Learning How To Love And To Be Loved (24 Parts, Complete) - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
#51
Part 17-
Avni led on the cold floor, surely Neil hadn't just been acting

Pulling herself up she walked into the bathroom
As she looked at her fresh cuts and bruises she became very aware that a man like Neil would never want somebody like her

Neela's words went through her head, she wasn't sure how long she could stay safe for anymore

Dropping to the floor, she lifted up the scissors, pulling it across her skin, she watched the blood drip from her arm

Pushing her arm into her hair she sighed
"You're somebody's wife Avni, act like it" she muttered to herself


Walking outside, she saw Vidyut had gone
There was no point in running anymore
He would always find her

Banging on the door made her turn towards it
Pulling it open she saw a very angry Neil

"You are coming with me right now"
Avni pulled her hand back

"Please Neil, just leave me alone"
"Leave you alone, are you crazy"

Avni put her hand up "Vidyut told me everything, I know you're working for him"
Neil tried his very best to calm himself down

Grabbing her hands he looked her in the eye
"You think everything was fake, you felt it to, dont tell me you didn't, you know me Avni, dont let him get in your head"

Avni shoved him back "Enough, Enough Neil, I can't do this anymore "
Neil pushed her into the wall, pressing his lips to hers, his bodh curved into hers

Putting all of her anger into the kiss she pulled him closer
Eventually they fell apart, breathless
Neil kissed away Avni's tears

Her fists hit his chest "I hate you"
Neil held her closer "You have to trust me Avni , thats all I ask, im not him"

Avni paused for awhile then nodded
"You have to leave Neil"

"Not without you"
"But what if he finds us"

Neil shook his head "He wont, I promise"
Avni put her hand in his and walked out to the car with him

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Posted: 7 years ago
#52
I really want to read more, hope Avni leaves Vidyuth soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

I really want to read more, hope Avni leaves Vidyuth soon


I will update in the next 30 minutes! I have something really good planned for Vidyuth!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
Please update soon ...I'm too eager to know what happens next ...superb updates :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: radzshakti

Please update soon ...I'm too eager to know what happens next ...superb updates :)

Thank you! I will update now
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56
Hey Maya that was so sweet of u to write one part bcz of my request... and it was beautiful 😊 I so wish Avni and Neil enjoy and play together in rain onscreen... but aise ache khayal cvs ke dimaag mein kaise ayenge !
Anyways the next 2 parts were also too good... Thank god they both didn't misunderstand 😊 that's the beauty of their relationship...

Awaiting the next...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#57
Part 18-
Neil parked the car, Avni had been anxious throughout the whole journey

"We're here, you're safe now"
Getting out of the car they walked to the house

Neil sat Avni down
"Did you do this to yourself"
Avni nodded

Neil fetched the first aid box, cleaning up her cut arm, he bandaged it and pressed his lips to it

Neil cupped her face, standing her up, he took her to a mirror and sang to her

"tu itni khoobsurat hai
fida deedaar pe tere
mukammal ishq ho mera
zara sa pyaar to de de"

you are so beautiful,
I could die to see you..
may my love be complete,
(as in, it should reach its objective)
give me a little love..



Neil bent down, lifting her leg he placed her foot on his knee and put an anklet around her ankle, pressing a kiss to her foot, Avni stared down at him, slowly tears made its way down her face


"falak kadamon pe aa jhuke
haseen lamhaat wo de de
tere sang bheeg jaaun main
kabhi barsaat wo de de
tere bina jeena paDe
wo pal mujhe naa de"

let the sky come and bow in my feet,
give me such beautiful moments..
I should get drenched with you,
give me such a rain sometime..
just don't give me a moment
in which I have to live away from you.
.

Neil stood up, he kissed her on her forehead, then her cheeks, her nose, then her lips
Wiping away her tears he pushed her hair behind her ear

He signalled with his hands to smile, she giggled slightly and smiled

"tu itni khoobsurat hai
fida deedaar pe tere

ishq ki dastaan judaa hai meri
tu hi dono jahaan baakhuda hai meri
yaar mere sirf teri tishnagi lab pe mere"

the story of my love is different,
you are both my worlds, I swear to God..
just the thirst for you is on my lips..

Neil pulled her to him, holding her he stroked her hair as he continued to sing, his eyes stung with unshed tears at the fear of losing the woman he was losing his heart to

"falak kadmon pe aa jhuke
haseen lamhaat wo de de
tere sang bheeg jaaun main
kabhi barsaat wo de de
tere bina jeena paDe
wo pal mujhe naa de

tu itni khoobsurat hai
fida deedaar pe tere"



Neil sat her down, making his way to the kitchen he returned with some food, feeding her, he smiled as she finished

There weren't many things that scared Neil Khanna , but losing the woman infront of him scared him so much , it made his heart hurt

Pressing his forehead to hers he sighed "Let me teach you how to protect yourself, but stay with me, for gods sake stay with me, it's all I ask, because I will tear the world apart to find you Avni"

Avni nodded, wiping away a stray tear on his cheek she pressed her lips to his in sweet surrender
She would stay, there was nowhere else she wished to be

Edited by Mayakhan12 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Avni_reddy

Hey Maya that was so sweet of u to write one part bcz of my request... and it was beautiful 😊 I so wish Avni and Neil enjoy and play together in rain onscreen... but aise ache khayal cvs ke dimaag mein kaise ayenge !

Anyways the next 2 parts were also too good... Thank god they both didn't misunderstand 😊 that's the beauty of their relationship...

Awaiting the next...

Hey, it's no problem! I write for you guys ! Thank you! Haha, that would be lovely but the CV's wont listen! Thank you! I have just updated
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Posted: 7 years ago
#59
Thank god avni didnt misunderstand neil. Waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: avneil2

Thank god avni didnt misunderstand neil. Waiting for next.


I will update now! The last part got me a bit emotional😆

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