AvNeil SS : The Perfect Stranger , Epilogue 2 updated (10/5) pg 78 - Page 18

Originally posted by: Amayrasharma18

Hey..Tapsi.!! Hope u r doing well :)
Just caught up with the three parts in a go...and absolutely loved 'em all..!! As i had already mentioned the story has its own charm...i really enjoy it while reading..!! The plot is simple yet hatke..!! 😆 Absolutely loving the characters here..!! So..Ali and Richa..? 😆 Especially i m absolutely loving the conversations amongst Neil and Avni..they seem to be realistic and the humor element and bickering just adds to its beauty..!! Neil being fully behind Avni's boyfriend matter and feeling uneasy in the end when she actually ends up bringing the one was adorable 😛 He caught up her lie...i wanted him to find out a little later we would have seen some jealousy brewing...!! But even though he did...he still felt the uneasiness..so it did that for me..!! 😆 That Fair and Lovely part was hilarious :) And that dialogue which he said about not bothering about his good boy image but her was just beautiful :) The morning scene was also well described..!!Loved that all..!!

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Yay me first I think.Yes yes u are😆

Evening adventures with unique girl and perfect dream boy. Loved it very much.Perfect dream boy😆.Han ab Neil toh bas dreams mein hi exist karta hai.sigh!!!

What! he doesn't know what to do with the ring and pendent and still forced her to select them . I think he was selecting for her. Bebe and avni conversations are always a treat to watch. Their comic timing and banter is what we loved in the starting days of avneil marriage. Ok so I can't say much here.But the ring was meant for Riya only.What I meant was after he returned frm the shop he wasn't sure abt it anymore.

Ye richa wala angle kab haters yaar. Agar Neil ko avni pasand hai aur wo usse Milne ke bhaagne dhoondhta hai to phir batata kyun nahi.Batayega.Hv some patience.Sab kuch abhi ho jaega toh story aage kaise jaegi?

I think bebe understood that Neil likes avni so that direct question .No no.Bebe just liked her.So ainvayi try karliya.

Enough of my banter but I loved the chappy so much that can't help praising it.

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

loved it

update soon

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Fantastic update

Love it

Originally posted by: Amayrasharma18

Lovely update...Tapasi While reading this one ...i became so Nostalgic..!! Reminded me of the good old days - their jewellery shop visit...especially that mirror scene..!! How good was the show back then..missing the happy times (*sigh*)..!!Heya.You knw wht whn I had initially thought of dis scene I hadn't realised d connection.But when I finally wrote this down, I too felt nostalgic.I miss those days of the show...I was madly in love wid NK then.
Anyways coming to this ... U penned it down beautifully...i loved the whole sequence in the shop !! Especially the part where she stretched her fingers wearing a ring in each one and Neil capturing the carefree moment..was my favourite..!! 👏 And ofcourse the 'Lit' mirror scene with a 'Morning Star' pendent..was very well written...really i loved the way u described the scene beautifully !! Btw..i doubt had he really bought that pendent for Richa ( i m not even sure for the ring too ! LOL ) 😆 The drive to jewellery shop was awesome with the hearty nok-jhok and teasing (Miss Blackbelt LOL) Thank you so very much for saying that.I wasn't able to assess if I was successful in potraying the scene like I imagined it.But now I'm relieved aftr reading ur review.

^_^
Bebe was as usual adorable here..!! The hospital scene was also good..!! And Avni's monlogue about Neil and Bebe was also nice..!! The dialogue-writing ..! I really loved the conversations b/w Bebe and Avni ( Neil aur Avni ki toh favourite hain hi 😳 ) Bebe's question about neil was on the point 😛 Neil's teasing was as usual adorable esp that Bachhe darr jaate honge part 😆 Lol where do u get these ideas from..!! Chalo..now i think should end up highliting all the details otherwise i may end up writing the whole page 😆 Eagerly waiting for the next...do update soonish plz :) Bebe is the most adorable of the lot.Though she has no idea abt whts going on between d two.But surely has developed a soft corner for Avni.
P.s. Sorry but I really wanted to mention this..so kindly bear after a long comment..!
One more thing which i love about this story is that it is really unpredictable and keeps me on my toes to see what next update would bring in my plate..!! U started It started with them meeting as strangers in a club then a date ( almost
😉 ) and then a twist of Neil being her friend's fiance ...the double date and now this cute 'new bond' with bebe ( hope i m corrrect ?!) The story is progressing earnestly..!! Every chapter has its simplicity and yet it brings curiousity about the next..!! U have Amazingly executed the whole plot ..Kudos to u!! Doesn't seem like u r new in this field..!!