Learning How To Love And To Be Loved (24 Parts, Complete) - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71
I can't wait for her to take him down!! #girlpower
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 20-
Neil had noticed Avni still looked so sad, and he wanted to cheer her up

Neil ripped his top off, he had really been slacking on working out
Dropping to the floor he began to push his body up

Avni peered in, she was very confused, one second he was being all romantic then he had just walked away

She didnt realise how long she had been watching when Neil stood up, his body glistened with sweat

Avni couldnt take her eyes off of Neil
"Something you want" Neil asked cheekily

Avni felt her ears burn as her cheeks flushed red, she shook her head
Neil made his way to Avni

Stroking her cheek with his thumb, he kissed a trail down her neck
Avni clenched her eyes shut

"Say my name"
"Neil" Avni moaned
Pulling back, she looked at his lips

"Tell me what you want Avni" his hand drew circles on her waist, her top rolled up

"You" she whispered
"Im all yours" he whispered back
Avni pressed her lips to his, biting into his lip, she slipped her tounge into his mouth

Neil was breathless, chuckling into the kiss
"I see the student has become adventurous "
Avni blushed again

Neil kissed her cheek "I'm going to shower, join me"
Avni's jaw dropped, shaking her head firmly

Winking at Avni, Neil walked into the bathroom
"Doors unlocked incase you change your mind"


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: vaish_patel

I can't wait for her to take him down!! #girlpower

Ooh me neither! #girlpower
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
Hey...Maya!!! Lovely story !!! Loved the plot.!!!
U always come up with unique and different concepts.. thank u so much for the refereshing stories..!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amayrasharma18

Hey...Maya!!! Lovely story !!! Loved the plot.!!!
U always come up with unique and different concepts.. thank u so much for the refereshing stories..!!!

Hey! Thank you so much, im glad you're enjoying it! No problem!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 21-
Avni looked at her phone on the bed, after Vidyut smashed it, she hadn't checked it

Picking up her phone she saw a call from Leila
"Hey Leila"
Her voice was panicked

"Avni, Avni you have to come back, hes gone mad, hes trying to kill me"
Avni tried to calm her down

"I dont deserve your pity, I've been sleeping with Vidyut for 3 years, I even helped him plan to kill you, but oh God, I know that was wrong, please Avni you have to help me"

Before Avni could reply the phone was cut off, the last thing she heard being Leila's scream

Avni ran out the house , calling a rickshaw she jumped in and went back to Vidyut

Arriving at the house, she grabbed Vidyut's hand as he went to hit Leila
Leila screamed and hid behind Avni

"Run" Avni shouted
So Leila did
Vidyut dropped to his knees

"Forgive me for all my mistakes, I love you Avni, you know that"
Avni knelt down beside him , hugging him

"Lets just forget the past and move forward"
The old Avni would have done anything for this moment, but as she glared at the wall as Vidyut sobbed in her arms

One thing was clear, this was Neil's Avni, not Vidyut's


Neil walked out of the bathroom, calling Avni, he saw a text message on his phone


Avni: Im sorry, I had to go back, I hope you can forgive me, there's just somethings I have to do alone

Neil smashed his phone to the floor in anger
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77
You always leave me wanting for more...such a bliss to read your stories...loving it,loving it,loving it update soon please :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 22-
A whole week had passed and Vidyut had still not raised his hand on Avni

Avni was biding her time, tonight was a party, Vidyut wanted her to come along and she hoped Neil would be there

Oh how she had missed him, it wouldnt be long till she could reunite with Neil, she just needed the right time


A few hours later-

Avni stood next to Vidyut, his hand on the small of her back as he talked animatedly to some people

Avni was disgusted by his touch and very bored, her eyes wandered the room looking for Neil

Stopping her heart dropped as she spotted Neil, his eyes a dark red as he glared at her
"I just need to go to the bathroom "

Avni whispered in Vidyut's ear
Neil squeezed the glass in his hand , was she kissing him?

God it broke him to see her do that, he had been working daily, all day in hopes of distracting himself, he slept maybe an hour at night but his dreams were plagued with Avni

He watched as Avni stepped toward him
Grabbing her, he pushed her behind a pillar

"Neil" she gasped "Have you been drinking"
Neil's hand skimmed her waist

"Why did you leave huh, what does he have that I don't"
Avni's heart broke, Neil thought she had left because he wasn't enough

"I didnt leave because of that"
"Then why" he growled as his fingers dug into her waist

Neil brought his face closer to hers, she instinctively closed her eyes as he pressed a kiss to her shoulder
"Does he make you feel the way I do, does your body react to him the way it does to me"

Neil kissed her, she gasped as he pushed himself up against her, giving his tounge access
"Does he kiss you like this"

Avni forgot her surroundings, or where she was, yanking him closer she kissed him back

Neil pulled away "I want you back Avni"
Turning he fell, her hands grabbed him without thinking

"Why do you care" Neil asked
Avni bit her tounge, now wasn't the time

"Take care of yourself Neil"
Standing up she went to walk away
Missing Vidyut's gaze on her

Grabbing her phone she read the message
Leila: He wants to burn Neil with acid, warn him

Avni looked around for Neil but he had gone

She had to find a way to stop this and soon

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 23-
Mixed between whats happening with Neil and with Avni

Avni had stayed up all night wondering what to do, deciding to confront Vidyut she made her way to his work, the acres

Avni arrived at the Acres, looking around she spotted Vidyut
"Im here to tell you to stop this madness, I came back to you, you don't need to kill him, Leila told me about everything"

Vidyut smiled, smacking her around the head with his fist she dropped to the floor
"One down, one more to go"

Vidyut looked at his watch

"Neil, there's been an accident" shouted DD
Neil ran down the stairs and down to the basement

Avni sat tied up, she looked at the knives on the floor
She needed to get out of here and warn Neil, struggling at her ties she huffed loudly

The tap broke , making the acid spread to the floor, Neil slipped and landed face first on the floor

The acid seeped through his skin, DD pulled him out, throwing water on him as he began to froth from the mouth

Picking up his phone he called for an ambulance

He watched as Neil was wheeled to hospital


Vidyut sat infront of Avni
"I see you heard about the little acid attack frenzy then"

Avni glared at him, not uttering a word in response
"Well I guess of course that you felt it, right here" pointing to his heart

"Why are you so hell bent on ruining my life, I am not the weak Avni anymore" she spat
"Just because you had some miraculous surge of energy means nothing, you always will be my bitch"

Vidyut cut into the ropes,
Yanking her up by her hair he threw her into the tv, she fell to the ground

The glass smashed around her, standing up she pulled the glass out of her knee and stabbed it in his bicep

Picking her up by the throat he slammed her into the wall
Lifting her legs around his waist she grunted in pain and wrapped her hands around his throat

Vidyut squeezed her throat harder, pushing her foot into his stomach he pulled back and she dropped to the floor
Jumping up she bashed her head into his neck, driving him backwards

"Why do you want to murder him so much" she shouted
"Good people don't exist sweetheart, I wont be made to look good by the looks of you both"

Running into him she tackled him to the floor "You make yourself look bad"
Straddling his hips she hit him over the head with a chair

Grabbing glass he pierced it into her stomach, gasping she fell off of him, a tear dripped from her eye

Neil's hand clenched the railing, as he gasped for breath and began to shake
The nurse paused then shouted "Somebody help, I need help in here"



Standing up Avni kicked his knee so he dropped to the floor and slammed a piece of glass into his neck
Grunting she kneed him in the stomach

Kicking him around the face , she gasped for breath as he stabbed her stomach again, she watched as blood fell to the floor

"I wont let you kill him"
"Try and stop me" he hissed in her face

With a loud scream she kicked her feet up and landed standing up
Punching him in the face she grabbed the chair and hit his back as he fell forward

The nurse tried to restart Neil's heart , both were in the fight for their lives


Avni rested her hand on her stomach as she squeezed her eyes shut in pain

"Bye bye baby" Vidyut said smugly
With one final burst of energy she threw the knife on the floor at him, as it hit him in the chest he dropped to the floor

Reaching for her phone she called for an ambulance
"Acres, i'm at the Acres I need an ambulance now"


The nurse stood back, sighing in relief
Neil's eyes opened again as Avni fell to the floor gasping as she heard the sirens coming to save her

It seemed the duo would live yet another day

So I could end this story with their reunion and write a new story, which I am taking suggestions for or I could continue with a new bad character, I leave the choice in your hands
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: radzshakti

You always leave me wanting for more...such a bliss to read your stories...loving it,loving it,loving it update soon please :)

Thank you so much, 2 new parts updated, do let me know what you think!

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