Falling For The Enemy-(16 Parts, Complete)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ever wondered how Neil and Avni went from enemies to lovers?
Well find out in the prequel Falling For The Enemy!

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"Urgh, he drives me crazy, I hate him" Avni muttered
Naina laughed "Isnt that a good thing, he kind of is who youre meant to kill"

Avni rolled her eyes "No, you dont understand, everytime im about to shoot him, he does this really weird thing"

Naina raised her brow "What does he do"
"Tells me im beautiful "

Naina laughed, then paused "Oh wait youre not joking, well maybe hes saying it to distract you"
Avni nodded "Yeah, yeah that must be it"


From enemies to lovers, from the beginning!
Updates: Coming Soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: vaish_patel

YAYYY!! More nok-jhok!!!! 😆

Yayyy😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So here is part one of Falling For The Enemy!
I watched Maine Pyaar Kiya again today and the song Kahe Toh Se Sajna has influenced this part massively.

Right, sorry no more delay! Here we go!

Part 1-

Avni stood in her kitchen, picking up a dart she threw it towards Neil's face.
Her fathers words rung heavily in her head

"You are raised in a family where nothing, not even your own family comes before your job, and your job when the time is right is to kill Neil Khanna, for revenge for what his father did to me"

Avni was but 6 years old when her father had first started to train her.
He died when she was 14 years old, from a heart attack.

But she would never forget his words, his teachings or the morals he had ingrained so deeply within her

Avni arrived at work an hour later
She was just grabbing a drink from outside, her eyes on the workers

Her eyes stopped on one man facing away from her
His muscles clenched everytime he lifted the hammer
The sweat dripping down his arms made him glow

He was good looking, and if she had time in her life she would get his number
But she didnt

The man turned to face her
Like he knew she was watching
He smirked
Oh she knew that cheeky smile

Neil Khanna
Her worst enemy
Jogging over to her he swung the hammer and axe over his shoulders

"Alright there beautiful"
Avni looked around
"Who are you talking to"

"You of course, I dont see any other beautiful women here Avni"
The way he said her name sent an involuntary shiver down her spine

"What are you doing here"
"Well, working, spying on you, got to be ready for when you pounce my little tigeress"

Avni rolled her eyes "Im not your little anything"
"Okay my big tigeress then"
Avni rolled her eyes again

"Youre an idiot"
Neil nodded
"That I know, but whos the real idiot here, me or you, because you still havent killed me"

It made her angry, that he would bring that up
Turning swiftly she stormed away

Leaning back he whistled "I hate to see you go but I loveee to watch you leave"

So! Thats part 1!
Do let me know what you think!
Okay, so some of you asked me to write an epilouge for Sleeping With The Enemy
And I havent yet

Because then that means that its over
And if you remember she needed to get a pregnancy test but never did
Theres still a lot of unanswered questions I feel need atleast a short story for

So if you bare with me, as soon as this story is finished, I will write Marrying The Enemy
Or if youd rather just get it over and done with now
I will write an epilouge, so ill leave it in your hands
Edited by Mayakhan12 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey...Maya...this part was literally amazing...!! Loving the attitude of Neil and Avni here..!! Eagerly waiting for next part..!! Really can't wait for this story to unfold..!! Do update soonish..!!
P.s. Plzz continue with optn 1 i.e. Marrying the Enemy..!! It would be wayyy more interesting than the epilogue..!! Would love to see will they be happily ever after or their enemies would again create some troubles..;)!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2-
Avni was working out, turning up her music she began to sing along

"Yaarian go ahead and leave it wont make a difference because I cant wait for you to see, with you and me its different"

Neil leaned against the door frame, arms crossed he couldnt wipe the grin off his face as he watched her

She was something else, bossy, stubborn, wanted him dead for a reason he did not know but beautiful, kind and he enjoyed teasing her

Neil walked forward, yanking her arm he pulled her off the running machine
She screamed as she fell into his arms

Her head knocking into his chin
"Jheeze Avni, be careful"
"What do you mean be careful, you just pulled me off my machine, youre not even meant to be in here"

"I can be wherever I want to be, whos going to stop me"
Avni shoved him back
"Me"

Avni twisted her hips, jumping she kicked him in the chest
Her knee hit his nose as she pulled his head down

The crack was sickening
Neil smiled back at her, blood pouring down his face
"Finish it Avni, my gun has a silencer"

Avni's hands shook
She had no idea why she always got this far but then stopped

"Hey Avni"
"What" she scowled
"Youre beautiful"

Growling she threw the gun at him
"Stop calling me that"
Neil walked closer to her

"Why, does it bother you"
Avni rolled her eyes

She wasnt used to getting attention from males unless they wanted one thing
It seemed with Neil he just genuinley enjoyed annoying her

She was meant to hate him, but over time that had simmered down
In this business it was hard to make friends

Her only friend was Naina, yet it was Neil's face she saw every night before she closed her eyes

"Yes it bothers me because youre my enemy now stay away from me"
As she turned around, Neil tugged her back by her hair

His breath now tickling the hairs on her neck
"Has anyone ever called you beautiful before and meant it"
Avni chose not to answer that

"Because I mean it Avni"
With that he was gone

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amayrasharma18

Hey...Maya...this part was literally amazing...!! Loving the attitude of Neil and Avni here..!! Eagerly waiting for next part..!! Really can't wait for this story to unfold..!! Do update soonish..!!
P.s. Plzz continue with optn 1 i.e. Marrying the Enemy..!! It would be wayyy more interesting than the epilogue..!! Would love to see will they be happily ever after or their enemies would again create some troubles..;)!!

Hey, thank you! I have updated part 2!
Ah thank you im glad you agree:-)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 3-
Avni had finished her training, walking outside to her car, she saw Neil leaning against it

"Just cant get enough can you"
Neil laughed
"Damn right I can't, anyway you have to come with me"

Grabbing her wrist he dragged her to underneath a tree
"What are you"
Neil put his hand over her mouth
"Shush just look"

Avni watched Neev giving Naina a piggyback
"Awww" she heard Neil mutter
Avni rolled her eyes

"Theyre not meant to be friends, theyre on seperate teams"
Neil pointed to Neev and Naina
Who were now kissing

"Theyre not just friends"
Avni's jaw dropped
Neil smirked
"That will be us soon"

Avni glared "In your dreams"
"A lot more happens in my dreams with you"
Avni couldn't help but blush at that

Suddenly she was being dragged over to Neev and Naina
"Ah shit you caught me Avni, look listen you love me, I love you, please dont report this"

"Stop being so dramatic, im not going to, but do you have any idea how dangerous this is"
She watched as Neil and Neev high fived

"Hello Neil, this is a serious matter"
Neil shook his head
"Leave the lovebirds alone"

Picking her up by her waist, he dragged away a kicking and screaming Avni
Neev turned to Naina

"Theyve got more sexual tension than a nun and a priest"
Naina laughed
"He likes her doesnt he"

Neev nudged his shoulder against Naina's
"Not as much as I like you"
Naina blushed


Neil finally put Avni down
"Are you crazy"
Neil winked
"Crazy for you"

Avni stood back
Her foot slipped
Neil tried to grab her
But they both ended up falling down the hill

After they stopped rolling
Avni was led ontop of Neil
Tucking her hair behind her ear
"This is a very compromising position"

"Oh shut up"
Glowering at him
She tried to get up
But he yanked her back down

"What do you think youre doing"
"Holding you"
"Well stop it"
"Why"
"Because I dont want to be held"

Neev and Naina looked down at them laughing
Avni jumped up
Neil pouted
"She attacked me"

Avni gasped
"I did not, we fell"
Neil turned to Neev "Shes trying to get in my pants Neev, the way she looks at me, God I feel so naked"

Avni raised her foot, kicking him
He knelt over
"Whats your obsession with my manhood"

"What manhood" she bit back
Storming off

The trio laughed behind her

So thats part 3!
I hope you like it
Im sure youre all wondering why Naina wasnt in part 2

Well all will be explained soon
Naina and Neev have quite a big part in this story

Do let me know what you think

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 4-
Avni couldn't sleep, her thoughts on Naina and Neev and another N that would not be named

Huffing she turned onto her side and grabbed her phone

Unknown: Look I get it
Avni: Get what and who is this?

Unknown: Your faviourate bad boy and I get your madly in love with me
Avni smirked

Avni: Neil, is that you?
Neil: Bingo, for a second I got worried another bad boy had stolen your heart

Avni: No bad boy has stolen my heart, why would that worry you?
Neil: Oh Avni, you really are cluless arent you

Avni wasnt sure why she felt so hurt by that comment
Her eyes were teary
Sighing she was about to put her phone back when it buzzed again

Neil: Avni, dont ignore me
Neil: Have I upsett you
Neil: Avni, I was only joking
Neil: Avni this silence is killing me, youre not clueless

Avni: You havent upsett me
Neil: Then why did you ignore me
Avni: Because I dont see the point in this conversation, we're enemies and my only aim is to kill you, so stop messaging me like we're best friends

Neil: Ouch, that hurt
Avni: Good
She didnt mean that

Not even slightly
But she was tired of feeling things she didnt understand

Neil: If im your enemy, why arent I dead yet? Also, stop saying you're my enemy, I never said that

Avni: Because you keep distracting me
Neil: With my charming looks?
Avni: No

Neil: Badboy vibes?
Avni: No
Neil: Boyish charm?
Avni: No

Neil: Then what?
Avni: You keep lying to me
Neil:???

Avni: Calling me beautiful
Neil: Oh Avni, if only you could see yourself through my eyes, you miss just how many people look at you the way I do

Avni: What do you mean?
Neil: When I call you beautiful, im not lying

Clear to see Neil was always head over heels for Avni
Wonder how long she can ignore her feelings?
Comments always appreciated
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nobody can resist the charm of Neil Freaking Khanna!! Not even Avni! 😆 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: vaish_patel

Nobody can resist the charm of Neil Freaking Khanna!! Not even Avni! 😆 😳

Very true😳

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