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shreya

@shreya2202

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Posted: 7 years ago

You really amazing writer I have read some of you work on arshi that was fab here also you have written very well about Avni's emotions.. Please do write more on avneil too if you have time it will be treat for us to read it.. 😳

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 7 years ago

This should definitely happen with Neil .

After giving her all hopes and saying she was his present how the hell can he run away . What is making him to do this . Why should he be guilty even after saving Juhi . This all found to be idiotic . It really implied he loved Juhi . Even after he moved on how Juhi can affect him worst .

I loved it . Hope cv's farmaish Puri kare . Let Avni walk off from him . I'm so done with her mother India

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avishimishra

@avishimishra

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Posted: 7 years ago

Wow this is beautiful story.u very smoothly describe the emotions, pains of Avni.Avni did right.she deserve better life

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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

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Posted: 7 years ago

You have penned Avni's emotions so well

She deserves a life

I loved this part" I am used to people walking out on me."

This line explains it all . She has suffered so much from childhood that now she is habitual of that

Waiting for next update

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

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Posted: 7 years ago

BEAUTIFUL work...

Can't wait the next update.

Please update soon.

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

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Posted: 7 years ago

wow
perfect picturisation
this time i support avni
neil deserves that
plz write neil's pov after avni left him

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pri12

@pri12

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Posted: 7 years ago

Superb loved it

Avni Taking a stand for herself...Plz write another part too

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Anjori

@anjoriii

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Posted: 7 years ago

Beautifully penned down! Please please please write a second part too. :)

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

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Posted: 7 years ago

Wow continue soon plz ❤️

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SUCHISMITA

@Suchi_ASR

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Posted: 7 years ago

beautiful Os 👏

waiting for part 2

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