Let me start by saying this- this is your best work (I read only 3 of your work now so eh). the research, richness of story, execution. THE SEXUAL TENSION!☺️ Dude, next time in Pm mention if its appropriate to read in public. I read that chapter where Neil and avni was fantasizing about each other and...well...it was suddenly very hot. And no way to take cold shower. No AC didn't help😛
- I already mentioned I loved the vigilante angle cause I am a big superhero fan and this is like a link to that big bad world. SHE USES A SWORD!??!!! Man I wonder where she got that. Is that like old school rajput heavy sword or samurai. Did she take her training in kerala/budhist monk or japan? Maybe 7 year gap can explain japan+ minimalist apartment design.😛 it has to be ananya or are we missing something? If Neil is so sure he did hit her so how come she didn't have any marks on her face? Or is it Neela? A disciplined calm soul made of steel person seeking justice cause she saw first hand the horror through her work.
- DD is smoking hot!! like whoa...like someone said even if Neil not available DD is second best. He is totally opposite of show, like in show you get the feeling that maybe it's easy to manipulate him but I have noticed DD is quite professional and sticks by Neil no matter what. But he' has a sharp tongue here, don't easily trust people. I wonder what Avni needs to do to get his trust, maybe this trip to red light with Neil will help? Or something drastic? and he's quite ruthless, beating up a criminal that bad that even Neil is wincing can not imagine show wala DD doing that. What's his full name btw? Dushyant?😆
- Mitali is cute and very sharp, though I wonder if it's really hard to see through Neil when he's openly giving avni come hither look. 😛 she is volunteering herself to get into the UC job and i am getting such a bad feeling in this. I almost half expected Avni to volunteer then remembered she is a big shot journalist who has a known show so she cant do it. How Mitali going to fake injection/drugs cause no escort from Ketan Mehta's party remember anything...is this bhavesh (did i spell the name right?) going to help her faking it? I really hope she stays fine.
- Ketan Mehta and his Mother is yet to make an intro and still I am getting utterly disgusted and fascinated by them. It's like the build up from Jane austen books when male lead is about to enter there would be flood of gossips 🤣 Dayavanti is a powerful person who controlls everything, is she a politician too? Ketan is also another devil, even shweta was disgusted with the 'ocassional indulgence"🤢 if he is into big deals i wonder why such a big gap between two parties. he has to do other dealings too. Maybe it's a special party for a special person who is not regular to sheherpur/India? does diksha help too or she stays like an outcast? seems like she is similar to show. Even amol is not introduced yet, btw i wonder how he did the gas thingy when avni's apartment is on 20th floor and you cant throw that through window or something. He entered her house? So is it possible he had help with someone who knew how to get in, maybe someone close to avni or a locksmith? if he threw that thing through door when avni ran away why didn't do anything to her, why let her go, what was his motive? I doubt this gas attack, did avni herself planned it? though that doesn't make sense as well, what benefit she will get by moving out? or maybe amol just wanted to threaten avni.
- I loved how you added small tidbits of real life like online content. So Nyaya going to have second season exclusively online and not television? doesn't that risk the chance of declining viewership?that coffee shop scene where she felt like she don't belong there and Neela stepping in, so heartbreaking and yet symbolic. she is not alone anymore. she has people now. Neela is exactly like show, graceful and all the eloquent words you wrote down for her. I loved her soft spoken and polite she was, so hesitant to talk about her work and girls especially how they all had similar build. I wonder what was that about, if the client likes specific type of girls🤢 her compassion is seeping through avni and I loved the hug she gave to avni in NGO. twice she has comforted her and I look forward to their interactions more! Is she Dayavanti's ex DIL too? wonder where is ashish.
- Shweta, ooh where do I start. She is exactly like some real life parents who can never forgive their kids when they dont walk on the path they thought they will/should, which is both saddening and commendable. Why don't she sees Neil doing good work and getting praised? Is it just that he is not the heir of Khanna company or that this city is a thankless place where chances of Neil getting squashed is maximum? sounds like the former judging by how cold she was to prakash after neil left, or maybe that's her hurt talking and she will come around if something drastic is to happen to neil. The conversation was so artifical and like game, totally unlike how a parent and kid should interact. I feel for prakash, poor man Neil was also so hurt, and those beautiful thoughts of childhood when he was in police station talking to avni ❤️ I am not sure if shweta will stay away from Ketan Mehta's party now that her son has shown an interest.😛
- Neil and Avni *rubs hand in glee* the reason i started watching this show was their instant chemistry and similar to show here too they wasted no time to have that spark. The police station scene where neil brush past avni, her staying in his house and the erotic dream (it;s hard to tell why someone is attracted to someone but I would like to know why him? Is it cause she has none in life or it's just his aura?), and again, in the privacy of her house, her hands slipping down and no relief coming😛☺️ same with neil who just.cant.take.his.eyes.off😳 for neil i think it's a combination of mystery surrounding her and that she is an attractive woman (the club scene made me squeal, like holy hotness that dress!), and it's amusing how he keeps denying that it's just cause he didnt get laid😆😆 The kitchen scene and gif u posted, you have no idea how happy that made me being a delena fan ❤️ so close, uff! I liked it;s not about lust or cat and mouse game between them, the philosophical talk in station about truth and simplicity👏 and then the train scene, oooh lala once again, so close. I feel like yelling that throw caution to the wound and just go for it, I mean how scorching hot it would be if they actually did it, but then I am like na na sabar ka phal meetha😆😛 a nice long relief.😉
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