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Posted: 8 years ago

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996203

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

OMG!!!!!...

res..

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finally i did it...it took me 40 mins or more to read both and understand ...i think...😆

amazing updates...

neela's char is interesting...

also the plot...so they finally managed to get some more info...

the tension b/w avneil is just ☺️

neil isn't their son?😕

or it's just due the choices he made?

and thanks for the gallery...and hyperlinking...

i'm greedy ...evn after 2 amazing updates...i want to read more...

please update soon...😳

Edited by _SANJU - 8 years ago

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pri12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Res

Unres

2 chapters yayyy🥳

That was a treat...

Neil just climaxed with Ananya's image in front of him😲

Poor Guy.. He was so uncomfortable with her

And Neela Parekh is such a sweetheart...So Mehta family (Daya Ketan and Amol) are involved in drug dealing and also they have something to do with women that are disappaearing...

Neil is not Shweta's son or she disowned him because he chose to be a Policeman...just confused

I m loving Neil and Ananya encounters and their Sexual tension

So Ananya is a mystery to solve because all her records are nowhere to find...

Please continue soon😳

Edited by pri12 - 8 years ago

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Aqua

@aquaHP

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Amazing story!!

The story and the characters seem like they are properly thought through. Love it!!

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charlottedias05

@charlottedias05

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Wow amazing gurl. Ur a fab writer. Its damn damn interesting..

Do continue soon...

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

I actually love Neela out of all you characterised .. her character in the show is just as the same .. the strong-headed determined n graceful women I had seen in any shows in SP recently

I love to read the way you picturize the encounter

hey Neil isn't swetha's son .. then it's gonna be interesting..this part intrigued me much..

huh whole of mehta bandwagon is involved in every kind of underground activity ... even ketan seems to be an important pawn in your story .

I am just loving it man!