AvNeil SS : The Perfect Stranger , Epilogue 2 updated (10/5) pg 78

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Posted: 7 years ago

#151

Hello !!! I have been reading your works couldn't comment

previously "sorry".This one is fantastic I just loved how

you brought up Avneil and Richa-Ali angle. It's always fun

reading your updates dude.

Just can't wait for you to update, even though you are really

quick ( matter of fact) it's you who is to be blamed (wink !!)

coz I am hooked on to it.

With Love

Kathy ❤️

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HighOnSarcasm

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Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#152

WT!!! I missed an update again!! real life!!😲

Anyways...I luff Ali!! Hez just sooo adorable!!

Not only did he recognize Neilz feelings, he voiced the same to Avni too!! He also is interested in Richa...she just needs to 'notice' him & she will no longer be this unintentional 3rd angle between Neil & Avni!!

I think Ali will be the catalyst that'll bring the change in AvNeilz relationship dynamics!!

I hope these 2 wake up soon in regards to the their feelings for each other...I mean he talks to her like he has some sort of haq on her & she lets him...y don't they realize that!!

Whatever he says makes her overreact & do & say things she normally wouldn't!!

Can't wait for next part...

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WhtinAname

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Posted: 7 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: srain10
Fabulous and lovely update tapasi...
Ali is busy drooling over richa and neil is busy playing rapid fire round...
Very entertaining ...

Hey sonal.

Thank you so much for the good words you put in.

So this story is serving its purpose of entertaining people😃

Thnx again.

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WhtinAname

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Posted: 7 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: Kathy_927
Hello !!! I have been reading your works couldn't comment
previously "sorry".This one is fantastic I just loved how
you brought up Avneil and Richa-Ali angle. It's always fun
reading your updates dude. No place for 'sorry's here😊.'Fun'...thank you so much for saying dt.

Just can't wait for you to update, even though you are really
quick ( matter of fact) it's you who is to be blamed (wink !!)
coz I am hooked on to it. Am I? Am I quick?😆 I guess the last two updates were fast😆.

With Love
Kathy ❤️

Hey Kathy ( what a lovely name)

Thank you so much for finally commenting here😊.I know its a bit too much...but this makes me go like dis😆.

I'm ready to take the blame😉...if dis humble story is keeping you hooked😊

Will update soon.

Tapasi

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WhtinAname

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Posted: 7 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: paayaal
WT!!! I missed an update again!! real life!!😲
Anyways...I luff Ali!! Hez just sooo adorable!! You are back! Been pretty busy lately. Ali is adorable han? More or less than Neil?😆

Not only did he recognize Neilz feelings, he voiced the same to Avni too!! He also is interested in Richa...she just needs to 'notice' him & she will no longer be this unintentional 3rd angle between Neil & Avni!! Afterall what are bestfriends for? They always see things for what they are before you do.And Avni needed to hear this insight

I think Ali will be the catalyst that'll bring the change in AvNeilz relationship dynamics!! I dnt believe in catalysts as such.Honestly Ali just had a cameo here...initially.Now I hv some other ideas for him.

I hope these 2 wake up soon in regards to the their feelings for each other...I mean he talks to her like he has some sort of haq on her & she lets him...y don't they realize that!!They will ,they will.Hv some patience.Its a short story... so hopefully you dnt hv to wait for long.

Whatever he says makes her overreact & do & say things she normally wouldn't!!Exactly.He has a impact on her.

Can't wait for next part...

Heya Paayal.

You are back with your awesome review.

Love dt you are excited about it.

I need to wrap dis up soon or I'm gonna end up dragging it😆

Till den you keep reading dis...even whn you dnt like it, deal?

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Zara_Imam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#156

Yuck I hate busy life! Blame my life, it forced me to miss 2 amazing updates by u

Avni should have punched Neil oops doodh wale bhaiyaa for disturbing her sleep😆 but I understand she's not me!

Awwe Avni still remembers that Neil loves black coffee. This girl must have done phd in pretending things😆 she gave such a lame excuse... but that makes me fall for Avni all the more

Double date!!!!! Yayay🥳

Neil is so synonymous to Sherlock Holmes over here... His Q/A session is endless... kahan se lata hai banda itne saare sawaal😆

Aww I love Avni-Ali's friendship... it's priceless!

Oh yes! Fake bf! I knew she was pretending..now who will save her from Neil's hawk eyes *evil grin* Tapasi Avni ko mat bachana usne hamare super cop ke ankhon mein dhul jhok ne ki koshish ki hai... janta maaf nahi karegi😆

Fair n handsome🤣 I badly cracked up here. I never knew those products really worked😆

U know I'm really wondering kaun kiski date hai ek taraf Ali Richa par besharmo ki tarah dolle daal raha hai aur dusri taraf Neil is not leaving Avni with his army of questions😆

Ali❤️ he understood the vibes Avni didn't get... He is truly a catalyst

Neil brings out the real Avni everytime.. she doesn't behave like herself when she's with him... and both of them do something to my heart that I behave like crazy!

Jealous Neil is such a treat to read😆

The fifth chappy is my fav till now... I was literally laughing so much reading it that my roomie kicked me out of the room and still I'm laughing shamelessly😆

Can't wait for the next Tapasi😃

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WhtinAname

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Posted: 7 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: Zara_Imam
Yuck I hate busy life! Blame my life, it forced me to miss 2 amazing updates by u No probs😊
Avni should have punched Neil oops doodh wale bhaiyaa for disturbing her sleep😆 but I understand she's not me! Good Lord you punch people who wake u up😆 ; I just scream at dem😆
Awwe Avni still remembers that Neil loves black coffee. This girl must have done phd in pretending things😆 she gave such a lame excuse... but that makes me fall for Avni all the more Yes is cute that way.She just blurts out the next thing dt comes to her mind
Double date!!!!! Yayay🥳
Neil is so synonymous to Sherlock Holmes over here... His Q/A session is endless... kahan se lata hai banda itne saare sawaal😆 I blame Avni for bringing out the Sherlock in him.
Aww I love Avni-Ali's friendship... it's priceless! Ya dey are bffs❤️
Oh yes! Fake bf! I knew she was pretending..now who will save her from Neil's hawk eyes *evil grin* Tapasi Avni ko mat bachana usne hamare super cop ke ankhon mein dhul jhok ne ki koshish ki hai... janta maaf nahi karegi😆 Aisa kya? Dnt worry Avni ki baari bhi aayegi😆
Fair n handsome🤣 I badly cracked up here. I never knew those products really worked😆 Thnk God you did😳.Nai toh mere comedy ki comedy ban jati.
U know I'm really wondering kaun kiski date hai ek taraf Ali Richa par besharmo ki tarah dolle daal raha hai aur dusri taraf Neil is not leaving Avni with his army of questions😆 Double date ke fayde😆
Ali❤️ he understood the vibes Avni didn't get... He is truly a catalyst Avni tubelight hai na.Usse jalne mein time lagta hai aur thoda dusron ka efforts bhi lgta hai.
Neil brings out the real Avni everytime.. she doesn't behave like herself when she's with him... and both of them do something to my heart that I behave like crazy! I love the crazy you.
Jealous Neil is such a treat to read😆
The fifth chappy is my fav till now... I was literally laughing so much reading it that my roomie kicked me out of the room and still I'm laughing shamelessly😆 what!!!!!!😆.I got you thrown out of the room.😆.Sorry😆
Can't wait for the next Tapasi😃

Zara

Such a big and cute and amazing review.

Totally loved it.Still smiling like an idiot reading it.

Thank you so much 😊

Alwys look forwrd to ur crazy words.

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Nivedita

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Posted: 7 years ago

#158

There I go for reserving again. Maaf kar do behen. *kaan pakadke wala sorry*. Thursday evening ke intezaar mein...

Unres

Totally in love with this chapter, I can call this one as the most favorite among all. So my guess was correct, Avni does not have any boy friend *happy dance*. Ali is absolutely adorable, a mixture of brother, a true friend and of course the biggest flirt round the town. I love him, apart from Neil who is the numero uno of my heart. You are going to retain him, right? Can sense a cute love story between him and Richa, if you hold him back.

Neil is beginning to feel something called jealousy seeing Avni and Ali together. Woh maane ya na maane she is the only one who can turn him on at any situation. Waiting for them to realize the attraction they have towards each other.

Love,

Nivi

P.S. Today's episode has pissed me off so much, couldn't concentrate properly on AvNeil fight scenes and the evening one. Tum T.V. par dekh rahi ho kya?

Edited by Aphrodite_NV - 7 years ago

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WhtinAname

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Posted: 7 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV
There I go for reserving again. Maaf kar do behen. *kaan pakadke wala sorry*. Thursday evening ke intezaar mein...
Love,
Nivi

Tum ek aur baari sorry bologi na... I'll ban you.from here

Just reserve it and leave it.Fill it when you get time.

I'll even understand if you cmmnt later.Chill😊

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: drbeth

Heya Paayal.
You are back with your awesome review.
Love dt you are excited about it.
I need to wrap dis up soon or I'm gonna end up dragging it😆
Till den you keep reading dis...even whn you dnt like it, deal?

Hi Tapasi,

Yep, lifez a bit busy these days...I ve so much to do & all I do is procastinate!! 😆😆

Ofc m excited abt it...therez no way m not gonna like this story unless u pull a 'NK CV' on us!!!😉

I love fast paced stories...therez no dragging of plot & I get to read the end without forgetting what the story is about!

I'll try to be regular!😳

Love,

Payal.