AvNeil SS : The Perfect Stranger , Epilogue 2 updated (10/5) pg 78 - Page 24

Originally posted by: drbeth

Hey Zara

You can't guess how happy I'm to read ur comment.Its been such a gloomy day here on d forum.Had lost interest in writing too.So thank you sooo much for this.Everytym I read ur comments I feel like talking to a happy and cheerful soul.Always stay dis way.😊

Much love.

Originally posted by: Amayrasharma18

Hey...Tapasi 🤗 Sorry..i know i'm late..!! Do consider my apologies..!! But a big hug to you for giving such an early update :) Hug is accepted🤗.But no apologies please.Itna formality is not accepted here.
The update was as usual a beautiful one..!! The confession about Fake boyfriend was cute ;) ! Loved their unanticipated date..the whole scene was so amazingly written..i could actually imagine them enjoying the whole view u described ..!! Thank you.Nothing makes me more happy as a writer than my readers being able to imagine the scene like I picture it in my mind.I knew the pendant was for her and she refused ...( chalo koi na.. dheere dheere ring aur pendant dono Avni ke paas hi aane hain..😉 Dono aayenge Avni ke paas ? Are you sure?😆Avni sharing about her patient was cute..!! I loved the description of Neil's thoughts about Avni...his feelings were beautifully defined (hope to get same from Avni soon)..!! So happy to know I could convey his feelings so well.You will get to see Avni's side soon enough.feAnd the last but not the least...their 'moment' was lovely ! Again Both their emotions were aesthetically written !!( Esp. Avni's from being lost to again being conscious and aware ).. I loved this part to the bits..!! Yayee.I could a happy dance now.Dts exactly wht I wanted to hear... aesthetic.You hv brought a huge smile on my face and a sense of satisfaction.Love you fr dis.
P.s Hey..what was she searching in her bag i the beginning? I hope it wasn't Black Pepper spray!LOL 😆

Originally posted by: Zara_Imam

I know everyone is irritated with girgit-superstar luv story. Let's see CVs kab baksh denge hume unse esp girgit, she's literally the first person in the whole planet whom I hate🤢

I'm optimist n u r pessimist, they say opp attract each other so what say Tapasi, will u be my gf? 😉

Love you lots,

Zara

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

Tapasi sweetie kab update dogi 🥱

Originally posted by: drbeth

You are waiting fr my update?😲.Dts news to me...a happy one.

Hmm...update... I'm trying to get it up by tonight or max by tomorrow mrng😊

Originally posted by: drbeth

The show has become a lost cause.Bt more than dt I'm upset bcz of people leaving d forum one by one.I get attached easily...so it feels bad.

You are such a cutie😆😆.R u taking after Neil Khanna ? 😆

You hv to wait fr my answr😛

What a phenomenal update Tapasi, seriously you're growing as one of the best writers of our forum. When I begin reading the chapter, I find myself lost in the world that you create with words. I'm telling you, if you are ever planning to leave doctor profession (I know you wouldn't but yet) you should consider the option of becoming an authorised writer, your tales will be the best-sellings for months together.

The whole perspective you gave of Avni through Neil shows how much he has begun to understand his little 'stranger' whom he met at a club. The guy is totally magnetised, hypnotised with Avni. Avni's feelings, as of now, are only going like 'he is her friend's fiancee'. But I'm sure this is the beginning of the introduction to her past because of which Avni wants to distance herself from Neil.

Neil does get cuter day-after-day with each passing chapter, falling for him and his uber cute actions.

I could already imagine a married AvNeil with this shopping scene, with exasperated Avni and clueless Neil. A carton full of Ferrero Rocher for you for that fall and catch scene. What a pleasure it was reading it.

Impatient for the next update already.

Love,

Nivi

P.S. - From which movie is that song? Never heard it before.