avneil ff ur are mine chapter 16 updated in page 16 - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
Omggg wowww such a beautiful part
I loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
Amazing update
They are trying to know each other's past
And trying to heal it too
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
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no words dear .. jus awsm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 13
Avni woke up in a dark place and was wondering how did she reach in this place the last thing she remembered was how she had left the house to meet neela maa to tell her about the death of Ashish mehta . She had hired a taxi and before she could enter neela's house. someone had hit her head and now she has woke up. Avni gasped thinking Neil could be worried about her and she is kidnapped she should escape.
Before she could think something the lights of the place got on and it was more than a shock to see that she was in her childhood home where she and her mother lived.
" how are you avni? " asked dayavanti mehta who entered the house .
Avni was shocked how did dayavanti mehta know about her true identity Neil had hid it .
" wondering how did I come to know about ur true face. It is Riya who had unexpectedly visited ur school today where you and Neil visited and saw you talking to ur childhood friend. That was enough. U are alive and see as ur mom destroyed my son's house. U destroyed my Riya's house. History is repeating. Shweta hates you the same way as I hated ur mother and u trapped neil the same way as ur mother trapped my son. But I will not let the history repeat instead of letting shweta's hand getting dirty by killing you I will do that dirty thing. U are not meant to be alive. " said dayavanti mehta angrily.
Avni laughed sarcastically and said " finally you found my identity. It was you who destroyed ur son's house not me. About Riya she never wanted to marry neil. About be being alive. Think hundred times before harming me dayavanti mehta. My husband will not spare you if anything happens to me. About history mind you .maybe shweta aunty hates me the same way as you hate my mom but nor my husband is Ashish mehta who is a coward to stand for his wife nor I'm ayesha haider . I'm warning you leave me otherwise Neil will not spare you. " said avni warning dayavanti mehta in confident voice which gave shivers to dayavanti mehta.
" I will show you afterwards what will happen. Tie her off " said dayavanti mehta to goons and tied a cloth to avni's mouth and went away.
Avni was least worried about dayavanti mehta and her warnings as she knew Neil would save her.
But what worried her was Neil's reaction of her disappearance. He would be cursing himself for not protecting her.

The other side of the city. Neil ,DD, Ali and neela was searching for avni.
" sir we have searched half of the city. Bhabhi is not where found "said DD worriedly.
Neil was frustrated. How could he be so careless.
" Neil I'm afraid that dayavanti mehta has some hand in it. Why did avni had come to my home to inform about Ashish's death. I could be OK if she could have informed me at phone . I'm strong enough neil to handle anything except losing avni " said neela controlling her tears.
Neil hugged her and tried to console her while controlling his tears. Was he going loose avni as he lost juhi? Was love not written in his destiny or he did not deserve it?
" Neil, neela maa is correct. Avni is in dayavanti mehta's clutches. I heard Riya speaking to someone to phone about it. Avni is in her childhood house "said Ali.
Neil first time felt to slap a girl that too Riya. How could she? She knows her Dadi's capability to harm avni very well. How could she be so cruel? Neil thanked his stars that he did not marry Riya even though it could be fake.
" thank you Ali. " said Neil.
" it's OK Neil save avni first. Don't worry about Riya I will make sure she does not contact her Dadi " replied Ali.
Neil signalled DD to bring police officers to arrest dayavanti mehta. Today he will put a end to this chapter. He drove the car neela sat in it . Both were worried about avni.
"No one would be spared if anything happens to his wife . Dayavanti mehta I hope you did not harm my avni, hope nothing has happened to her. A starch on her I will forget ur my Bebe's age " Neil murmured in his anger as he drove the car leaving Neela in shock as she never found Neil in anger it has like he is blinded in that. " I hope nothing has happened to avni or dayavanti mehta and the whole mehta family will see the worse of Neil. I never saw Neil so angry " thought neela looking at neil who was driving so rash
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Fantastic update
Avni is kidnapped by dayawanti and rhea had a hand in it
But Neil will save her
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
Amazing Update!!!
Now waiting for our Super Cop Tillu to save her...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
awesome upt
loved it
liked avni's confidence on neil
waiting for next upt
cont soon
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Chapter 14
Dayavanti mehta was smiling and laughing like mad so were diksha and Ketan finally she is going to get rid of avni that girl who spoiled her whole family. Today she is going to die in front of durga maa during the Pooja avni was given the sleeping pills forcefully and without anyone's knowledge they had put her in between the woods which they are going to burn.
" the sleeping pills affect could have got over by now. Poor avni she could open her eyes to see her death in front of her. " said dayavanti mehta and laughed like a manic.
Even ketan and diksha joined her.
Suddenly they heard the door bell ring .
Dayavanti opened the door to find Neil and neela standing here. Neela was looking frightened but Neil was looking angry.
" where is avni? " asked neela.
" I don't know. Why should I know her. Who is this avni. Did you change ananya 's name to avni? Avni is dead right " asked dayavanti.
The next moment she was strangled by Neil shocking everyone
" I know u know where is avni. I also know u found the truth. Now tell me where is she or else I will forget that ur equal to my Bebe's age. " said Neil angrily.
Ketan came to his mother's rescue but Neil pushed him with so much strength that he hit his head with vase and turned unconscious.
" Neil will not spare anything happens to me " avni's words rang in dayavanti mehta's head.
" we have kept her in between the woods which are going to be burned during the durga Pooja today " said Deeksha.
If neil could strangle her mother where will be spare her? It is better to tell the truth thought Deeksha.
Neil left dayavanti mehta and looked at her dangerously and said " if one scratch comes on wife I will not spare you alive. How dare you try to kill her? Do you think she still the 9 years old girl who u can shoot whenever you want no one will do anything. No she is no more the lone avni I am here her husband. Dare you lay ur eyes on her again I will snatch it eyes from you not only you. I will not spare anyone who will try to harm her ".
DD and the police arrived arrested dayavanti mehta and Deeksha.
Ketan was rushed to hospital.

Neil and neela reached the durga Pooja place at the right time before the fire was set. Neil stopped the people from burning the woods. He moved the woods and found avni in middle unconscious, he carried her in his arms and sprinkled water on her to make her conscious. Neil noticed blood on her head and some injuries he made a mental note on his mind to give dayavanti mehta a lesson for it.
Avni opened her eyes and looked at neil he was here finally she knew he would come. She wanted to see dayavanti mehta's expression Now. But why was she in the temple ?.
Neil hugged her tightly she hugged him back. Neela's eyes were relieved.
" what I'm doing here? " asked a confused avni.
" I will tell you later . See blood is flowing from ur head. We should leave for hospital now. I will do your first aid in the car . Come " said Neil.
" it is just a small injury Neil. It's ok. First aid is enough " said avni.
" ur so careless about urself. We are going to the hospital " Neil said.
" avni why are you fighting. Go with Neil " said neela.
" fine .maa I'm going. Take his side only " said avni
Avni and Neil were going towards the car when amol came in front of them.
" why did you send my grandma to jail because of ur wife " said amol angrily looking towards avni.
" u grandma was almost going to murder my wife and do you except me do Pooja of her. She killed even ur father and mother. She is ur sister whom ur accusing mind ur language amol " said Neil.
" no ur telling lies. This is not truth " said amol.
" go to the police station. U will get all the proofs. At least believe that. Please excuse me now. Ur grandma has wounded my wife I should take her to the hospital "said Neil and dragged avni with him.

The doctor checked avni's injuries and suggested injection for avoiding further infection. That's the time when Neil came to know the reason avni did not want to come to the hospital. She screamed so loudly when injection was put on her that surprised the doctor as well. Neil could not hide his laughter and avni frowned cutely.
It took two chocolate ice cream to make avni talk with him. Avni was eating her third ice cream when Neil was explaining this incident to his mother in law who had a nice laugh hearing it in the phone.
" laugh nicely mother in law. Your daughter and her moods. I pity myself I have to bear her so much " said Neil.
" u should have thought about it before saving and marrying her " said neela.
Neil looked at avni who was fighting with the shopkeeper for the flavor which is not available.
" how would I survive if she is not here. Marrying her I own it for you thank you. U were right that time but sorry I will never return her to you " said Neil.
" I can't believe what you did today? I am never seen you like that Neil. When are you planning to tell avni the three magical words " asked neela.
" ia not obvious. Is the need to tell ? But fine for your tube light daughter will never know if I don't tell her. I will tell if I wait for your daughter it will happen in my next birth only. I just want enjoy this moments before my confession " said Neil.
Neil ended the call when he saw avni approaching him with a frown on her face. Why does she look so cute when angry thought Neil .
" stupid shopkeeper he does not have any more chocolate favor. I even said my husband is the acp but no he did not listen " said avni
" do you intend to go to hospital again because of getting cold. How much more ice cream will you have? Three were not enough. In this speed you will get either a cold or tooth ache. U were threatening the shopkeeper using my name not done " said Neil acting to be angry.
" sorry na. Ur my husband so I did. We should go home otherwise bebe will start complaining that we will always go somewhere else and never be in home. " said avni.
Neil and avni left for home.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fantastic
Thank goodness Avni is saved by Neil
And dayawanti is behind the bars
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 15
Neil and avni reached home. Neil received a important call and excused himself. Avni entered the house to find bebe standing with shweta aunty. prakash uncle looked concerned.
Bebe was looking angry. Avni could not understand the reason. Then she saw Riya standing here smirking. "What was Riya doing here?" Thought avni
" bebe what happened you seem to be upset " asked avni concerned.
Bebe throws a card on avni's face.
"read it " tells bebe angrily.
Avni who was astonished by Bebe's action and takes the card to find the reason of Bebe's angry. As avni looked at the card her eyes widened it was Riya's and Neil's wedding card but how did it reach bebe Now. Was it shweta aunty and Riya? But one look at shweta avni understood she was not involved because she was looking equally surprised but one look at Riya avni understood it was Riya's doing.
" bebe listen to me " said avni but bebe interpreted her and said " I could not believe you cheated my family and married Neil. U are illegitimate daughter of Ashish mehta I can't believe it. What to except of you more ".
Tears escaped from avni's eyes . Shweta actually tried to stop bebe but instead she also got scolding from bebe.
" u have no place in this family. U better leave the house " said bebe harshly turning to the other side.
Avni was shocked . how could she hope bebe will accept her after the truth? The Society will never accept.
" what is happening there? " asked Neil confused seeing avni's tears. As he entered inside the house after the phone conversation that was the first thing he saw.
" Neil u could have said me this girl cheated you and married you if Riya could have not shown up. U would have actually been acting to be happily married to this girl. She is illegitimate Neil "
" stop it bebe " Neil said angrily stopping bebe to speak more. Bebe was frightened to see Neil in anger even shweta got scared seeing Neil angry.
Neil clams down and speaks politely " look bebe I know you are angry. But avni is not at fault. Riya ran away from the wedding so to save our reputation avni Sat down in her place. What is the fault of avni regarding her birth? She did not do anything wrong. It was her parents fault why is the punishment given to her. I'm happy in this marriage "
" look Neil marrying this girl you have ruin our reputation. What would I say society tomorrow? If anyone comes to know the truth that she is avni not ananya and illegitimate . U have to leave this girl neil " said bebe looking at avni angrily.
Again drops of tears escaped from avni's eyes and Neil lost his cool.
" wow bebe more than my happiness u love this society and value them. Then be happy with them only. My wife and I will stay in this where society is valued more than people's happiness " shouted Neil.
Neil moved towards avni holds her wrist and starts moving out of the house only to be stopped on tracks by Bebe's next words.
" u will regret it decision of choosing this girl over us Neil " said bebe.
" no bebe you will regret choosing the society over us . U believe Riya for what reason?. " said Neil turning towards bebe.
Neil went towards Riya angrily . Riya got sacred .
" what are you doing Riya I thought you would be visiting ur grandma in jail just a minute I guess ur father and aunt is also there " said Neil smirking at her.
Riya was shocked to hear it.
" Neil how could you do that to my grandmother. U did this and all only because of avni right " said Riya.
" what the hell did you except me to do. Ur grandmother was almost going to kill my wife with the help of your father. U except me to let them go. If I get any evidence your also involved I will spare you also " shouted Neil at Riya.
Riya stood here silently. Neil looked at her and again screamed " did I not tell you to go away. Get lost ".
" Neil listen " said Riya trying to convince him.
" get lost " shouted Neil.
Riya ran away from the house.
Neil pulled avni and made her stand in front of bebe.
" was it fault of avni that she is illegitimate? Was it her fault that her grandmother killed her mother and father. Or was it fault that her childhood was snatched ? Is it another fault of her that at a tender age she was shot by her grandmother near her heart? " Neil said pointing towards the place where avni was shot to bebe.
The family gasped. Bebe looked at avni with sympathy.
" please don't sympathize with her. My wife doesn't need any of her sympathy. In spite of all things she suffered today she got justice to her mother by putting dayavanti mehta in jail. I'm proud of her for it. If you people can't respect and find her black spot in this family we will not be here "
" Neil stop we will talk about morning. Take anan means avni to room " said bebe.
" no bebe who knows what will you tell tomorrow to my wife to make her more cry. She has shed enough of tears not more " replied Neil.
" Neil listen " avni tried to stop neil but he did not. He dragged her out of the house not listening to Bebe's pleading.
Neil left avni's hand when they went out of the mansion. He looked at avni who was trying to tell something he ignored her and said " I'm going to bring the car wait here " .
" Neil bebe realized she was wrong I think we should go back " said avni.
" look avni be quiet and stand here. I will bring the car. We will talk later "said Neil and went away to bring the car.
Neil was driving when avni was looking at him.
" where are we going? " asked avni curiously.
" to my mother in law house. Tomorrow we will shift to our flat " said Neil.
" Neil listen we can solve the problem what's the need to shift somewhere " said avni trying to convince Neil but Neil did not listen to her .
Avni got tired explaining Neil and then finally she lost her cool and sat angrily.
Neela opened the door to find a smiling neil and angry avni. 'what happened' neela wondered.
Neil greeted her but avni went inside and closed the door of her room.
" what happened Neil? " asked neela.
Neil explained her what had actually taken place in his place and avni's anger.
Neela listened to it and said " avni is right Neil. Maybe you should have solved the problem in the house "
" I could have but what if bebe again blames avni ?. She did not realize her mistake she was just desperate to make me stay. Except my father no one realizes the value of avni in the house. I can't let her live in the house where she sheds tears and gets hurt. I don't want avni to compromise with her self respect because of me or my family " said Neil.
Neil went towards to avni's room to clam her down.
" avni open the door " said Neil knocking the room's door.
Avni was angry that she did not open the door. Neil was irritated now.
Neela brought popcorn and started eating .
" mother in law. It's not any movie or TV serial that you are seeing that you are eating popcorn now. Help me " said Neil.
" oh I did not know. Anyway I'm bored so I'm getting myself entertained. Yesterday someone phoned and said they will never return my daughter to me. Now bear with her son in law . All the best continue " said neela smiling.
" smile seeing my condition " said Neil frowning.
A ides lit on Neil's mind.
" ouch. My hand hurts. It's paining " he screamed loudly.
Avni opened the door suddenly and rushed to Neil. She took his hands and started searching for any wound. She did not find anything and looked at neil who was starting at her.
" masterstroke not bad " said neela eating the popcorn.
" maa. Why are you eating popcorn? Ur not watching any movie now. Ur son in law has made you mad " said avni looking at neela who was sitting on the sofa eating popcorn.
" watching u both fight is so entertaining . OK solve ur problems and come I'm going to put the dinner. It's enough for tonight. actually my popcorn got over " said neela and went to the kitchen.

Avni was going back to her room when Neil pulled her hand.
" what is your problem? " asked Neil
" I said you we will solve everything. You creeated a big scene of everything " said avni.

Neil cups her face and makes her look into her eyes and says " tell that you are ready to forgive bebe for questioning you and your character ".
Avni looked down not meeting his eyes.
" that's problem. I don't want you to compromise. I want you to forgive when you are ready. " said Neil.
" but Neil I did not want to choose between your family and me . I never wanted to separate you from them " avni said sadly.
" who said I chose between you and my family. Aren't you my family avni? Ur as important you me as everyone " said Neil looking at her eyes.

Avni stared at neil. Was she so lucky or what had she had done that she got him in her life?.
Avni and Neil were lost in each others eyes when neela coughed falsely and broke their eye block.
Avni and Neil looked at neela embarrassed.
" I'm sorry I did not intend to break your romantic moment. But the food will become cold " said neela in teasing voice.
Avni and Neil went to the dining table and had the food.

Precap : avni and Neil shift to the apartment. Bebe to apologize to avni. Shweta to get reality check.



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