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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 5-
Avni was tired. She had a long day at work and yet another mission.
Seduce and kill, like it was that damn easy

Sipping on her cocktail, she eyed her victim
Walking over slowly, she listened into their conversation

Avni looked into the hallway, Neil looked to be in a heated argument with somebody
Curiosity got the better of her and she approached the hallway

"Ha, if I were you id just get Avni alone, have your way with her and be done, its clear she feels something, use it to your advantage "
Avni had to hold in her gasp as Neil punched the man in the face

"Dont you ever speak about her like that again"
He walked away, fast
He had stuck up for her
What on earth was she doing?


Running after him
She watched as Neil pulled his blazer off
Knocking on the door she waited
"Just go away I dont want to talk"

Neil then turned
"Avni, sorry I didnt know it was you"
She smiled
"Can I come in"

Neil nodded
Avni looked at his bloody hand
"Got into a fight already"
Neil smirked
"Just some asshole with no respect"

Avni really wasnt sure how to go about this
She was used to shouting at him, beating him up

But never ever thanking him
She gulped as the back of his hand, stroked her cheek
"Why are you here Avni"

"Well I"
She stopped talking as his eyes fell on her lips
His thumb pulled her bottom lip down
Her mouth was dry as he inched closer

Her cheeks flushed red, she had no idea how to kiss
She had never done it before
Wait

She wanted to kiss him?
"Im trying so hard to control myself Avni"
She shuddered
"Why"
He rubbed his stubble on her cheek making her jump

"You have no idea how long I have wanted to kiss you for"
She wanted to tell him to kiss her
But she couldnt
He sighed

"Are you here to try and kill me again"
"No"
Neil looked shocked
"Then why"

"I I dont really know"
Neil smiled
"You cant get enough"
His thumb now stroked her cheek

His touch was distracting
Making her lose all sane thought
"I saw what you did to that guy and I know why"
"Oh really"

She nodded
"Then tell me why"
"Because he was rude, about me but I dont get why that would bother you"
He rubbed his nose against hers

"My clueless tigeress, you really dont know"
She shook her head
"I dont like people talking shit about people I care about"

She sucked in a breath
"You care about me"
"Why is that so hard to believe"

"Well because I"
She stopped, shaking her head
"Why do you keep trying to kill me"

"My father he um, told me I had to, to get revenge for what your father did"
"Killing me wouldnt get revenge, it would just hurt you, we can't let past issues ruin what we have"

"What do we have"
Neil shrugged
"Not a clue, but something, we have something"

Neil bent his head to the side
"Wait I dont know how to"
"Just follow my lead"

Pressing his lips to hers, she sighed
Gasping at his intrusion, he laughed before twirling his tounge around hers

The kiss made her dizzy
And light
And she couldnt believe her first kiss had been with her enemy

"Avni"
"Hm"
"You need to leave"

Avni looked sad "Why I thought"
Neil shook his head, cupping her face, he kissed her forehead
"If you stay, im not sure ill be able to just stop at kissing you"

Avni smiled "Oh"
Stepping back she looked down
"Ill uh, see you soon"
Neil nodded

"See ya Avni"

And theyve had their first kiss!
And he knows the truth!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Its so beautifully written...
just loved it...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ravinanaik

Its so beautifully written...
just loved it...

Hey, thank you so much!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kiranrathore

Awesome

Loved it
Plz uodate next

Thank you, I will updat soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
Part 6-
Naina sat holding a pillow to her chest
"Tell me everything"
Avni blushed

"Well, he stuck up for me, when this guy told him to use me"
Naina clapped her hands "Woooh"
"Then he well we kissed"

" oh wow, how was it"
Avni looked down
Naina got up
Grabbing her hands
"Oh come on, you cant keep me in the dark now"

"It was, amazing"
Naina squealed, hugging her
"So, so , what does this mean, are you guys together "

"No, it was just"
"Dont tell me its a one time thing, we've been through this before, hes a good guy and he clearly likes you"

Avni sighed "Okay, okay but what do I do, im meant to kill him, not kiss him"
"Well thats like me and Neev"

"What do you mean"
Naina held Avni's hand, "Look we cant be sure who we fall for or who we have a connection with, all we know is that someone will come into our life and make it all better, if hes that guy dont lose him"

Naina always had a way with words
Always knew how to make her feel better
"Plus, we can double date, now call him"

Avni picked up her phone, calling Neil she waited for him to pick up
"Avni, what do I owe the pleasure"

Naina signalled for her to put it on speaker
Avni was annoyed with herself
She had called him but had no idea what to say

"Well um, I"
Naina mouthed "How are you"
"How are you"

Neil chuckled "im good Avni, how are you"
Naina put her thumbs up
"Yes im good, I was just calling to uh"
Naina slapped her forehead with her hand

"To uh what" Neil sat back on the sofa, quite enjoying Avni being all embarassed
"Well I, hows your nose and hand"

"Broken and bruised but all is good"
Naina bit into the pillow to try to hide her laughter
"Oh well okay"
"Got anymore plans to beat me up"

Naina's eyes widened, shaking her head
"No Neil, I have none"
"Thats good, anyway I do have a job to do but I will call soon"
"Okay, have fun"

Neil smirked "Bye Avni, bye Naina"
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 7-
Avni was woken up when her phone rang
"You have to get to the base now, theres been an incident"

After waking Naina up, they rushed to base
Avni looked at the blood on the floor, the sirens loud in her ear

"Sir what"
Ducking back, she dropped to the floor as a bullet just missed her
"Neil Khanna and his team are here, finish him"

Neil had done all this? She knew she never should have trusted him
Avni ran around a corner
Someone smashed something on her head

Falling forward, she threw her head back and punched her assailant in the face
Grabbing a knife, she stuck it in the womans leg

"Tell me who sent you or ill pull the knife out"
The woman laughed and pointed behind her

Avni turned to face Neil
Blood was pouring down her face, dampening her hair

Before Avni could make a move she was pulled back, and her head was banged into the wall
Avni faltered but pulled out her gun

The woman behind her was now gone
"I never should have trusted you Neil, Khanna blood is full of betrayal"

Spitting blood out of her mouth she stepped forward
Avni slapped him around the face

"Avni, listen to me, i came to warn you, I dont want you to get hurt"
Neev and Naina ran in

"Guys we have to get out, theres a bomb"
Avni looked down at the fire on the floor now spreading
She wasnt sure where it had came from

Avni's hand trembled as she dropped the gun to the floor
Neil grabbed her
"You can kill me later, but youre not dying in here"

As the 4 ran out as fast as they could, they jumped to the floor as the bomb went off
Shattering everything to pieces

"She needs medical attention, look at her head"
With one last glare at Neil, her eyes rolled back
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 8-
This part of the story may be upsetting, please read with caution.
This part is differing between two places and the different things happening, again your comments always appreciated.


Avni sat in her bedroom, she had receieved medical attention but her head was still pounding

Neev sat on the sofa opposite her
"Neil keeps asking to speak to you"
"Well I dont want to speak to him"
She huffed

Naina walked out of the room as her phone rang
"Im coming for you Naina, how long did you think you could run away from your own father"

Naina dropped the phone, her whole body shaking
Wretching she ran into the bathroom

Neev put the phone down next to Avni
"Speak to him"
Avni threw the phone back at Neev
"No"

That night-
Avni had a mission, one she wasnt lookong forward to
She knew Neil would be there

"Naina, you coming "
"Yeah hold on, ill meet you there"

Avni got into her car, making her way to the party hall

"Meet me at the mansion"
Naina wiped her tears at the text from her father

A crash from the living room, made her run there
A vase was smashed onto her head as she fell to the floor

She dropped her phone

Avni got out of her car, her eyes on Neil as she shoved past him
He grabbed her arm

"Stop ignoring me, I saved your life"
"I should never have trusted you, now move I have a mission to do"

Avni pushed past him

Looking around for the hooded figure she sighed
Going to text Naina, she had a voicemail from her

All she heard was a smash, a scream, then a laugh
Trying to call back, she got no reply

She ran towards Neil
Then stopped

She wouldnt take his help
She would finish this mission and then go and find Naina

She watched as the hooded figure spoke to a man that looked eerily like Naina's father
Pushing her earpiece in she sighed

She could hear them talking about some kind of fire
Then her eyes fell to the burning idol

She knew she was in the room with some kind of cult
Maybe Neil would know something

"Neil, do you know what their planning"
"To sacrifice those kids"

Avni nodded
"We need to distract and get them out of here"

Neil nodded "Wait for my signal, distract that man"

A woman was thrown onto the floor, her face was bloody and bruised
Her hands gripped the mud

Avni danced around a hooded man, wrapping a leg around his waist she dipped down

The woman on the floor, grabbed the mud, turned around and threw the mud in the mans face
The woman stood up

Wiping the mud from her face
Her eyes glimmered with anger
Naina.

Avni danced around the hooded figure, her eyes on the fire now escalating around them
She nodded at Neil who walked behind the fire

The hooded figure put his arm around Avni's waist
Throwing her head down she shook her hair
Dropping down the man she turned, smiled and danced with him again

A man stood outside of the mansion, his eyes looked up at Naina's back
Throwing a match down he watched as the flames grew
Reflecting in his eyes

Naina grabbed the pitchfork, hitting the man in the stomach with it
She bashed him on the head

Jumping over the body she ran down the buildings burning stairs
Her eyes fell on her father

Jumping out of the building she landed on the floor
She watched from behind as more men chased her

Running as fast as she could she hid behind a tree in the dark jungle
Avni watched as Neil pushed the burning idol down

Stretching out her hand she grabbed Neil's and they ran out of the building

Naina heaved a breath as she looked into the water infront of her
Suddenly a man grabbed her
"Got her"

Pulling her , they tied her to a tree
The heat of the fire from infront of her, made her body burn
The ropes cutting her skin

Her eyes were teary as she came face to face with her father

Avni and Neil rushed to get the people out of the burning building as fast as they could


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 9-
Neev ran over to Neil and Avni
"Its Naina, theyre going to burn her alive, her dad just called me"

Avni stood forward "Where is she"
Neev pointed to the forest
Running as fast as they could

Avni stopped as she saw Naina's bracelet on the floor
Picking it up she slid it into her pocket

"She has to be somewhere close"
Shouting out her name, they walked around

Neil stopped "Whats that"
Avni and Neev followed his gaze to the flames, a tree began to fall

Neil grabbed Neev and Avni pulling them out the way
The tree crashed to the ground

Neev ran forward to the tree, there was a body underneath it
Smashed underneath the tree it was hard to see who it was as the body was also burnt

Neev looked at the ring on the finger, the same on he had given to Naina
"Naina" he whispered
Neil pushed the tree with Avni

Neev looked away, wretching at her body
"Shit, shit"
Avni dropped to her knees

"Im so sorry Naina"
Turning to Neil, she sobbed in his arms
Neil stroked her hair
Neev shook his head

"Ill kill him, I swear"
Memories filled Avni's head of Naina

The first day they had met, how Naina had cheered her up when she was down
How they danced, trained and laughed together

"Ill speak to you guys soon, I have to go "
Neil nodded
"Im here if you need me man"

Neev nodded
"Come on lets get out of here"
Avni shook her head

"We cant just leave her here"
"Avni come on, theres nothing we can do"

Bending down she squeezed Naina's hand
"I love you Naina"
Standing up again she followed Neil out of the forest

So a short one, but this is why Naina isnt in part 2!
Theres also another twist coming when we find out who Naina's father is!

Can anyone guess? He was in Sleeping With The Enemy !

Do let me know what you think!


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow... poor naina ... What a way to go...looking forward to how avneilmreconnect, terrific job
...is Remi the dad?😲 ... Jason doesn't seem to fit tht role to me...
Edited by RomComFan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Totally gripping..!! Do update soon buddy..!!

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