AvNeil SS : The Perfect Stranger , Epilogue 2 updated (10/5) pg 78 - Page 28

Originally posted by: paayaal

Hey Tapasi,

Please keep inc the temp...m absolutely loving it! I may not be seeing the rains in real life anytime soon but I wouldn't mind witnessing your AvNeil enjoying a sizzling rain seq in their fictional life!!😉 .Story is almost completed.Can't add more chapters😛

Oh pls don't stop taking inspiration from film seq...your unique take on that particular scene elevates it immensely & just makes the whole experience for us a 100Xs better! Trust me dt was just my subconscious.Its been years since I last watched DTPH. It was ur cmmnt dt made me connect d scenes.Elated to know I could put my touch to dt memorable scene.

The whole story is a treat to read...the way u ve written the differing emotions is praise-worthy...I can not only visualize the scene but feel the emotion behind their spoken unspoken words too!!👏 Oh God dts more than I handle😆.Just soaring sky high at d moment...all ur fault.One of best things dt I hv heard all day.

Awesomely brilliant Tapasi! A thank you is not enough for dis.But dts all I hv to express gratitude.So Thnk you😊

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

Being the elder one has its own side-effects. Family wants us to be the mature and sensible one, elder ones often lose their childishness and carefree nature at a young age.

About age, I understand.

Originally posted by: drbeth

Darshana😃

You came.I thought you left forever.How can i??😕

This time I'll accept the huge sorry...with pleasure.You can't coz im taking it back🤓

I'm so happy to know I'm able to transport you to a AvNeil land...dts huge for me.

Thank you for finally making it and all d love.My happiness😊

Much love.

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

absolutely loving the story tapasi very engaging and super interesting always making me impatience for the next part beautiful writing 👏 Thank you.You surely know how to make me smile😊

Not sure whats keeping avni not to fall for the ever so charming man can't be just the fact he is soon gonna be engaged so there's definitely more to this hope to uncover her inner fears soon, It actually intrigues me how deeply you are reading into the story.I dnt if I'm even writing that emotion heavy story.But the fact that you are going beyond d obvious is interesting and scary too.You know everything soon😊

loved the whole shopping scene 😉 Thank you😳

its so cute that you keep recreating there famous fall and eye locks they kinda define there chemistry 😳😳 overall an awesome update can't wait for the next I'm redefining it😳😃...he he...thank you...I'm trying to😆.

much love

safia

Originally posted by: drbeth

Hey Safia.

Thnk you so much for pouring so much love on me and my story.And sorry abt delaying d update...I just couldn't complete it on time.

Much love.