AvNeil SS : The Perfect Stranger , Epilogue 2 updated (10/5) pg 78 - Page 25

Yeay!!! Lucky that I stalked to see an update.. ok this time it reminded me of IPK when she became his model for the day but yours was much sweeter scene.. I wish our show was like this, can't you borrow your brain to put CVs for a day? Hahaha

Coming to the update... what happened to Riya and Ali? Are you planning for a parallel?
Avneil here are indeed funny clowns.. I liked Neil dramatically going down his knees whilst Avni's childlike attitude seeing chocolate. Both carefree with each other. Please keep this secret meet for few more rounds before anyone could catch them.. light hearted witty and yet intense.. keep it coming gal!!

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

loved it

update soon

Ab main agar lagoon ki jaldi update karna to tum kya karogi. As I am loving this ss so much. Hmmm neilu ko avni ke sath rehne ke liye banane chahiye or avni ko neilu se bhaagne ke. "Avni tera kya hoga avni". Tu sach me tube light hai yaar tumhe ye bhi nahi pata ki Banda tere me interested hai instead u are thinking him as ur friends fiance. Abhi to engagement hui bhi nahi hai tab tu itna hesitate kar rahi hai agar tumse Milne se pehle unki engagement ho gayi hoti to tu kya karti.

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

Yeay!!! Lucky that I stalked to see an update.. ok this time it reminded me of IPK when she became his model for the day but yours was much sweeter scene.. I wish our show was like this, can't you borrow your brain to put CVs for a day? Hahaha Love the excitement😳.IPK is Iss Pyaar ko kya naam Doon? Sry but I'm so poor when it comes to shortforms.Glad the scene played out like I wished.CVS ka toh kya bolun? I would gladly lend them my brain but I dnt think dey would like it.I even wrote a remarriage sequence for AvNeil...aftr all my hopes of seeing a remarriage track got crushed.

Coming to the update... what happened to Riya and Ali? Are you planning for a parallel? I want to keep dis story short.So a parallel story may not be possible.And yes der was a scene between a Riya and Ali, which I had to skip as the update became long.I'll make sure I put it up in the next one😊
Avneil here are indeed funny clowns.. I liked Neil dramatically going down his knees whilst Avni's childlike attitude seeing chocolate. Both carefree with each other. Please keep this secret meet for few more rounds before anyone could catch them.. light hearted witty and yet intense.. keep it coming gal!! Awww.Thank you so much.Yes dey both are being constraint free in each other's presence.Losing themselves in each other's company.

Neil and his ways to get his jod done . He literally went into knees just for making her to accompany him😆 . He is head over heels without a clue.What else will he do if our heroine is so ziddi . Was he really interested in selecting a dress or is it because he wants to spend time with someone special 😆 He was literally enjoying her dressing up for him . Smartass ! I guess he is gonna pick that yellow dress for her 😆 Chocolate reminded me of chocolate bond of AdiZa 😆This two crazy people become kids as they lay their eyes on chocolates .Aditi takes pleasure in hiding his chocolates 😆

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Ab main agar lagoon ki jaldi update karna to tum kya karogi. As I am loving this ss so much. Hmmm neilu ko avni ke sath rehne ke liye banane chahiye or avni ko neilu se bhaagne ke. "Avni tera kya hoga avni". Tu sach me tube light hai yaar tumhe ye bhi nahi pata ki Banda tere me interested hai instead u are thinking him as ur friends fiance. Abhi to engagement hui bhi nahi hai tab tu itna hesitate kar rahi hai agar tumse Milne se pehle unki engagement ho gayi hoti to tu kya karti.Aur jaldi update😲.Yaar main try toh karti hoon par ek toh I'm lazy ,upar se the updates are really long.I start writing but then it just goes on and on.So thoda tym lag jata hai.Avni actually is understanding things slowly but she is just reminding herself that he is to be engaged to Richa.

Too good yaar. Can't express in words . Just update soonish and this time no late late okkkie as mera dil tut jayega.

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Fantastic update

Love it

Continue soon

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Neil and his ways to get his jod done . He literally went into knees just for making her to accompany him😆 . He is head over heels without a clue.What else will he do if our heroine is so ziddi . Was he really interested in selecting a dress or is it because he wants to spend time with someone special 😆 He was literally enjoying her dressing up for him . Smartass ! I guess he is gonna pick that yellow dress for her 😆 Chocolate reminded me of chocolate bond of AdiZa 😆This two crazy people become kids as they lay their eyes on chocolates .Aditi takes pleasure in hiding his chocolates 😆 Our guy knows how to his girl to agree to him.He is falling hard for her , just needs a nudge in the right direction to realize it.You think he was interested in anything other than spending some stolen time did her😆.Sab Avni ke like kharidega Kya😆.You know I keep mixing up AvNeil and Adiza unintentionally.😆

I thought Avni won't agree after she closed herself up during car ride . But Banda hamara is not easy one to give up . He surely knows to bring her his way . And ladki bhi koi kam nahi . She knows that he affects her . She isn't clueless like Avni in NK .😆 No Avni here is not as clueless as humari Tilli in d show😆.T hough isn't completely aware of her feelings yet but she does feel his effect on her.

Originally posted by: drbeth

Hey Sri

Thanx for an adorable review.You made me realize I had mixed up Adiza wide AvNeil😆.I'm also turning into a tubelight😆.

The way u r understanding d story makes me really happy as a writer.😊

PS : Y did u ask abt wattpad last time?

Ahem ahem yeh kuch aur disa mein jaare.😉