AvNeil SS : The Perfect Stranger , Epilogue 2 updated (10/5) pg 78 - Page 27

Originally posted by: drbeth

Nivi what do you do? Answer if its not a problm.

Originally posted by: drbeth

@ Nivi : Ok so I had guessed you were in school.But let me tell you...I'm still shocked...cz I was praying you to be older.I'm amazed at d way you talk.If it wasn't for d mention of homework and school competitions, I could hv never guessed your age.

PS : Hv to be careful.talking to u nw.You are underage😛

Come to think of it v were concerned abt Rachana's age the other day when v should hv been concerned abt you.

Originally posted by: paayaal

Omg!! Another intense chapter!! Wow!!! No wonder the temp in my city is rising so much...(*Fanning self)Lol😆.Ok so mission accomplished.I succeeded in raising the temp atleast by few degrees.😆.Hope u get some rains soon😛

Poor Neil has resorted to acting out filmy scenes to get Avni to go out with him on pseudo dates.😆 This one from DTPH is one of my favourites!!! Muah for using it here like this so brilliantly!! Thank you.Ab bichara kare big toh kya... when the girl he is aftr acts tough all the time.Oh yes...der was a similar scene in Dil toh pagal hai.I hv got to stop doing dt.I seriously dnt realise while writing it.

Neil has somewhat acknowledged his attraction to Avni...once he accepts it fully then no body..not even Avni will be able to reject/resist him. Exactly.He just needs that nudge.

Avni is trying with all her might to not even acknowledge this connection even subconsciously!She is stuck in a difficult situation.Can't blame her.

I absolutely loved the entire ch but the best part were the tender moments between the two!Yay.These are my small feats.

Next pls.

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

Why are you amazed at the way I talk? Could not understand, please explain 😕.

Tum log jo us din discuss kar rahe the, our biology ma'am taught most of those when we were in 8th. We were all giggling with those processes mentioned in our text, so she took two entire classes to explain everything, of course in an easier way to understand and not get embarrassed.

Originally posted by: drbeth

Hey Paayal.

You have decoded all d subtle messages so brilliantly.The part you mentioned as the best...was my first attempt at such type of scenes.Glad to knw I was able to convey.

Thnk you so much for d review dt says it all.

Much love

Originally posted by: drbeth

Ok I meant you are quite matured and thoughtful for someone of your age.Take it as a compliment😊

Yes everyone is taught abt all that in school itself.But whatever Puja was saying was a tad bit different.And she was even ready to answer further queries.And v know things in more details.So the question abt age.

Originally posted by: darsh333

So finally caught up the last 3 updates!!! Finally you made it.I thought you broke up wid my bechara SS.

Woah tapasi!the writer in you is beautifully growing as each updates come up👏 Thank you...dts wht I expect😳

Loved all the three updates😊especially the last two ones which had avneil in it😆 See I did as I promised.

Bebe-avni was least expected. I was expecting richa-neil-avni scenes again. I loved how avni took care of bebe and neil came to pick her up at the hospital!mahn these hospital scenes reminded me of those college days Nostalgia right.Ya I miss those days of college too.

Neil is finding reasons to comeback to her😳mmm im loving this neil😳avni will not realise anything until almost the end of your ss..im sure about that coz avni even if she falls in love is a tubelight.😕😆 Avni has started with the realisation.But yes she is not the one to come out of her shell so soon.

Dinner in the street..the ring selection..the dress selection..was all so goodiee that made me have a smile on my face all the while reading those parts😳 That's what I wanted.Dts y I was telling you to read it.

Ring selection was more fun😆aargh poor neil the pendant was rejected!can't blame avni coz he is her friend's fiancee.Exactly.She is right frm her pov.

But why is avni distancing herself?im sure the past is gonna come forth but still the reader doesn't want this avni to go inside a shell.You will get to know soon enough.As this is a short story...the wait won't be longer.

I liked how neil went on his knees just to be with her😳that was quite unexpected of him😃neil is❤️ Unexpected is by definition Neil.😳...dts y v all love him😃

The love for chocolates..how did neil know she loved chocolates??i don't remember reading that in the earlier updates or will it be revealed later?? Nai nai.Its just... wht...should I say...dil se dil ka connection.

The last update had kinda a mixed emotions wala ending..i was happy coz of the fall and catch😳but she left alone in a cab and left neil it was supposed to be like that.The journey can't be all smooth now, can it?

And im happy that your updates are getting lengthier as each updates come in😃update the next part soon! Yes we are approaching the end.So length is increasing too.

And lemme say this ss is making me go into a dreamy avneil land but still with a bit of drama, spice and fun😊👏

And yes a hugeee sorrryyy for not reading the last 3 updates :|