Vani TS : Bahon ke Darmiyan Part 2 Updated on Page 6

Hi guys,

I got this idea after seeing the Precap, I hope you will like it.

'Main tumhe apni bahon mein lena chahta hu, sirf ek bar'

This line took my heart.

Vani OS : Bahon ke Darmiyan

Part 1

‘Main tumhe bahon mein bharna chahta hoon, sirf ek bar.’ this mere line was ringing in her mind.

Flashback starts:

‘Bani main tumhe ek bar apni bahon mein bharna chahta hu’ that thing sent shivers down Bani’s body.

Bani was in her own dilemma because of which it took a lot of time to reply.

Veer started to leave, taking it as a No but Bani stopped him ‘Veeranshu.. Kaha ja rahe ho?’

‘Umm kahi nahi. Vo tyari dekh lu function ki.’ Veer replied, still not facing him.

‘Idhar toh dekho Veer’ Bani spoke to which Veer turned.

He turned only to find Bani extending her arms in the air. That mere gesture brought the brightest smile on Veer’s face which relaxed Bani for some unknown reason.
That smile of his gave her the confidence for a lot of things.

Veer was about to take her in his arms when Ponky came ‘bhai Meera nahi hai. Sab use dhund rahe hai pata nahi kaha gayi’

Bani got panicked ‘nahi hai matlab? Kaha chali gayi Meera di. I told you Veer ki koi bohot badi musibat ane vali hai’

Veer signalled Ponky to leave and then he calmed Bani ‘kuch nahi hoga Meera ko. I promise. Maine kaha tha na main use kuch nahi hone dunga, uski safety meri zimedari hai’

Bani asked ‘or tumhari zimmedari?’ Veer was about to reply but someone called him so he went hurriedly.

Bani didn’t like the fact that he didn’t promise about his safety but for that moment she shrugged the thought.

Meera was under some control because of which Meera jumped into the ocean, Veer who came in search of her saw this.

Without thinking twice he too jumped but not before informing everyone.

Everyone came near the ocean but Bani didn’t allow anyone to go near as she knew something was wrong with the ocean but she herself was all the time near the ocean.

Veer saved Meera using all his powers and pulled her out but in that process he got very weak and automatically got pulled in the water.

Everyone saw this and screamed for Veer. Tapish went and brought Meera.

‘Meera di aap thik ho?’ Bani asked.

Meera spoke ‘main thik hu tu please Veer ko bacha’

Balwant spoke ‘main jata hu use bachane. Yeh koi aam pani nahi hai zarur isme kuch buri shaktia hai’

Bani spoke wiping her tears ‘Daddy ji aap yahi rukiye. Main jati hu. Aap log vaise hi pani mein or weak ho jate ho. Please I will go’

Balwant for the first time kept his hand on her head ‘dhyan se. Apna bhi dhyan rakhna beta’

Bani felt the warmth in that gesture.

Bani was about to go when Jai stopped him ‘main tumhe nahi jane dunga Bani. vo samundra bohot khatarnak hai. Please don’t go’

BAni saw him in disbelief ‘shut up Jai. sun bhi rahe ho kya bol rahe ho? Bhai hai vo tumhara thodi toh insaniyat dikhao.’

Jai spoke ‘Bhai hai toh kya karu? Jaan de du?’

Bani screamed ‘toh mat do. Mera pati hai vo. Or zarurat padi toh main jaan dungi uske liye. Or ab mat rokna rasta mera’

Bani left from there crawling leaving everyone shocked. Except Meera no one knew she had feelings for him. For some reasons Balwant and the brothers were very happy to see this side of Bani for Veer.

Bani went in the water taking Bholenath’s name, as soon as she entered the water she felt herself getting a bit weak. She knew it was gonna happen, that's why she searched for Veer before she got drained and weak.

After searching for around 10 minutes she found Veer unconscious, she hurriedly went to him and using all her powers and strength pulled her out of the water.

She pulled her out and with everyone’s help she took him to a safer place.

‘Veer apni ankhein kholo. Please.’ Bani pleaded to VeerVeer, tears were flowing

Balwant too spoke ‘Veer beta aankhen khol please. Dekh hum sab yahi hai. ‘

Bani was crying continuously.

‘Bani ek baar main tumhe bahon mein bharna chahta hu.’

‘Tumhare sath rahunga jab tak rakh na ho jau.’

‘Or tumhari zimeddari?’

All these last moments were flashing in front of her eyes.

‘nahi . nahi. Kuch nahi hoga tumhe. Main hone nahi dungi Veer.’ she wiped her tears and got up.

‘Daddy ji aap log veer ko lekar ghar jaiye main abhi ati hu’

Bani went to the mandir and spoke Panditain ‘jai Bholenath Panditain ji’

Panditain spoke blessing her ‘sada suhagan raho Adi Naagin’

Bani was happy hearing that, she spoke ‘panditain ji Vo jo samudra ka pani tha usne Meri behen or pati ko lapete mein le lia. Veer behosh hai. Vo thik ho jaega na? '

Panditain spoke ‘Adi Nagin apke jane ke bad mujhe pata laga ki us jal mein vish tha jo aapki or unki shaktion ko cheen sakta tha itna hi nahi unki jaan ko khatra hai bhi ho sakta hai.’

Panditain gave her some medicine and spoke ‘aapko yeh marham unke pure shareer par lagana hai or sath mein Bholenath ka jaap karna hai. 2-3 ghante mein unhe hosh aa jana chahiye. Or Adi nagin yeh aushadhi apko pini hai taki apki shaktion ko jo nuksan hua hai uski bharpai ho sake.’

Bani agreed to her and went to Singhania’s.

‘Daddy ji main le ayi is zeher ka tod’ Bani spoke as she entered the room.

All were standing there helpless.

‘Bani please jaldi lagao ise. Please’ Balwant pleaded.

Bani applied the medicine on his body reciting that mantra.

Jaii spoke ‘Bani vo mar chuka hai. Tum kyu apna time or efforts barbaad kar rahi ho?’

Bani got angry, she got up and held his neck ‘Jai main akhri bar tumhe samjha rahi hu. Apni yeh bakwas band karo. Varna main tumhari jaan lelungi.’

Jai was shocked he choked ‘Bani chodo mujhe.’

Meera too spoke ‘Bani chod use. Abhi Veer important hai.’

Bani spoke dangerously ‘ainda apni shakal mat dikhana. Or main Veer ko kuch nahi hone dungi. Now Get out’

Jai for once got scared seeing her so angry. Everyone present in that room got scared of Bani.

Jai went from there.

‘Daddy ji aap log bhi jaiye. Veer ko hosh ane mein kuch time lagega’ Bani spoke now exhausted.

Everyone left the room and Bani sat on the sofa crying ‘Bholenath apne yeh thik nahi kia. Aapko marna hi tha toh mujhe marna tha. Har Bar Veer ki jaan kyu khatre mein hoti hai meri vajah se?’

She cried badly when she felt a hand on her head, she shot her head up expecting it to be Veer but it was Daddy ji.

She wiped her tears and spoke ‘Daddy ji aap yaha? Kuch chahiye?’

Balwant sat with her on the sofa. ‘Bani woh thik ho jaega.’

Bani who was holding her tears back broke hearing that ‘Daddy ji. I can’t lose him. Vo kabhi meri bat nahi manta’

Balwant spoke ‘vo thik ho jaega. Vo Veeranshu Singhania hai use kuch nahi ho sakta. Or tumhare hote toh bilkul bhi nahi.’

Bani smiled.

‘Ab main chalta hu. Tum bhi aram karo, kuch chahiye ho toh batana.’

Bani nodded. She closed the door when he left.

For the very first time I wrote something of my imagination, I mean I have always wrote the scenes which I felt should be there after watching the show. But for the first time I wrote it according to me.

So, please bear with me.

Next update will be full of Vani scenes😍.

Do tell me how you liked it.

Till then take care guys❤

Beautiful! You potrayed bani's emotions very well.

Nice, you write so well

Padhte hue aisa lag raha tha ki sach mei show mein aisa ho raha hai like I literally watching the show

I want to see same happen in the show also.

this was next level good hayeeee 🥰

kal ache se comment karungi, last one mein bhi sorry itna der se aayi 🙃 but saare comments kal post karti hoon & plssss update soon 💃🏻

Awesome loved it...Very nice.update soon

Aiiiiyo

Well in your fan from Asya days. Thirlled to find you here too.

Amazing episode. Plz continue soonish... Waiting here.

Kahin to Balwant kisi kaam aaya!😆

Very nicely written dear!👏

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Hi guys,

I got this idea after seeing the Precap, I hope you will like it.

'Main tumhe apni bahon mein lena chahta hu, sirf ek bar'

This line took my heart.

Vani OS : Bahon ke Darmiyan

Part 1

‘Main tumhe bahon mein bharna chahta hoon, sirf ek bar.’ this mere line was ringing in her mind.

Flashback starts:

‘Bani main tumhe ek bar apni bahon mein bharna chahta hu’ that thing sent shivers down Bani’s body.

Bani was in her own dilemma because of which it took a lot of time to reply.

Veer started to leave, taking it as a No but Bani stopped him ‘Veeranshu.. Kaha ja rahe ho?’

‘Umm kahi nahi. Vo tyari dekh lu function ki.’ Veer replied, still not facing him.

‘Idhar toh dekho Veer’ Bani spoke to which Veer turned.

He turned only to find Bani extending her arms in the air. That mere gesture brought the brightest smile on Veer’s face which relaxed Bani for some unknown reason.
That smile of his gave her the confidence for a lot of things.

Veer was about to take her in his arms when Ponky came ‘bhai Meera nahi hai. Sab use dhund rahe hai pata nahi kaha gayi’

Bani got panicked ‘nahi hai matlab? Kaha chali gayi Meera di. I told you Veer ki koi bohot badi musibat ane vali hai’

Veer signalled Ponky to leave and then he calmed Bani ‘kuch nahi hoga Meera ko. I promise. Maine kaha tha na main use kuch nahi hone dunga, uski safety meri zimedari hai’

Bani asked ‘or tumhari zimmedari?’ Veer was about to reply but someone called him so he went hurriedly.

Bani didn’t like the fact that he didn’t promise about his safety but for that moment she shrugged the thought.

Meera was under some control because of which Meera jumped into the ocean, Veer who came in search of her saw this.

Without thinking twice he too jumped but not before informing everyone.

Everyone came near the ocean but Bani didn’t allow anyone to go near as she knew something was wrong with the ocean but she herself was all the time near the ocean.

Veer saved Meera using all his powers and pulled her out but in that process he got very weak and automatically got pulled in the water.

Everyone saw this and screamed for Veer. Tapish went and brought Meera.

‘Meera di aap thik ho?’ Bani asked.

Meera spoke ‘main thik hu tu please Veer ko bacha’

Balwant spoke ‘main jata hu use bachane. Yeh koi aam pani nahi hai zarur isme kuch buri shaktia hai’

Bani spoke wiping her tears ‘Daddy ji aap yahi rukiye. Main jati hu. Aap log vaise hi pani mein or weak ho jate ho. Please I will go’

Balwant for the first time kept his hand on her head ‘dhyan se. Apna bhi dhyan rakhna beta’

Bani felt the warmth in that gesture.

Bani was about to go when Jai stopped him ‘main tumhe nahi jane dunga Bani. vo samundra bohot khatarnak hai. Please don’t go’

BAni saw him in disbelief ‘shut up Jai. sun bhi rahe ho kya bol rahe ho? Bhai hai vo tumhara thodi toh insaniyat dikhao.’

Jai spoke ‘Bhai hai toh kya karu? Jaan de du?’

Bani screamed ‘toh mat do. Mera pati hai vo. Or zarurat padi toh main jaan dungi uske liye. Or ab mat rokna rasta mera’

Bani left from there crawling leaving everyone shocked. Except Meera no one knew she had feelings for him. For some reasons Balwant and the brothers were very happy to see this side of Bani for Veer.

Bani went in the water taking Bholenath’s name, as soon as she entered the water she felt herself getting a bit weak. She knew it was gonna happen, that's why she searched for Veer before she got drained and weak.

After searching for around 10 minutes she found Veer unconscious, she hurriedly went to him and using all her powers and strength pulled her out of the water.

She pulled her out and with everyone’s help she took him to a safer place.

‘Veer apni ankhein kholo. Please.’ Bani pleaded to VeerVeer, tears were flowing

Balwant too spoke ‘Veer beta aankhen khol please. Dekh hum sab yahi hai. ‘

Bani was crying continuously.

‘Bani ek baar main tumhe bahon mein bharna chahta hu.’

‘Tumhare sath rahunga jab tak rakh na ho jau.’

‘Or tumhari zimeddari?’

All these last moments were flashing in front of her eyes.

‘nahi . nahi. Kuch nahi hoga tumhe. Main hone nahi dungi Veer.’ she wiped her tears and got up.

‘Daddy ji aap log veer ko lekar ghar jaiye main abhi ati hu’

Bani went to the mandir and spoke Panditain ‘jai Bholenath Panditain ji’

Panditain spoke blessing her ‘sada suhagan raho Adi Naagin’

Bani was happy hearing that, she spoke ‘panditain ji Vo jo samudra ka pani tha usne Meri behen or pati ko lapete mein le lia. Veer behosh hai. Vo thik ho jaega na? '

Panditain spoke ‘Adi Nagin apke jane ke bad mujhe pata laga ki us jal mein vish tha jo aapki or unki shaktion ko cheen sakta tha itna hi nahi unki jaan ko khatra hai bhi ho sakta hai.’

Panditain gave her some medicine and spoke ‘aapko yeh marham unke pure shareer par lagana hai or sath mein Bholenath ka jaap karna hai. 2-3 ghante mein unhe hosh aa jana chahiye. Or Adi nagin yeh aushadhi apko pini hai taki apki shaktion ko jo nuksan hua hai uski bharpai ho sake.’

Bani agreed to her and went to Singhania’s.

‘Daddy ji main le ayi is zeher ka tod’ Bani spoke as she entered the room.

All were standing there helpless.

‘Bani please jaldi lagao ise. Please’ Balwant pleaded.

Bani applied the medicine on his body reciting that mantra.

Jaii spoke ‘Bani vo mar chuka hai. Tum kyu apna time or efforts barbaad kar rahi ho?’

Bani got angry, she got up and held his neck ‘Jai main akhri bar tumhe samjha rahi hu. Apni yeh bakwas band karo. Varna main tumhari jaan lelungi.’

Jai was shocked he choked ‘Bani chodo mujhe.’

Meera too spoke ‘Bani chod use. Abhi Veer important hai.’

Bani spoke dangerously ‘ainda apni shakal mat dikhana. Or main Veer ko kuch nahi hone dungi. Now Get out’

Jai for once got scared seeing her so angry. Everyone present in that room got scared of Bani.

Jai went from there.

‘Daddy ji aap log bhi jaiye. Veer ko hosh ane mein kuch time lagega’ Bani spoke now exhausted.

Everyone left the room and Bani sat on the sofa crying ‘Bholenath apne yeh thik nahi kia. Aapko marna hi tha toh mujhe marna tha. Har Bar Veer ki jaan kyu khatre mein hoti hai meri vajah se?’

She cried badly when she felt a hand on her head, she shot her head up expecting it to be Veer but it was Daddy ji.

She wiped her tears and spoke ‘Daddy ji aap yaha? Kuch chahiye?’

Balwant sat with her on the sofa. ‘Bani woh thik ho jaega.’

Bani who was holding her tears back broke hearing that ‘Daddy ji. I can’t lose him. Vo kabhi meri bat nahi manta’

Balwant spoke ‘vo thik ho jaega. Vo Veeranshu Singhania hai use kuch nahi ho sakta. Or tumhare hote toh bilkul bhi nahi.’

Bani smiled.

‘Ab main chalta hu. Tum bhi aram karo, kuch chahiye ho toh batana.’

Bani nodded. She closed the door when he left.

For the very first time I wrote something of my imagination, I mean I have always wrote the scenes which I felt should be there after watching the show. But for the first time I wrote it according to me.

So, please bear with me.

Next update will be full of Vani scenes😍.

Do tell me how you liked it.

Till then take care guys❤

So nice❤️🤗You should have continued it😒 Eagerly waiting for you next update...Continue soon

Originally posted by: libran90

Kahin to Balwant kisi kaam aaya!😆

Very nicely written dear!👏

Even I had the same thought. 🤣Thank god at least now Balwant gets the screen space 👏

Originally posted by: Berlin2220

Even I had the same thought. 🤣Thank god at least now Balwant gets the screen space 👏

😆