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Posted: 8 years ago
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Edited by _SANJU - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Guys... thank-you for all your lovely comments on previous chapters... it really means a lot...
Updated 2 super long chapters ...
Waiting for your reviews...
Please comment guys...if u liked it...
That'll really motivate me...

<3
Sannu.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
Awesome update yaar...
It was late but wo kehte h na, intezaar ka fal meetha hota h... Iss update k liye wo bilkul appropriate h...

And Neil and Avni new each other wo bhi itne achhe se..
Their moments in that tree house.. Wow..it was amazing.
But curious to know the secret behind that bullet and that tree house..
They looking each other and sleeping.. Awww..
And then Bebe came, Avni in that saari, Neil staring her, pehli resources, kitchen scene.. All were just awesome...
Specially that kitchen scene where Neil came to see what Avni was cooking and their lil nok jhok and Bebe watching them from door... Kuchh toh h pehle se inke beech.. Kuchh nai Bebe bahot kuchh.. Hahahhahah...
And then Neela and Avni convo.. Sorry before..
And Rhea's outburst.. You showed her emotions so well... Kaash show mein bhi wo aisa hi sochti..
I am started liking this Rhea.. And hope Ali Rhea ka kuchh connection bane..

And now at last, update soon..
Aise mast updates ka intezaar rahega...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _SANJU

Guys... thank-you for all your lovely comments on previous chapters... it really means a lot...

Updated 2 super long chapters ...
Waiting for your reviews...
Please comment guys...if u liked it...
That'll really motivate me...

<3
Sannu.

Sanju kahan gayab thi.???? Lovely update.very well written especially Rhea's part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
its finally good to see u back happy u updated this rs and i hope u update the other rs too as i really cant wait to read the next part. so coming to the update u were fab as always loved it
#5:even though shweta thinks avni is involved with dayawanti i was at least happy that she would do anything for neil she is ready to accept her...liked how neil cleared all of the decoration but left the candles in the room...loved the scene where avni was in the bathroom thinking to herself about neil...haha when avni said she doesnt have clothes to wear and how neil said "oh ha... U want my clothes?" the way avnis widened made a smile come on my face...wait avneil sharing the bed?... the way avni was surprised that neil remembers that she likes to sleep on the left side of the bed was just awww...
loved the flashback scene of avneil especially where neil ask her is she ok and how she glared at him in return ...loved it when neil told avni to stop and the way she said "KYA HAI" could actually imagine that scene...who was the one who shot a bullet towards avneil...loved how avneil started arguing as avni didnt want to go with neil and loved the way he convinced her especially loved the scene where neil asked "mere saath chalogi?" and how he moved his hand forward and how avni gave her hand in...haha neil is genius that he knew the tree had a door...the way u describe the things that were inside the hiding spot i was actually able to imagine it...i loved how avni saw the way neil drank his coffee and loved it even more when she went behind him without making a sound and he still knew that she was behind him... loved how avni asked how did he know she was behind and all he did was smile...loved how avneil were talking about different things...just loved this dialogue neil: hmm...4 saal pehle final year mein tha...aur zinda tha
A: aur ab..?
N: ab bhi zinda hu.. ... and the way they burst out laughing was able to imagine that...
loved the second flashback scene of the engagement especially where riya goes towards neil but he pushes her away and moves to the other direction to save avni when she was about to fall...loved how when avni opens her eyes she finds herself in neil arms... loved how the introduced them self to each other some tashan was seen there especially the way neil said ananya name and he held her hands firmly...when shweta asked they avneil know each other from before and before neil could answer avni answered saying no really liked that bit... just loved it when avni gave the rings to dayawanti and left from there and how neil smirked and spoke to himself saying "mujhse bhaag nahi paogi ... miss Ajooba... oops...ananya'"...haha the ways the ring was tight for neil and how he said he went to give the measurement himself his police giri started there itself and started to look around to find avni smiling and he knew it was that probably did it which made him happy and also me happy...hayee sanju just loved the last bit especially when avni turns to the other side and finds neil watching her uff could actually imagine the way he would be looking at her... loved how both smiled at each slowly and then how avni slowly closed her eyes followed by neil.

#6: wow loved it that neil got clothes for avni...ohhh so neil called neela to bring avnis clothes...loved neela and avni phone convo... loved bebe scene with everyone...haha loved the way how everyone was looking at avni...poor girl was so nervous...loved how neil spoke to avni trough eyes asking her to calm down.. love their communication without talking to each other...loved how bebe noticed avni getting a little tensed and told her to make whatever she knows how to make..aww poor avni tried making something but didnt turn out well so she had no option other than to make maggi...haha loved how neil came in and peeps to check what avni was making... loved how avni collided with neil when she was about to turn back...loved how avni was telling neil to go out of the kitchen but he did and the way moves closer to avni but she shows him a spatula and faking a anger by scrunching her nose was as sweet scene... haha neils lines always makes me laugh especially the way he said "um toh Puri wifey mode mein aagayi wifey?...pati pe atyachar" loved how he made avni laugh a little and asked if she needs any help.. loved how bebe was watching this scene near the door...the ,metha scene was lovely. i hope amol gets to know his reality soon...haha the way neil was impressed and thought "'itna sab banaliya madam ne?..khana banana sheekliya kya?'"...loved the way bebe supported avni...the way neil was getting impatient to eat and avni was surprised to see him like that loved that bit...loved what prakash said to avni she was touched hearing him say something like that...loved how neil got up and went behind avni pushed her by the shoulders making her sit on the chair besides him...haha the way neil said "meri maggie"...loved how everyone loves avnis food..for the first time loved riya scene especially how she came to the cafe and started to think about everything...loved riya and ali scene especially how riya vented out everything to ali...loved how ali pulled riya in a hug i wish if we get a scene like this between riya and ali where riya finally realizes her mistake...i hope there is a new start for riya and ali. update soon sanju cant wait for the next part and also do try and update your other rs really miss reading it .

Edited by preya_radev - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
Awsome loved it
Rhea seems to be nice here...
I want Ali to support her
plz continue soon :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Nice updates
That's how Neil and Avni met
Avni made maggi in her first rasoi was superb
Poor riya had to do so many sacrifices in her just to get somebody love her
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Awesome updates
Totally love it
Avneil is remembering their old time
Hope riya is positive here
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
Guys sorry for late updates and no replies (to comments)...and thank-you for all the lovely feedback...
And will u guys mind if I include a bit of AliYa?

I really want to write on them...

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