AvNeil SS : The Perfect Stranger , Epilogue 2 updated (10/5) pg 78 - Page 26

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: drbeth

Hey Nidhi
Thank you so much for ur kind words.You don't need to express in words ...your impatience says it all😆
I'll try to update soon😊
Much love.

Yes I am impatient just for reading ur story. Aur mujhe is baat ko accept karne me koi sharm mehsoos nahi hoti.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

What a phenomenal update Tapasi, seriously you're growing as one of the best writers of our forum. When I begin reading the chapter, I find myself lost in the world that you create with words. I'm telling you, if you are ever planning to leave doctor profession (I know you wouldn't but yet) you should consider the option of becoming an authorised writer, your tales will be the best-sellings for months together.@bold : really?You keep making me climb the 'chane ki jhaad'😆.God Nivi I think this is the best compliment any1 can ever bestow upon me...ever.I may plan on quitting my profession...u never know.D Doctors in India hv to deal with a lot .So now I know I do hv an alternate career optn😆

The whole perspective you gave of Avni through Neil shows how much he has begun to understand his little 'stranger' whom he met at a club. The guy is totally magnetised, hypnotised with Avni. Avni's feelings, as of now, are only going like 'he is her friend's fiancee'. But I'm sure this is the beginning of the introduction to her past because of which Avni wants to distance herself from Neil.You understand this whole thing so well... sometimes I doubt if you are reading my writing😆.Avni has to remind herself not to get attached or attracted to her frnds' fiance...natural in this situation.

Neil does get cuter day-after-day with each passing chapter, falling for him and his uber cute actions.Ahan so Neil can get cuter than you initially thought😳

I could already imagine a married AvNeil with this shopping scene, with exasperated Avni and clueless Neil. A carton full of Ferrero Rocher for you for that fall and catch scene. What a pleasure it was reading it.Yayee😃.I love chocolates too...sooo much😆.Married AvNeil scene would be so damn cute

Impatient for the next update already.

Love,

Nivi


P.S. - From which movie is that song? Never heard it before.

Hey Nivi
First of all how did you unres before the mentioned day?

Songs ...Aahatein ( first one ) ... Was from the movie Do Lafzon ki Kahani.
Theherja ( 2nd one )... Is from the upcoming movie ' October' ...starring Varun Dhawan.Do listen to dis one.Absolutely beautiful.


Thank you dear... for showering me with so many praises that I fall short of words in expressing gratitude.
Lots of love.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rilsaf

Ahem ahem yeh kuch aur disa mein jaare.😉 Ahem ahem Sahi direction mein ja that hai toh?😉

Aag dono taraf laggi hai.😃 but neil ke taraf jyada laggi hai.Ab Kya karein humari Avni aag hai na...so Neil ki taraf aag jyada lagi hai😆
I love the way how he get his job done. He is so cute.
He went into knees to convince her.He can go to any length to convince her😆.Ye toh Kuch bhi nai tha.
I dont think this engagement will happen.
Yeh banda kuch na kuch karke avni ke haathon mein ring phena dega.Acha itna confidence garam Munda par.😳
Dress selection scene was so cute.Thank you.
Wow that chocolate scene reminded me some people. "Chocolatebond"I always end up mixing AvNeil and Adiza unintentionally😆
That was cute scene.
Eagerly waiting for next update.
Continue soon.

Safana🤗
I missed you and ur cute cute commnts so much.
I think u missed a chapter in between.Do read it when you get time.Do let me know hw it was.I'll wait.
Thank you so much for all the love and the support.Really appreciate it.
Much love
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

When you were mentioning about cover edit I thought it was for wattpad

No no.Nivedita ( Aphrodite_NV) just made me a edit which I hv put up in d first page.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Yes I am impatient just for reading ur story. Aur mujhe is baat ko accept karne me koi sharm mehsoos nahi hoti.

Awww how cute.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Zara_Imam

I can wait for u till eternity
Hayee I'm openly flirting with you.. do u acknowledge it? 😉
Okay I'm being cheesy now😆
No I'm not taking after Neil, he is just beyond perfection n I have many flaws sweetheart😳

I aint perfect either😳
Eternity😆...ryt out of a romantic movie...😆
What are v two talking abt seriously?😆😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: drbeth

Hey Nivi
First of all how did you unres before the mentioned day?

Songs ...Aahatein ( first one ) ... Was from the movie Do Lafzon ki Kahani.
Theherja ( 2nd one )... Is from the upcoming movie ' October' ...starring Varun Dhawan.Do listen to dis one.Absolutely beautiful.


Thank you dear... for showering me with so many praises that I fall short of words in expressing gratitude.
Lots of love.

About the unres, Tuesday I had few competitions in school, so was preparing for them. But then in the evening my mom told maama-maami are coming and she wanted me take leave so that we can plan a small trip to the nearby shopping mall. Toh full free hoon main, I'm so happy that I got chutkara from those oratorical stuff. I detest them from the core of my being.
Now that you have told me, I will listen to the song for sure.
Doctors of India surely have a tough time, have many doctor friends and cousins who rant about how much work they are dumped with, operations at odd hours, blood, I get traumatized and frightened listening about them. So yeah, lucky you for having an alternate 😉.
Reading your writing..I'm not too sure about that. But I analyze everything very deeply, that's what I often get to hear from dear ones, though I really don't believe their words.
You get to hear these praises because you deserve them, your work is worthy to be showered with loads of love and praises. It's your hard work for which you receive so many compliments.

Btw, aaj kal aap ke liye bohot saare proposals aa rahe? Kya jaawab denge doctor sahiba 😆.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: drbeth

Safana🤗
I missed you and ur cute cute commnts so much.
I think u missed a chapter in between.Do read it when you get time.Do let me know hw it was.I'll wait.
Thank you so much for all the love and the support.Really appreciate it.
Much love

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Really sry tapsi.
I didn't missed that chapter. Morning read kiya tha.
But I didnt get time to comment on that. Before I comment u updated next chapter. So I directly respond on this chapter.
That chapter was awesome. Especially that star pendant part.❤️
Really loved that. I know she didn't accept it. But technically that pendant is the first gift from blue munda to lady don.😛
Really loved that chapter.
Sry for late response.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

About the unres, Tuesday I had few competitions in school, so was preparing for them. But then in the evening my mom told maama-maami are coming and she wanted me take leave so that we can plan a small trip to the nearby shopping mall. Toh full free hoon main, I'm so happy that I got chutkara from those oratorical stuff. I detest them from the core of my being.
Now that you have told me, I will listen to the song for sure.
Doctors of India surely have a tough time, have many doctor friends and cousins who rant about how much work they are dumped with, operations at odd hours, blood, I get traumatized and frightened listening about them. So yeah, lucky you for having an alternate 😉. Ok so relatives and shopping.Hv a gud time.Ya docs have their work cut out fr dem.But dts d part I like.Its the other stuff like docs being subjected to violence, rural postings, difficult working condns...dt I dnt like.
Reading your writing..I'm not too sure about that. But I analyze everything very deeply, that's what I often get to hear from dear ones, though I really don't believe their words. Start believing den.I think d same😃
You get to hear these praises because you deserve them, your work is worthy to be showered with loads of love and praises. It's your hard work for which you receive so many compliments.
I feel honored to read all dis.😊
Btw, aaj kal aap ke liye bohot saare proposals aa rahe? Kya jaawab denge doctor sahiba 😆. Proposal😆...singular.Dekhungi sochungi...phir jake kuch kahungi😆


Nivi what do you do? Answer if its not a problm.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rilsaf

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Really sry tapsi.Sorrys are not accepted here🤓
I didn't missed that chapter. Morning read kiya tha.
But I didnt get time to comment on that. Before I comment u updated next chapter. So I directly respond on this chapter.
That chapter was awesome. Especially that star pendant part.❤️yayee😃.You liked it😃
Really loved that. I know she didn't accept it. But technically that pendant is the first gift from blue munda to lady don.😛Sahi pakde hain.It is technically his first gift😊
Really loved that chapter.
Sry for late response.


Yay you did read it.Now I'm satisfied.
And Saf no apologies pls.

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