really a good dosage of AvNeil for the weekend; and much needed.

PS: Initially thsi write up reminded me of a particular thought I had days back. But after reading the complete story, I can say it played out differently. Gladly so 😆

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Thesweetsoul

@Thesweetsoul

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#50

This is literally so cute!!!! I loved this. Relevation was awesome. But i wished it was a short story!!!!Then we could see their lives till marriage!!!

Finger licking and munchkin update!!!!

I enjoyed a lot reading this write up of yours. (of course i always do) . It was such a refreshing piece from a stressed out mind. Serving the purpose of a much needed break, it relieved my stress.

Neil never amazes to surprise me. Neither does avni. It felt like i should call them, Mr Ajooba Khanna and Mrs Ajooba Khanna.

Giving a different perspective to someone thoughts while speaking for themselves, god this is my favourite thing to do. Neil stole it. This is not fair!!!!🤔😔. Ek chiz toh rehne do mere paas!!!!

Avni''s doubts, lmao, exactly doubting about a person like me. But the biggest surprise was, she spoke so easily with a stranger, who was to be hubby!!! And that was so innocent of her to say that if she could live with her mother in her new home!!This amused me. Another magic miracle of yours..

The ending of the conversation proved u are a great writer of course!!

Much love

Sami

(There will be 2 stories for you , by me, on wattpad. If you like, i would update that here as well.)

Edited by Sami72 - 7 years ago