AvNeil FF: A Fate Intertwined NEW THREAD PAGE 27 - Page 7

I recommend you to write a complete novel and sell it to the world.

My God you will be the one of the best writers ever!!

So Neil also feel the same.

I am loving how this Dyawanti Mehta is villian here. You just completely make her a criminal not a psycho who kills her own because of htred towards Muslim, i am loving this case.

And Mitaalii , my God visual picture of her is just mesmerising.

Ahh i am in love with your story.

Continue soon!!!

Hello! First of all, best writer ever? That's the nicest thing anyone's ever said to me! Look at me dance!

coming to your observation on Dayawanti - My personal notes on Dayawanti Mehta are extensive because as a character she absolutely fascinates me. Between us, Dayawanti Mehta is a vastly underrated character - she's psychotic and evil, but has the intelligence and steel to back it up. Truly, an incredibly formidable villain. I genuinely believe her track should have been extended - would have been interesting to see a proper game of cat and mouse between Dayawanti Mehta and Avni on the show - but I'm also glad she left because I like Avni 😆

LOL rambling aside, thank you for your lovely comment!

PS - Glad you liked Mitali. Scoured much of the internet for her, and then some! Personally, I'm in awe of how beautiful she looks

Unres.

You r so fast😎 have updated both stories. Hope aage bhi side by side lekar chalogi tum.

Anyway one thing more fascinated me in ur story is the character of DD. He seems to be of strong personality.

And yes one thing is confusing me. Neela and Ananya have no connection between each other? I know Ananya felt the warm in the hug. She craved for it since ages but she is a survivor on her own? Neela isn't her mother?

And Ananya is definitely Avni as your ff is about Avni/Neil not Ananya/Neil so yea she is Avni and the another victim of Mehtas for sure.

Neil's past hasn't any Juhi right? He just has a resentful mother.

AvNeil both having awkwardness between them lol both don't know that they dream about each other.

Hey Veee i am just loving your ff. Do continue it soon.

And yayy i am first again 😛

Both have erotic dreams every night...I love DD in your FF He is a strong headed police inspector...Neil and Ananya are dreaming about each other 😆

I have a question..how come Neela and Ananya/Avni have no connection ?

when will Avni's past reveal?

please continue soon