AvNeil SS : The Perfect Stranger , Epilogue 2 updated (10/5) pg 78 - Page 29

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Posted: 7 years ago
Ok honest feedback.. it was filler update as it lacked minimum AvNeil dose.. hahaha.. just kidding. This was truly needed. I wanted to know how is Richa feeling after that night ride with Ali and her feelings for him. Glad that she's confused and clueless abt these 2 gentlemen's actual intentions..hehehe.. Mr Neil couldn't contact Richa but too much in touch with Avni.. I hope Richa takes it cool when she finds out about this two. Wow surprise engangement for Neil is coming in a week, I wonder how he's gonna react at the party..

PS: I'm in a meeting feeling annoyed at work and this update made me better.. thanks dear

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: drbeth



Hey ( sorry dnt knw ur name yet).
Thank you so much for the enthusiastic words.Your liking to my story keeps me going.This is a short story and will be heading for its destination soon.Hope you still read it till d end.

Much love
Tapasi.



Yes IPK is Iss Pyaar Ko... no parallel for AliRi, that's fine as long as Richa is not heart broken. I don't think so she will be as you intend to keep it short and sweet so I assume it will be happy ending with lots positivity. I'll read it till it lasts definitely and comment as I can. Not a regular commenter but will try my best to give my feedback as much possible. I hope it will not be too short a story as I would love to see few updates on AvNeil once they discover their feelings and their relationship progress too..

You can call me Monz in short...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

Ok honest feedback.. it was filler update as it lacked minimum AvNeil dose.. hahaha.. just kidding. This was truly needed. I wanted to know how is Richa feeling after that night ride with Ali and her feelings for him. Glad that she's confused and clueless abt these 2 gentlemen's actual intentions..hehehe.. Mr Neil couldn't contact Richa but too much in touch with Avni.. I hope Richa takes it cool when she finds out about this two. Wow surprise engangement for Neil is coming in a week, I wonder how he's gonna react at the party..

PS: I'm in a meeting feeling annoyed at work and this update made me better.. thanks dear

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It was actually a filler chapter only😆.But it needed to be der so that the story could move ahead.Dts y I hv another chapter ready to go...will be posted in the evening😊
Yes Richa's feelings needed to be addressed as she is a integral part of all this mess.
Neil wasn't aware that Richa had seen him or rather his car near her apartment.Thats why he never called.Plus he has his interests somewhere else completely.

Glad I could be of help in making you feel better.😊

Thnx for the good and honest.feedback😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
A wonderful update... Loved it to bits... Really nice
Please update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7



Yes IPK is Iss Pyaar Ko... no parallel for AliRi, that's fine as long as Richa is not heart broken. I don't think so she will be as you intend to keep it short and sweet so I assume it will be happy ending with lots positivity. I'll read it till it lasts definitely and comment as I can. Not a regular commenter but will try my best to give my feedback as much possible. I hope it will not be too short a story as I would love to see few updates on AvNeil once they discover their feelings and their relationship progress too..

You can call me Monz in short...


Ok Monz it is then😊
Right now I hv completed writing it.Might be busy fr sometime so I'm posting the updates fast. But I'm considering ur suggestion.I will keep the thread open.Will post some chapters based on your suggestions later on.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update👏
But much needed. I want to know about Richa feeling.
Now, iam glad she's in confusion. Thats good for my shipper Dil. I hope jaldi voh Ali Ko karde.😛😈
Mr. Neil Khanna and his way to make his job done.😆
This time he used Disha also.
Yellow lehenga. Aditi look gorgeous in yellow and red.
Wow, ms.avni accepted his gift.😉 Y not? Bcoz yeh Banda ne usse emotional blackmail jo Kiya hai.
Jalado lehenge Ko, fekdo.😆
Don't know how he will react after announcement.
Eagerly waiting for next update.
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Binh

A wonderful update... Loved it to bits... Really nice

Please update soon!

Heya.
Thank you so much for finally commenting here😳.
Another thanks for the Love and appreciation.

Will update in d evening itself.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rilsaf

Nice update👏 Thank you.

But much needed. I want to know about Richa feeling.
Now, iam glad she's in confusion. Thats good for my shipper Dil. I hope jaldi voh Ali Ko karde.😛😈Tum ab unhe bhi ship kar rhi😆
Mr. Neil Khanna and his way to make his job done.😆
This time he used Disha also. Dt was cute ryt? Did u realise the small kid was also smitten by our very own Mr charm.
Yellow lehenga. Aditi look gorgeous in yellow and red. Thnx for dt.I really needed a feedback fr dt.Aditi looks gorgeous in almost every color.
Wow, ms.avni accepted his gift.😉 Y not? Bcoz yeh Banda ne usse emotional blackmail jo Kiya hai.
Jalado lehenge Ko, fekdo.😆 Ha ha😆.You got the emotions nailed.That was his last resort to convince her 😆
Don't know how he will react after announcement.
Eagerly waiting for next update.
Continue soon


Thanks a lot Safana for the lovely review.You made the chapter look more cuter than I thought it would be.
Much love.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you so much😊
I got a new reader😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: paayaal

Res!

Unres!!

Oops! Cross Connections lag rahey hain!!!😆 Issh...dt should hv been the perfect name for this chapter.But my mind just went blank and I named it the first thing that popped into my brain😆

The Engagement announcement will be a big & unpleasant surprise for both Neil & Ali...m anticipating some serious fireworks in the next chapter!! Yes its a big surprise for them all.Fireworks...uska toh pta nai.Dts fr u to decide after reading the chapter.

But I guess thats whats going to wake them up from their stupor & go after the girls they actually want & love!! Ahan they need to realise that at some point or the other.

I knew Neil would pull out a stunt like pretending to be angry to get Avni to agree to wear that dress...but that blackmail by the kid was too cute!!!! If you guess everything... then there will be no fun in reading it😳.Even the kid couldn't resist our Mr Charming Khanna.

Avni wore the dress gifted by Neil & Richa invited Ali to a party where her engagement to another man will be announced!!! Time to unravel the entanglements!! Will be soon enough.


Thnk you so much dear.
Didn't expect a long comment for my filler chapter.Dt just doubles my happiness.

Much love

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