Vani TS : Bahon ke Darmiyan Part 2 Updated on Page 6 - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

Amazing👏👏.I wish show mein bhi aisa kuch dikhae.


Waiting for next part...update soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Waiting for next part..Update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: nainaasharmaa

hellooooo finally comment kiya uff i'm so sorry ☺️but here are my commentsssss -

this felt as if i was reading something i wrote? like these are the kind of scenes that i’d think about haha

i loved the beginning, the lil vani moment before things went south. i love how you put ballu in a position where he cared for bani.

the best bits was when bani yelled at jay, sukoon mila mujhe uff

bani’s care is something i adore to see & i love seeing her worry for veer. it’s always so endearing.

the rest of the fam being shocked about her feelings cracked me up for some reason but it was the cutest lil bit. i neeeeed vani scenes hehe we think alike so i know the scenes coming up are gonna be mind blowing so plssss update soon🤗

Hiii🤗

finallyy😆

That's the same thing i feel when I read your work. See we are so same.

I too loved Ballu here because he was positive.😉

sukoon toh abhi milega tujhe Vani scenes padke😆


the rest of the fam being shocked about her feelings cracked me up for some reason

Why?


Updating in a bit bro

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Posted: 4 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Cinnamon_Kisses

Oh maaaaa😭

I think I am going to cry a lot of happy tears

This is so heart warming, a treat for the soul

This is beyond beautiful

I loved the fact that Vani are so close

Aur itni parwah 😭😭😭

Loved to see Bani in ardhangini avatar

Mujhe show par bhi aise hi dekhna hai

Another awesome thing was Balwant's concern for Bani

Makes the story whole some

Yasssss! Dhaabewale ko get out kar diya 🤣

You go gharwaali, mazaa aa gaya 👍🏼

Hey Bholenaath humari Aadi Naagin aur Cheelon ke Rajkumar ko nazar na lage kisiki

Now I am really very excited to see ke Veer ka reaction kya hota hai after he wakes up and iss baar toh Bani bhi reciprocate karegi

Dil Ibadat kar raha hai... Dhadkane meri sunn ☺️

aww my bhai🤗

thankyou so much❤️

mujhe bhi chahiye for once Bani choose Veer over Jai or sirf actions ke through nahi, words bhi ho.
yar dhabevale ko bahar toh main chahti hu Bani kare hi😆

haha. sahi mein nazar na lage inhe kisi ki

Dil Ibadat kar raha hai in a bit😉

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Posted: 4 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: addictv

👌👌👌👏👏👏👏

Waiting eagerly for next part.

Thank u for this beautiful story.

Thankyou so much🤗

Updating in a bit

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashlesha2


Good to hear from you.

Feelings are mutual🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Janeavneil

This was too good ✨. Can't wait to read more jab veer ko hosh aajayega , bani's emotions when she got to know that veer's life was in danger and the flashback convo was truly amazing ❤️ and surprisingly daddy ji has become positive ,accha hai ki bani ne jai ko proper jawab dia ,

Thankyou so much❤️

I too loved Bani ne jawab dia. he needed it.
Will update in a while

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ratna.nanda

Amazing👏👏.I wish show mein bhi aisa kuch dikhae.


Waiting for next part...update soon.

Thankyou😊
I too wish show mein kuch aisa ho


Updating in a while❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveMyself_sri

Waiting for next part..Update soon

Updating in a while😉

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

Hi guys.
I am back with another update.


Part 2


Bani was sitting on the bed waiting for Veer to wake up as according to Panditain in 2-3 hours he should wake up.


She sat there adoring Veer’s sleeping body ‘Veer I swear to God ek bar uth jao tum phir bataungi tumhe. I told you ki khatra hai infact tum dono par hi hai still tumne apna dhyan nahi rakha or kud gaye pani mein, yeh jante hue ki pani mein jate hi tumhari shaktia kam ho jati hai. I I hate you for this Veeranshu Singhania’ she was crying when she heard something.


‘Har chiz ke liye tum hate hi toh karti ho gharwali.’ Veer spoke still, eyes closed.

Bani saw towards him and a smile flashed on her face ‘Veer tum thik ho. Thank God tum thik ho’

She sat near him. Veer opened his eyes and saw her face, he heard everything she said.

‘Sahi kaha na maine? Hate hi karti ho na? ‘ Veer spoke.

Bani spoke ignoring the question ‘tum thik ho?’

Veer replied ‘bahut badiya hu. Tum batao?’

Veer was behaving a bit cold and this thing irritated Bani ‘Veer tum aise kyun baat kar rahe ho?’

Veer was about to reply when Balwant entered ‘Veer tu thik hai? Shukar hai.’

Veer replied ‘ha dad main ek dam thik hu’

Balwant hugged him, happiness was evident on his face.

Bani saw that happiness on his face and also he noticed that Veer was behaving odd only with Bani.

Balwant spoke seeing the bottle kept on the side table ‘yeh kya hai Bani? Veer ko dawai toh tumne laga di thi na?’

Bani replied ‘are vo daddy ji yeh ek or davai di thi Panditain ne kyuki us pani mein jo vish tha usse meri bhi shaktia kamzor hui hai.’

Balwant spoke picking the bottle ‘toh tumne yeh pi kyu nahi? Yeh toh bhari hui hai.’

Bani spoke ‘ don’t worry daddy ji.Aap rakh do. Main pi lungi.’

Balwant spoke ‘yad se pi lena. Abhi main chalta hu tum dono rest karo.’

As Balwant left, Veer too got up to leave ‘kaha ja rahe ho tum?’ Bani asked.

‘Bahar, i need some fresh air.’ Veer replied and he left.

‘Veer tumhe kya hua hai? Aaj tumne vo davai pine ko bhi nahi kaha’ she thought to herself.

She shrugged the thought, took a shawl and followed him.

Veer was sitting on the swing in moonlight when he heard some footsteps approaching him.

‘Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho Bani?’

‘Tumhare sath tumhare piche ayi hu, mujhe bhi fresh air chahiye.’

‘Okay’

After a good 5-10 minutes of silence Bani spoke ‘Veer tumne aaj jo bhi kia thik nahi kia. Yeh jante hue ki mujhe vo visuals dikhe tum us pani mein gaye.’

‘Tumse promise kia tha ki Meera ko protect karunga’

‘Tumhari safety Veer? Tumhe kon protect karega? Socha tumne ek bar bhi?’

‘Sochne vala tha hi kya Bani? Tumhe Meera safe chahiye thi toh maine use bachaya’

Bani yelled this time ‘mujhe tum bhi safe chahiye ho Veer. sirf Meera di nahi. Tumne ek bar bhi nahi socha ki tumhe kuch hota toh mera kya hota?’

Veer spoke ‘tumne kabhi bataya hi nahi Bani ki meri safety bhi important hai or agar mujhe kuch hota toh tumhara kya hota’

Bani saw him in disbelief ‘are you serious Veer? Room mein jab vo sapna aya mujhe tab tumhare hi gale lag kar royi thi na main?’

‘Pata nahi bani tum kabhi achi hoti ho kabhi nahi hoti ho, how am I supposed to know ki tumhare man mein kya hai?’ Veer argued with her.

Bani again tried to speak but she panted for air and coughed, Veer got worried. Bani ignoring her health again tried to speak but this time Veer spoke ‘kahi nahi ja raha main. Yahi hu. Aram se lad lena pehle yeh pio.’ he took out that bottle from his pocket.

Bani saw the bottle and was shocked ‘Veer’ she mumbled.

‘Kya laga tha? Veer tumhari davai bhi bhul gaya blah blah.’ Veer spoke.

Veer made her sit and asked her to drink that ‘pio isse pehle phir baat karte hai’

Bani was continuously looking at him, she didn’t even hold the bottle.

‘Bani pio ise.’ Veer spoke.

Bani replied ‘main nahi pi rahi. Tumhe zada chinta hai toh pila do’

Veer smiled inwardly, he sat with her and held the bottle near her lips.

Bani like a spoiled kid drank from his hands not even touching the bottle.

They sat quietly in each other's company.

Bani was now feeling well.

'Mujhe sach mein laga ki tum davai bhul gaye' she spoke, staring nowhere.

Veer replied 'I can't. Main chahu bhi toh nahi. '

Bani knew now was the time to discuss 'tumhe aisa kyu laga Veer ki sirf Meera di ki jaan important thi tumhari nahi'

'Tumhe aisa kyu lagta hai ki mujhe aisa kyu nahi lagna chahiye tha?'

‘Matlab?’ she asked, confused.

‘Matlab yeh ki tumne kab kaha mujhe ki I am important to you?’

She opened her mouth to reply but couldn't come up with anything.

'Aise toh bahut understanding bane phirte ho, ab kya hua tha? ' she still spoke

'Aise nahi hota Bani. Pata toh hume bohot kuch hota hai but sometimes we want to hear from the other one. Bhagwan nahi hu main, i too lost it. Ha thik hai tumhare case mein patient hu but bura lagta hai Bani. ‘

Bani still argued ‘agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh?’

Veer replied with a giggle ‘toh kuch nahi. Tum us champu chepu dhabe wale se shadi kar leti’

Bani’s mouth formed an O. She was shocked ‘kya kaha tumne?’

Veer replied casually ‘jo tumne suna. Vaise hai kaha vo kabab mein haddi? Kahi dikh nahi raha’

Bani replied ‘umm. Vo gaya’ to which Veer replied ‘kaha gaya? Tum kuch chupa rahi ho sweetheart?’

‘Actually..’ she told him the whole scene.

Veer was shocked ‘toh tumne use bahar nikal diya? Can’t believe it. Mujhe toh laga vo bin manga dahej zindagi bhar sath rahega.’

Bani didn’t like the thing Veer said about JAi because till now she didn’t realise that he was staying with them. And for her sake Veer was tolerating a person he hated the most.

‘Vaise kya keh rahe the uske sath chali jau? Jau phir main?’ Bani asked playfully.

‘Jaan le lunga main uski Bani’ he said with anger in his eyes and then spoke with a pause ‘uske bad apni bhi jaan le lunga’

Bani was smiling but as soon as he said the last line she kept her hand on his mouth ‘Please Veer mat kaho na yeh sab.’

Veer saw the change of expressions from mischief to care, he kissed her fingers.
Bani felt shivers down her spine when his hot lips touched her cold fingers, she closed her eyes in pleasure.

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They both were sitting when Bani took his hand in hers and said ‘tum bahut important ho Veer. I know I never told you because I liked it that way. Lekin I realised agar aaj tumhe kuch bhi ho jata main sach mein afford nahi kar pati. For me it’s only you.

I am sorry I never realised ki maine tumhe kitna hurt kar diya but I swear mujhe tumse better koi nahi mil sakta

And one thing more aaj ke bad mat kehna main kisi or ke sath chali jau because main kisi ke sath nahi jana chahti unless it’s you.’ Saying so She kissed the back of his palm. Veer smiled.

Veer spoke ‘tumne bata dia na ab. Toh ab kabhi nahi kahunga I promise’ saying so Veer started rubbing his hands as it was getting cold ‘Bani andar chale?’

‘I have a better idea’ and she extended her arm and indicated him to lean on her.

Veer asked ‘are you sure?’

Bani spoke faking anger ‘Chodo Veeranshu Singhania. Tum andar hi chalo’

Veer spoke ‘nahi nahi. Yahi baithenge’ he kept his head on her chest and she wrapped her with shawl around him. She smiled at his antics.

Veer spoke more like a whisper ‘I always wanted this Gharwali. Sukoon hai yeh’ his eyes were closed.

Bani spoke feeling the moment ‘sach mein. Sukoon hai.’

Veer tumhe mujhse kabhi nafrat nahi hui? ‘ Bani again initiated a conversation. For some reason she didn’t want this night to end.

Veer replied snuggling more into her warmth ‘nahi. You are the only person in this whole world jise main kabhi nafrat nahi kar sakta. No matter what.’

Bani was so happy and overwhelmed to hear that, she placed a kiss on his forehead ‘you know what I never had a family, I was always incomplete but aaj is pal mein I feel so complete. We, in eachothers arms, are so content. Tumne kaha tha na you will make me want you. Toh yes you were right.

I love you Veer. I want you for the eternity’ she said tightening her hold on him.

Veer shot his head up to see her ‘tum sach keh rahi ho gharwali?’ a tear escaped Veer’s eyes.

Bani too cried seeing his eyes wet, nothing can be more beautiful than this.

Veer tightly hugged Bani ‘I love you gharwali’

Bani too hugged him.

So, how was this guys?

Do tell me how you liked it❤️

Till then take care and spread positivity😊

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