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Amazing rendition ! You just made Neil's POV masterstroke . Maybe if Avni walks in the show he will do exact the same . Loved to bits and pieces . I loved Neela's words . Please update soon . He has to indeed sweat apology for what he had done is grave . I'm waiting for their confrontation

Hello 😆 simiji

It was just amazing yar

Lovely
Loved Neil's determision
Continue soon

Wow, just read the 2 parts..

Wow, the anguish you described his character experiencing was incredibly raw. Every moment, all he could think of was Avni. The way you've written it has me even more deeply invested into the characters of Avni and Neil! You are doing an absolutely amazing job with this story! Please do continue :)

This was truly fantastic.
You really have a way with words. I just couldn't stop myself from reading this twice before I could start typing a common.
Avni finally started living in present. I know Neil is badly hurt but he deserves this for hurting Avni so bad and for choosing Juhi over Avni every single time, but most importantly on their wedding day.
Waiting to see how he wins her back. Do update another part.

Simi when I saw the olv this morning of Avni on the plane, I thought the CV were doing exactly what had written. Of course that is not the case. I have read your part I and II thrice. Looking forward to you continuing this story..

Part three coming in five minutes :)

brilliant story