AvNeil 2S : 'New Beginings.!!' (Complete) - Page 6

Originally posted by: vaish_patel

Riyaaa meri jaan! Kya baat hai?! Tillu rocked, Avni shocked! 😆 Thats because she has underestimated a certain Tillu.! 😉

Such a nice feel-good two shot, much needed in this fandom at this time! Aww, thank u so much 😊 And much needed for me cause I read your latest OS in Wattpad. Avni was ridiculously cute with her reservations and our Tillu talked her through every one of them. I wonder what else they'd talk about in their "shaadi-interview". Well, since their is nothing like initial inhibitions, and they had already discussed things, i think they should talk about their future pillu 😉

So adorable, the pair of them! Just like you! Me.! Adorable.! I am crazy fella

Keep entertaining us as usual! 😳 I will i will.! Keep motivating me like this.!

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Totally loved the way Neil turned tabled speaking from third party POV😆He totally dropped a bomb with his single dialogue " nice to meet you to be Mrs.Neil Khanna " . Clean bowled !😆 So glad to know that, you have enjoyed this new kind of writing.! You can trust Neil in giving a potent Bomb wrapping it with a glitter of sweet surprise. Thats so he.! 😉

I loved the reason she accused him to be selfish😆. Lol ! She was totally sympathizing with Prakash as Neil joined police force.. How can he not feel the reason for accusations to be cute . She wanted him to assist his dad . He brilliantly tackled her by declaring that tillu might be helping his dad too. And here i was expect some guns pointed at me for making Avni think Neil to be a selfish man.! I saw skeptical before writing that part.! Thank u fpr mentioning it to be good.! Much relieved now. 😉

Last was so cute !😳She wants her mother to come and stay with her so she is not left alone😳Awww ! My heart melted for her . Even Neil's in that exact moment.! 😉 Neil will definitely keep everything in his mind and speak to his family . He will definitely not mind Neela staying in Khanna house😉 Totally, he is anyway in advantageous position.! One more warrior in his team 😉

Originally posted by: -AvniNeil-

This was such a cute and funny story.

Originally posted by: Chocolatebond

This was even more cute chapter I'm already feeling greedy to read more but I know this is two shot I really loved it yaar thanks a lot for this weekend dose Thank u so much dear.! Some stories look sweet when we know where to stop.! Unnecesaary dragging kills their charm.! And anyway i am here so i may write more such stories, right. It really brought a smile on my face while reading both the chapters So so so glad to know that. and yeah the revealation part was fabulous I'm re-reading it again and again and avni's cute reasons for rejection was really funny and sweet hahaha. I am glad u liked those parts, well if Miss Ajooba wont come up with such reasons then who will 😉

I would love to read more such os or two shots and offcourse ff from you I will be happily writing them more, as and when new idea strikes.! 😉

Much love to you

🤗

Originally posted by: Janeavneil

Aww Riya,loved this to infinity, Thank u so much Mrs.Tillu Khanna,kya baat hai ,the second part was really a fun filled chapter and laughed too much reading this, So glad to know that u enjoyed that part Neil answering and clearing each of her doubts was really a fun to read ,thanks for the weekend delight,it really made my day Always My pleasure.! 😉

Originally posted by: mayurg2010

Hey Riya...

That was Soo cute. I mean I was all smiles when I was reading the part. Thank u so much

I request you to please continue this and don't end it right here. Umm, i am sorry that really wont be possible.! Let it be a short and simple story.! I am satisfied with the way it has ended I love naughty Neil. The way he stumped her was a treat to read. I am just bowled over the simplicity of the story. I mean I never thought that such simple conversation can be so damn romantic, funny, mysterious, naughty and at the same time flirtatious. Awww, that is so sweet of u to say that.! Trust me, these conversations have their different feel and charm.! Its ohkay if this story has ended, i have note people like such simple things too so i will be writing them more, cause clearly thats my forte.! 😉

I think it'll take some time for me to get out of the dreamland. Hahahaa 😆 Take ur own time 😉

Loved it to the core!

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome ending

Love it