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natzcreado

@natzcreado

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Hey you write so well mahn. Look forward to your updates. Very interesting...

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Arisha

@lol_rofl

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Gosh V how wonderful you write i cant describe.

I recommend you to write a complete novel and sell it to the world.

My God you will be the one of the best writers ever!!

So Neil also feel the same.

I am loving how this Dyawanti Mehta is villian here. You just completely make her a criminal not a psycho who kills her own because of htred towards Muslim, i am loving this case.

And Mitaalii , my God visual picture of her is just mesmerising.

Ahh i am in love with your story.

Continue soon!!!

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Tumpa12

@Tumpa12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

superb
loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Oh my, this was terrific👏
Thank you for fulfilling my wish of knowing Neil's Pov. It was such a treat☺️.
(sigh) If both of them only knew the fire was lit on both sides😆😆
I can imagine if and when they do give in, it will be such an explosion of passion☺️
Ahem, now coming to the story...😆
Enjoyed this chapter and Mitali as well⭐️⭐️
As always absolutely love the finer details and descriptions👍🏼👏
Excited for the next part😃
Take care

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Vee

@reflorated

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: lol_rofl
Gosh V how wonderful you write i cant describe.
I recommend you to write a complete novel and sell it to the world.
My God you will be the one of the best writers ever!!
So Neil also feel the same.
I am loving how this Dyawanti Mehta is villian here. You just completely make her a criminal not a psycho who kills her own because of htred towards Muslim, i am loving this case.
And Mitaalii , my God visual picture of her is just mesmerising.
Ahh i am in love with your story.
Continue soon!!!

Hello! First of all, best writer ever? That's the nicest thing anyone's ever said to me! Look at me dance!

coming to your observation on Dayawanti - My personal notes on Dayawanti Mehta are extensive because as a character she absolutely fascinates me. Between us, Dayawanti Mehta is a vastly underrated character - she's psychotic and evil, but has the intelligence and steel to back it up. Truly, an incredibly formidable villain. I genuinely believe her track should have been extended - would have been interesting to see a proper game of cat and mouse between Dayawanti Mehta and Avni on the show - but I'm also glad she left because I like Avni 😆

LOL rambling aside, thank you for your lovely comment!

PS - Glad you liked Mitali. Scoured much of the internet for her, and then some! Personally, I'm in awe of how beautiful she looks

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

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Arisha

@lol_rofl

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Reserva

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You r so fast😎 have updated both stories. Hope aage bhi side by side lekar chalogi tum.

Anyway one thing more fascinated me in ur story is the character of DD. He seems to be of strong personality.

And yes one thing is confusing me. Neela and Ananya have no connection between each other? I know Ananya felt the warm in the hug. She craved for it since ages but she is a survivor on her own? Neela isn't her mother?

And Ananya is definitely Avni as your ff is about Avni/Neil not Ananya/Neil so yea she is Avni and the another victim of Mehtas for sure.

Neil's past hasn't any Juhi right? He just has a resentful mother.

AvNeil both having awkwardness between them lol both don't know that they dream about each other.

Hey Veee i am just loving your ff. Do continue it soon.

And yayy i am first again 😛

Edited by lol_rofl - 8 years ago

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Somewhatwriter

@Somewhatwriter

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Can you teach me how the hell to write like this !?!? Because my lord when i read your writing I'm not reading... I'm living in this universe and feeling their feelings and experincing those moments. Because your writing is so beautiful and i love this world and these characters you have created... i just love you balance their work/mysterry and the sexual tension between them. Just spot on. I love it, thank you for writing