AvNeil SS : The Perfect Stranger , Epilogue 2 updated (10/5) pg 78 - Page 15

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Posted: 7 years ago
This was a pretty fast update tapasi!and a loonngg one too😆
Thanks for updating this fast😆

So the bf is ali😆i liked how the double date went😊

Neil was so curious about her..aha..the pull is getting stronger as days go by😉

I liked the fair and lovely talk..it shows tapasi also has humour in her😆

Ali and avni are friendship goals😊

Are you planning to continue the date in the next part or move on to a different scenario in the next update??😃

I wish the next update has some romance or spice in it😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Again a short update .sorry abt dt.

Didn't expected this. Anyways the update was👏.Thank you😊
I was laughing hearing avni's reply that fair and lovely ka counterpart wala.Thank God for dt.I didn't knw if my humour would get through to you guys.
Neil is feeling uneasy seeing avni with Ali ye to bilkul show jaisa ho gaya matlab uski gaadi ab pyaar wale station pe arrive karne hi wali hai. Great going man. Itni jaldi dil de diya tune. Waise richa and Ali. Really. For Ali it is love at first sight. Or apna Neil Banda bhi kam nahi hai first meeting se ab tak avni ko decode karne me laga hua hai. Neil is sure headed towards the love station.As for Ali he just finds Richa attractive...dts all.And he just plays a cameo in this story.
Truly awesome , mind blowing, superb update tapasi. Aakhir me avni ka boyfriend paida ho hi gaya ab wo brother jaisa hai jisme uski koi galti nahi na😆.Ab boyfriend ko toh aana hi tha na Avni be bola jo tha😆

Update soon. With too much love

Nidhi.


Thank you so much Nidhi for those words of appreciation.Helps me to continue writing dis story.
Really appreciate it.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

tapasi superb 👏👏👏 thank you😊

rapid fire was super entertainingly especially Plastic surgery karwaya? and fair and lovely cracked me 😆😆😆 So I take it I didn't fail miserably at writing something funny😆
Mr question mark was enjoying looking at avni digging her own grave 😛 aha he was loving it.
ali is friendship goals 👍🏼 Totally.No AvNeil story is complete widout him.
overall an amazing update made me laugh so thank you😊

aur haan please aise jaldi updates kiya karo😉

much love
Safia

Hey Safia
Thank you so much.
So happy you enjoyed this and dt I could make you laugh.

Jaldi updates...yes I'll work on dt😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sp13

This chapter was so funny , tashan between Avneil especially the fair and lovely bit. Enjoying the story so far please update the next part .

Thank you so much.
So happy to know dt u r enjoying my story and dt I'm able to bring a smile on your face😊
Appreciate you taking time to cmmnt here.
Thnk you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanx a lot😊
You never forget to cmmnt😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rilsaf

Funny chapter😆

Loved it. Superb tapsi👏 thank you 😊
Fair and lovely,plastic surgery. Wat was that? Hilarious.its cracked me.😆 It was Avni saying anything to prove her point😆
Ahem ahem Ali Saab ki nishana Richa par. Now, problem solved.😉 He show nai hai na so Ali is free to like any1😆
Neil Pitne vala hai Richa se. Avni ke upar poore diyaan.interesting😛 Ab wo Niagara kya kare jb uska dil hi Avni pe fisla ja rha hai.
Superb chapter. Ali avni Ko pakad li Neil ne. Yep
Let's see what happen now.
Continue soon.


Thank you so much Safana.
These comments make me smile throughout d day.
Appreciated.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Why is Neil so keen dig Avni's life . Obvious attraction hai . He is almost negligent of his to be fiance . So much jealousy seeing Ali-Avni comfortable with each other . Kuch jyada hi boo aa rahi hai .Yes yes something is definitely burning inside Mr Khanna😆.He is undeniably attracted to her.

Seriously he used fair and handsome to become fair 😆 Bahot bakwas tha . Neil toh gaya 😆 Nai nai sach nai tha.She was saying anything.And he obviously saw through her lies just didn't let her know it.
Ali is more interested in Neil's fiance 😆 Is he flirty types ? Kinda.He just finds her attractive.Dts it.


Thank you so much Sri.
Feels gud to know you are enjoying it.
😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: darsh333

This was a pretty fast update tapasi!and a loonngg one too😆 See I kept my word.

Thanks for updating this fast😆

So the bf is ali😆i liked how the double date went😊 obviously Avni doesn't have a boyfriend and it was a gud cameo for Ali.

Neil was so curious about her..aha..the pull is getting stronger as days go by😉 And its gonna increase😉

I liked the fair and lovely talk..it shows tapasi also has humour in her😆 you didn't think I had it in me😭

Ali and avni are friendship goals😊 Always and forever.

Are you planning to continue the date in the next part or move on to a different scenario in the next update??😃 New one.

I wish the next update has some romance or spice in it😉 Done! If not in the next one I'll make sure its der in the one aftr dt.

Thnk you so much Darshana😊
With my fast updates, you are becoming a fast reader too😛
I have noted down your suggestion.Hope I do justice to dt.Wait for 1-2 chapters.
Thanx for the amazing review.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Superb update

Love it

Thanx a lot😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fabulous and lovely update tapasi...
Ali is busy drooling over richa and neil is busy playing rapid fire round...
Very entertaining ...

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