AvNeil SS : The Perfect Stranger , Epilogue 2 updated (10/5) pg 78

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WhtinAname

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Posted: 7 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia
WhT a fun filled update tapasi it's so fresh I am falling in love more and more with this story your writing is amazing you managed to surprise me with every update 👏 👏
What I can say about this carefree AvNeil they are super fun hopefully this is a long FF and I get to enjoy your writing for a long time

Much love
Safia

Hey Safia.

You are falling in love wid my story...hayee I'm speechless.

Itni tareef😆...and here I was thinking I hv gone insane dt I'm writing it...pta nai kab jhoote padenge😆

Its a Short story and won't run long.Still I hope you like it till the end.

Thnx again yaar...you really made me smile.

Love

Tapasi.

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Nidhii

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Posted: 7 years ago

#132

Tapasi pls update de do Na . Waiting waiting. Ye boring Sunday nahi cut raha hai without the dose of avneil/ adiza.

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WhtinAname

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Posted: 7 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445
Tapasi pls update de do Na . Waiting waiting. Ye boring Sunday nahi cut raha hai without the dose of avneil/ adiza.

Ya updating in some time

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Shaiksafia

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Posted: 7 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: drbeth

Hey Safia.
You are falling in love wid my story...hayee I'm speechless.
Itni tareef😆...and here I was thinking I hv gone insane dt I'm writing it...pta nai kab jhoote padenge😆
Its a Short story and won't run long.Still I hope you like it till the end.
Thnx again yaar...you really made me smile.
Love
Tapasi.

i am sure I will love it 😊

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WhtinAname

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Posted: 7 years ago

#135

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Nidhii

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Posted: 7 years ago

#136

Again a short update .

Didn't expected this. Anyways the update was👏.

I was laughing hearing avni's reply that fair and lovely ka counterpart wala.

Neil is feeling uneasy seeing avni with Ali ye to bilkul show jaisa ho gaya matlab uski gaadi ab pyaar wale station pe arrive karne hi wali hai. Great going man. Itni jaldi dil de diya tune. Waise richa and Ali. Really. For Ali it is love at first sight. Or apna Neil Banda bhi kam nahi hai first meeting se ab tak avni ko decode karne me laga hua hai.

Truly awesome , mind blowing, superb update tapasi. Aakhir me avni ka boyfriend paida ho hi gaya ab wo brother jaisa hai jisme uski koi galti nahi na😆.

Update soon. With too much love

Nidhi.

Edited by sweetunidhi.445 - 7 years ago

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Shaiksafia

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Posted: 7 years ago

#137

tapasi superb 👏👏👏

rapid fire was super entertainingly especially Plastic surgery karwaya? and fair and lovely cracked me 😆😆😆

Mr question mark was enjoying looking at avni digging her own grave 😛

ali is friendship goals 👍🏼

overall an amazing update made me laugh so thank you😊

aur haan please aise jaldi updates kiya karo😉

much love

Safia

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sp13

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Posted: 7 years ago

#138

This chapter was so funny , tashan between Avneil especially the fair and lovely bit. Enjoying the story so far please update the next part .

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Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#139

Funny chapter😆

Loved it. Superb tapsi👏

Fair and lovely,plastic surgery. Wat was that? Hilarious.its cracked me.😆

Ahem ahem Ali Saab ki nishana Richa par. Now, problem solved.😉

Neil Pitne vala hai Richa se. Avni ke upar poore diyaan.interesting😛

Superb chapter. Ali avni Ko pakad li Neil ne.

Let's see what happen now.

Continue soon.

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srinithi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#140

Why is Neil so keen dig Avni's life . Obvious attraction hai . He is almost negligent of his to be fiance . So much jealousy seeing Ali-Avni comfortable with each other . Kuch jyada hi boo aa rahi hai .

Seriously he used fair and handsome to become fair 😆 Bahot bakwas tha . Neil toh gaya 😆

Ali is more interested in Neil's fiance 😆 Is he flirty types ?