Falling For The Enemy-(16 Parts, Complete) - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Amayrasharma18

Totally gripping..!! Do update soon buddy..!!

Thank you! I will update today
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 10-
It had been a week since Naina's death.
Neev had been missing for a week

Neil sat infront of Avni "Please eat something"
"Why do you care"
"Come on Avni, you know why"

He didnt mean to shout, he knew right now she was fragile
Neil pulled her to him, as she cried soundlessly again

"I hate it when you cry, its like someone is stabbing me right here"
Avni watched as he pointed to his heart

Leaning up she kissed him
"Woah, Avni what are you doing"
She looked down
Neil's thumb traced circles on her waist

"I want to, you dont realise how much I want to, but not like this, I dont want to take advantage of you"
Neil sighed as she continued to cry

"f**k" he muttered before pressing his lips to hers
Avni pulled him closer
Neil knew he couldnt ignore her forever

He wasnt sure why it hurt him so much to see her cry
Avni pulled back, breathless

Dropping herself on the bed, she put her head in her hands
"Naina was the only family I had left, now shes gone I just, like I get it, with the industry we work in, but she wanted so much more from life, she deserved it, you know"

Avni sighed, Neil rubbed her back
"Like, life takes away, thats never been in our hands, ive always believed everything happens for a reason, but I look back and I think, she wanted to do so much, she was always so happy no matter what her past was, she was "
Avni paused

"Inspirational " Neil suggested
Avni nodded
"Why is life so unfair"
Neil shrugged

"God puts things on your path he feels you can handle, what you do with this pain now, you let it destroy you or you use it to make the world a little better"
Neil smiled softly
"Avni why are you looking at me like that"

"Im so greatful for all your help, I know ive not been fair on you and I would really like to be friends"

"Friends, I dont know if thats enough Avni, I know you feel it to"
Avni blushed
"Are you asking me out Neil Khanna"

"Im asking you out if your answer is yes, if your answer is no then im joking"
He waited quite impatiently for her answer


Just like I'm going to make you guys wait!




Na, im kidding

"Okay, then youre asking me out"
Neil couldnt help the grin that took over his face as he kissed her



Apologies for no updates over the past 2 days, I had a lot of revision to do for an exam I have tomorrow
So I wrote this and one other part for each other story I had, (I have 6) at 1am in the morning, saturday!

Wish me luck on my exam! If I pass I will update, if not then I probably wont
I have tried to keep all my stories I have updated today as joyous as possible because I have kept you all waiting.

Much love to you all! X
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 11-
Avni sat behind Neil, wearing his shirt, her hands were massaging his shoulders as he slipped his socks on

"Avni, come on, give me my shirt I have to go to work"
Avni slid back off the bed
Standing in the corner of the room

Pushing her finger through one of the holes, she turned her head to the side
Her eyes glinting with humour

"Come and get it"
Neil stood up, turning to face her
Nearly grabbing her
She ran away
Giggling

His hand wrapped around her waist
Tugging her to him
"You are something else Avni"

Turning in his arms she threw her arms around his neck
"Do you have to go"
Neil nuzzled her neck

"Maybe, maybe not"
Avni reached behind Neil
Grabbing her spray
She sprayed some on herself

Throwing her head back she laughed
"What do you think"
His nose went to her neck
"God you smell so good"

All at once, she was against the wall, her legs around his waist and his lips on her neck
Her fingers in his hair as she moaned

After another intense make out session
Both Neil and Avni were ready to go
Pushing her earring in she smiled

Later On-

Avni was running down some stairs, she was grabbed from behind
Hitting them around the face with her elbow

She jumped over the stair railing
She was grabbed again and her face was pushed into the railing
Avni tried to kick back

Her assailant grabbed her hair, shoving her already injured head into the staircase she passed out

Neil ran around the place looking for her
Her red high heeled shoe lay on one of the stairs
Usually he wouldve laughed at something like this

And its similarity to Cinderella
But this matter involved Avni
And that was one of the most serious kind of matters


Double update because I have kept you guys waiting so long!
From the next chapter onward, things will get a lot darker so please read with caution!


Also, check out this website- https://cattybilli.com/2018/01/06/avneil-ff-the-bodyguard/comment-page-1/#comment-452
My FF The Bodyguard has been put on there (with permission) and theres all these cute Gifs with it!
This site posts lots of spoilers and written updates so do check it out!

Also a shout out to the person behind this site, this is one of the sweetest things I have ever seen and am always so greatful for all my readers! I love you guys!


Also im a goldie! Yay!

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congo on the Goldie promotion... Wow...avni is in trouble, can't wait for the rescue - good luck on ur exam
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Congo on the Goldie promotion... Wow...avni is in trouble, can't wait for the rescue - good luck on ur exam

Thank you!
Thank you!
The rescue will be very high drama
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 12-
Avni's head was pushed under the water again, her body wracked underneath the man's hand
She was thrown back, landing on the floor

"Why are you doing this" Avni shouted, spluttering from the water in her system
The hooded figure stroked her face with one finger making her flinch away

"Shh, dont cry, youll only make this worse for yourself"
Avni spat at the man
"You wont get away with this, Neil will find you and he will"

Pulling his hood back, the man chuckled "Now why would my own son come for me"
Avni's eyes glistened with unshed tears
Grabbing her chin, he made her look up at him

"Neil sent you to me sweetheart"
Avni shook her head
She wouldnt believe it
Not again

Neil walked around the room
"I dont care, f**king find her, I want Avni found and brought to me unharmed, if one single hair on her head is hurt, ill kill you"

Cutting the phone he pushed his hand through his hair roughly
"Where are you Avni"

Neil stood up, staring at his ringing phone
A video call came on
"Avni" he muttered

"My name is Avni and theres a bomb attatched to my waist, which will go off in 38 minutes unless the code is given for the construction of the red bomb, I am at"
Then she stopped
Her voice broke as she looked down

"Why are you doing this to me, I never did anything to you"
Neil felt helpess as the camera dropped to the floor and all he could hear was Avni's scream

The camera returned to her face "I am at Preston park, please come quickly"
The phone was cut off
The issue was Naina and Neev were the trackers

But one was dead, the other was missing
Neil sighed
He couldn't give that code it would make a war

Sighing he ran to his car
"Im coming Avni"

Do let me know your thoughts
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27
Wow..!! The story is becoming more n more gripping..!! Who is Neil's father btw..? Eagerly waiting for the rescue operation..!! Do update soonish..!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Amayrasharma18

Wow..!! The story is becoming more n more gripping..!! Who is Neil's father btw..? Eagerly waiting for the rescue operation..!! Do update soonish..!!

Hey, thank you!
All will be explained in the next chapter!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Amazing one
Wow it's totally outstanding
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Kmhcrazyfan

Amazing one

Wow it's totally outstanding

Hey! Thank you!

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