avneil ff ur are mine chapter 16 updated in page 16

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Avneil are my recent obsession. I love them a lot. So this ff is dedicated to them but with some differences. Neil is grey shaded and dark. He is possessive of avni but will not let her no it fast. He has strong feelings for her but will try to hide it.
Prologue
Neil was shocked to see avni as his bride. Though his heart was dancing but why was ananya crying. Was she forced
In this marriage. He was confused. DD came near him and said "sir the pandit is fake, we can declare this marriage as fake " . Neil said "no you will not do anything like that understood " DD nodded as he was confused why Was his Neil sir not breaking this marriage. A slap was heard as dayavanti mehta slapped avni. Neil saw it and got angry, dayavanti mehta was going to raise her hand on avni but Neil stopped it. Before anyone speaks anything, Neil pulled avni's hand and took her out leaving everyone shocked.
He freed avni's hand as they came out. He wanted to scold her.
Neil : have you gone mad? You cheated me. Our marriage is over.
Avni : oh really. I did with you. What you wanted do with Riya. You wanted do fake marriage with Riya and free her. I did the same with you. Any way this marriage is fake. I did not have any options. Dayavanti mehta was planning to take amol and leave this country. I wanted to stop her. I will free you once my revenge gets completed and my brother understands the truth .
Neil was shocked to see avni having no guilt. Then how did the tear come out of her eyes then when he was going to put manglasutra around her neck.
Neil : so I will end this fake marriage now.
Though Neil did not intend to do so.
"fine go Neil. Go tell everyone the truth. Marry Riya and arrest my daughter avni but on what charges will you arrest her on robbery or cheating. For how many months? Six or ten. After that what she will come out. she is innocent Neil. You are going to support criminal "said neela.
Neil stopped hearing it.
Neil : fine I will maintain this fake marriage till I find the truth. If it is truth I will help you in justice . But I have few conditions.
Avni : what conditions ?
Neil : since I am helping you. You are going to take help only from me. understood. Not even from your childhood friend Ali okay . You should act like my wife in front of everyone not my enemy. you will not question my moves.
Avni : no at all. Why should I not ask help from Ali. He is my childhood friend .i trust him more than u.
Neil got angry.
Neil : Fine. Then why did you marry me then. Go marry your friend.
avni : I wish so.
Neela understood the matter was getting out of hand.
Neela : fine we agree Neil . Avni will not ask help from Ali.
Avni : but maa.
Neela :avni be quite.
Neil : and one more thing. You will tell Ali that you love me and married me.
Avni : no way. Ali will not believe that .he knows better than anyone.
Neil : I don't care. Tell what I said or I will ask my dad to do the deal with dayavanti mehta .
Avni did not have any other options and nodded positively.
Neil finally smiled.
Neil : Let's go my wife. To make everyone Understand ur mine.
Avni : what?
Neil : I mean you are my wife .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow...this is very interesting... Please continue soon...😊
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Nice dear . Liked it a lot . Wonderful prologue . Write next part soon . Thank you😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Intriguing concept
Please please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice prologue update sooon . i am loving this side of Neil
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Chapter 1
Shweta was scoldings dayavanti mehta and her family members. When Neil and avni entered.
Shweta saw it and said come let's go Neil enough of drama. Neil replied yes mom.
Neil holds avni's hand and starts moving.
Shweta stops him by saying " Neil where are you taking this girl? "
Neil : mom she is ur daughter in law and my wife. So she will come with us.
Shweta : Neil this marriage was a cheating.
Before Neil can answer, prakash spoke "Neil is correct shweta whatever happened ananya is the daughter in law of our house. Marriage is done ".
Shweta wanted to oppose but prakash stopped her and said not to create a scene.
Prakash : Neil you take ananya and come. I and shweta will go.
Prakash took shweta and went away.
Neil :ananya go to our car and sit I will come soon.
Avni did not want to go but she went. Ali followed her to talk with her.
Neil saw it and smirked. Neil turned his attention to dayavanti mehta and said the deal is cancelled now and went away without hearing her pleas.
Neil said DD to come with him DD came.
Neil :DD go call that fake pandit here.
DD : yes sir .
DD went to bring the fake pandit.
Neil (in mind) : if I was knowing, avni is bride. I could have not asked the pandit to do fake marriage. If he reveals to everyone about this. Avni will go away. No I will handle it.
DD came with the pandit.
Neil : see I will give you more money. No one should know it was fake marriage OK.
Pandit : it was not a fake marriage. It was real only. You gave money to do fake marriage and the lady who did Kanya Dana gave me double money to do it real one .ur really married with her.
The pandit went away. Neil was shocked. DD was double shocked.
DD :sir you are really married to ananya sir.
Neil :DD leave me alone.
DD went away leaving Neil alone.
Neil : why did neela aunty did this?.
"for you Neil "said neela who came to visit Neil.
Neil :what for me? You have caged me in this marriage .
Neela : fine. If you don't want to keep this marriage. I will tell to avni and take her home with me. She was tried to explaining to Ali about her love for you and faking stories.
Neela was leaving.
Neil : stop I will keep this marriage only till I find truth.
He went leaving a smiling neela.
Neela : u also know Neil that you love avni and ur possessive of her. That's why whenever I mention of avni with Ali you loose ur clam.

On the other side avni was tired of explaining to Ali that she loves Neil.
Avni: listen Ali I love Neil that's why I married him. You understand. He also loves me. He knows my truth.
Ali : no avni you don't if Neil loves you why Was he marrying Riya.
Avni :ali please leave this. I will handle it.
Ali : fine avni has you wish .
Avni : Ali please handle Riya .
Ali : I will do that not for you as her friend also.
Bye. Take care.
Ali left.
Avni cried and broke down. She saw the name board of Neil and Riya .she fell down and cried.
Avni : now at least come back amol. I have put everything in stake for you.
Neil came and saw avni in this state. He pulled her up.
Neil : ananya what happened? Why are you crying? Did anyone tell you anything.
Avni hugged Neil and started crying. Neil hugged her back and tried to console her. Avni was feeling peaceful in his arms but she suddenly pulled her out of this hug.
Avni : let's go.
Neil nodded and both sat in car.
Precap : avneil first night. Neil trying to get close to avni.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very interesting. Do continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
Continue soon
Next time plz pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very very interesting . I m loving your FF . Possessive Neel is really adorable. Please write next chapter soon willing to read that.
Thanks dear😊 And that too a big one
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb
Poor Avni has to face everyone's hatred
Precap sounds interesting
Please please update soon

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