BeHir Memory Loss Part 4 UPDATED. - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarahgul

ASH ASH ASH..

Kya bolu main. Wow 👏👏👏 I love it. I want n3 to hire you. You can help them with some logical tracks upar se give us behir romance jo hum behirians ko kush kar de.. 😆😆😆

Bela kitni naughty nikli lekin hamare mahirji bhi kam nahi.. 😆😆

I loved the way you used all the characters soo good. Like belas mother, chuhi and sumi.
Very good.

Bela should do some team work with her family like you showed.. It would give so much sense and will be good to see how a Naagin family helps to unite behir.. 😳😳




I think SJ and PVP might just end up murdering me for making them do these scenes. 😉😆


But thanks yaar.

Yes even I would like to see the naagin family helping Bella. Their slogan all for one, one for all is sounding more and more bogus these days. 😡
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Posted: 6 years ago
#22

😃 Thanks!!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: tashi96

This was amazing! Wish something like this actually happens in the show too! 😆



Thanks. Sab ki yehi dil ki tamana hai jo maine lafzon main bayan ki hai. 😃😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: komlika

Thank you for writing this Story for us

It's beautiful

Well written

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Thanks Kom!!🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: crusty


Ash baba, what I enjoyed most is how you cleverly pointed some crafty fingers at these kameene writers and bashed them low-key in the initial parts 😆

😆😉


That's some roaring fire there, Ash. Woah! And I swear I was going to protest Mahir wouldn't do this with random girl and then you drop the sweet bomb that he was pretending! Then I went to - he would definitely do it if he knew it's his Bela! 😳


Yes he would never do it with any random girl but then with his Bela... ☺️ Anything is possibls. 😆


Humare naseeb mein itna pyaar ki barsaat nahi hai par,


Humare nasseb main bhi thoda pyar toh milege hi hume.


Another lip brush is good enough for me and on-screen Mahirji, for me to forget everything and for him to remember everything 🤣


Yes ab toh memory bhi agar intact ho na toh main 101 rupiyon ka prasad cadhau main.


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice os dear
Loved it
Hope they will show half of this in show so that will be more than enough of all of us
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice os dear
Loved it
Hope they will show half of this in show so that will be more than enough of all of us



Thank you dear!! 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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😆😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
#29
Khafhi creative hai!!!!
Superb writing skills u have dear!!!
Waiting for more and more and more from you!!!
Awesome OS👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
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oh teri maine to ye vekhya hi nahi

credits ash 😭 rula diya tune aaj ruk ro k aati hu

after buckets of crying

you so serious about redemption chalo getting on track still not there but efforts are on( i am hell greedy and not getting convinced so fast type)

bella sleeping in mahirs arms thodi der k liye LALALAND me chali gayi dont write such sentence it hurts😭😭 even more now

her sister is not gullible she is torturable only😡😡 chuhiya

purple ka real name is ex-naagrani baiganiya kumari nagin aka purple menance

mindless senseless emtionless hormoneless mumma's boy - zombie i guess that day while attacking mahir she sucked all the grey matter from his brain.

bella is feeling exactly like us started watching supernatural show and it turned now nothing more than passing the parcel game of biwis naagmani and crown kabhi yaha kabhi waha with saas bahu saga ka flavour.

will they continue sharing room like bella's marriage now that didi and bhaiya are getting married.

why you make so many logical questions to pop up you know my mind dont register it. It stopped using logic for N3 and here you are giving it so much stress.

where will naagrani sue sehgals naglok ya bombay HC

aghori baba here amking an appearance with flu powder and in serial he is reachable only through phone. too much powder i guess in his eyes and mind

server appraoching him with lusty eyes and hurtful expression😆😆😆
bella and nmom becoming giddh and flying away😆😆😆 this was hilarious😆😆😆
haveli heavily guarded i just hope they are in sound proof room.

bella aa gayi apne original roop me

Nmom yaha ek mom hai bache ko virgin marna chahti hai aur dusri hai jo pinky meera bunty dhruv sabko bulana chahti hai. what oh please you dont expect that with so much pent emotions they will have just 2 kids😉😉

kisses and kisses what she thought that it will be punishment for him that she is seducing him. bella needs to understand few things about her hubby. she teasing but she herself needs to control 😆😆

bella decoding his expression and he being so cryptic was best. why cant we have him faking in serial.

mahirji tied up and bella ji untying herself yar that was hot how amazing that would be in serial mahir ki memory loss to chodo virginity loss jarur ho jayega

both people suing each other bhai inke liye ek court alag se lagwao for molestation😉😉

kya bat hai this was good both being so uncontrollable and how come they will just stop making out. finally the forbidden fruit is 😉😉

too good

i hope things get descriptive somewhere else

bella can pretend also but mahirji how will he pretend that nothing happened specially when he lost his only treasured thing his virginity sumi will die of heartattack.

amazing girl specially in such desperate times when things are going upside down in every sense

thank you girl for taking out time and making us happy👏👏

i love you so much for this








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