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Posted: 6 years ago
#31
Will mail u hundred kisses sweetyšŸ˜†
Perfect ML ,perfect kiddnapping

Bold naagrani & smart too.

Finally maahir'ji defeated because of his poor self-control harmon

That gidd part & maahirji's condition🤣

Poor himšŸ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago
#32
Hopefully the cv will be half as meherbani as you are.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#33
Hey! I hope u didn't mind me running off after my last comment. It was as if someone cast a spell of business on me, couldn't even come online :(

Anyways reading your OS is the first thing i did and oh god, i didn't know Ash that you are as naughty as Preeti when it comes to BeHiršŸ˜†

I really liked that part where Bela figures out that Mahir had been lying to her all this time, it seems so realistic, i wish something of this sort happens for real in n3

Overall really enjoyed reading it, the part where Bela decided to transform into gidh was really funny
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Posted: 6 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Dewaanihui

Khafhi creative hai!!!!

Superb writing skills u have dear!!!
Waiting for more and more and more from you!!!
Awesome OSšŸ‘


Thanks Deewani!! You can check out my FFs We Are Different, Hate You Like I love You and Hum Bane Tum Bane Ek Dooje Ke Liye if you want. šŸ˜‰

One is romantic, one intense and emotional and one is for fulfilling readers fantasies. šŸ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: behirlover

oh teri maine to ye vekhya hi nahi

credits ash 😭 rula diya tune aaj ruk ro k aati hu

after buckets of crying

Does that mean my redemption is complete? Sorry I had completely forgotten to reply to comments on this one. šŸ˜”

you so serious about redemption chalo getting on track still not there but efforts are on( i am hell greedy and not getting convinced so fast type)


Please!!Pleading Face on Emojipedia 11.1


bella sleeping in mahirs arms thodi der k liye LALALAND me chali gayi dont write such sentence it hurts😭😭 even more now

Aare think about their SR. They will soon be in each other's arms.


her sister is not gullible she is torturable only😔😔 chuhiya

Aare Bella ke liya she is gullible right? Behen ka pyar and all. šŸ˜†šŸ˜†


purple ka real name is ex-naagrani baiganiya kumari nagin aka purple menance


For me she is desperate evil Sasu ma!!!😈


mindless senseless emtionless hormoneless mumma's boy - zombie i guess that day while attacking mahir she sucked all the grey matter from his brain.

I think she sucked out all the hormones as well. Warna itani hot ladki khud jake cheek kiss de rahi hai aur yeh bahi saab zombies bane khade hai!!😔


bella is feeling exactly like us started watching supernatural show and it turned now nothing more than passing the parcel game of biwis naagmani and crown kabhi yaha kabhi waha with saas bahu saga ka flavour.


Mahir is more like the trophy. And the bed will be feeling so sorry. Ek ko badi mushkil se yaha tak laya tha yeh. ab usko chod ke kisi aur ko le aya.


will they continue sharing room like bella's marriage now that didi and bhaiya are getting married.


You juat gave me mind blowing idea girl. I might end writing a second shot for this one. 😃


why you make so many logical questions to pop up you know my mind dont register it. It stopped using logic for N3 and here you are giving it so much stress.


Kya karu, aadat se majboor hu!!


where will naagrani sue sehgals naglok ya bombay HC


In naaglok where the punishment is keeping the original husband wife in an enclosed room till they produce an heir. 😈


aghori baba here amking an appearance with flu powder and in serial he is reachable only through phone. too much powder i guess in his eyes and mind


flu powder?? 🤣 He doesn't require fire. Iski pwder kahipe bhi cha;l jati hai!!


server appraoching him with lusty eyes and hurtful expressionšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†


I wanted to add that but then thought that it would be too much!

bella and nmom becoming giddh and flying awayšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† this was hilariousšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
haveli heavily guarded i just hope they are in sound proof room.


Sound proof room, don't worry. No one will dare to go there when naagrani is making out with Naagraj!


bella aa gayi apne original roop me

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Nmom yaha ek mom hai bache ko virgin marna chahti hai aur dusri hai jo pinky meera bunty dhruv sabko bulana chahti hai. what oh please you dont expect that with so much pent emotions they will have just 2 kidsšŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰


They can have have as many as they want. I have given them a NOC.


kisses and kisses what she thought that it will be punishment for him that she is seducing him. bella needs to understand few things about her hubby. she teasing but she herself needs to control šŸ˜†šŸ˜†


She is the Naagrani. She is the epitome of control.


bella decoding his expression and he being so cryptic was best. why cant we have him faking in serial.

All we get is zombie😔


mahirji tied up and bella ji untying herself yar that was hot how amazing that would be in serial mahir ki memory loss to chodo virginity loss jarur ho jayega


Now I will be happy if they just manage to leave the mandap.


both people suing each other bhai inke liye ek court alag se lagwao for molestationšŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰

Jaroorat nahi. Naaglok wali punishment sunke Mahirji aapani complaint wapas lelenge. šŸ˜†


kya bat hai this was good both being so uncontrollable and how come they will just stop making out. finally the forbidden fruit is šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰

😳


too good

i hope things get descriptive somewhere else

bella can pretend also but mahirji how will he pretend that nothing happened specially when he lost his only treasured thing his virginity sumi will die of heartattack.


Let her die. 😈 BeHir can kiss when er funeral pyre is burning.

amazing girl specially in such desperate times when things are going upside down in every sense

thank you girl for taking out time and making us happyšŸ‘šŸ‘

i love you so much for this


Love you too preeti!!



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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maria.Jewel

Okay so i am here only because of claire and mafaazašŸ˜‰ (you should pay them nowšŸ˜‰šŸ˜†)

At first i wanted to start with your FF but then i saw the title which says chapter 38! Did you seriously write 38 chapters!?😲Reading your FF means taking out a LOT of timešŸ˜† Its going to be like reading a novel, Isliye main OS parhne agayi, short kaamšŸ˜†

Okay so what do i see as soon as i set my eyes? MY NAME! my name!?
I think this is the first time i have been dedicated an OSā¤ļøšŸ¤—
I still haven't started reading your OS abhi tak😳, first post dekh ke dil garden garden hogaya ...hence this comment.
Let me read and then give a proper comment😃



Their payment has already been made. By publicity agents are so easy to please. Just give them a romantic chapter and they will be happy. šŸ˜†


Total chapter count is close to 48 in that one. Take your time dear. 😳


Yes, I love you all a LOT!!! šŸ¤—
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Posted: 6 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: mafaaza12

Will mail u hundred kisses sweetyšŸ˜†

Perfect ML ,perfect kiddnapping

Bold naagrani & smart too.

Finally maahir'ji defeated because of his poor self-control harmon

That gidd part & maahirji's condition🤣

Poor himšŸ˜†
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I had hoped that we will get perfect kidnapping in the serial as well but... šŸ¤”

😃
Well thank you for the appreciation.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball

Hopefully the cv will be half as meherbani as you are.



These people stalk our forum and give us watered down versions of our ideas. I know, we all wanted N Mom to be involved but not as Bella's weakness. We wanted her as her strength. Kahir nothing we can do about it. 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Uff such a hot story. Me still blushing😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maria.Jewel

Hey! I hope u didn't mind me running off after my last comment. It was as if someone cast a spell of business on me, couldn't even come online :(


So happy that you are busy. I know how things get when they become suddenly busy!

Anyways reading your OS is the first thing i did and oh god, i didn't know Ash that you are as naughty as Preeti when it comes to BeHiršŸ˜†

Not as much as her. But trying to get there. 😃


I really liked that part where Bela figures out that Mahir had been lying to her all this time, it seems so realistic, i wish something of this sort happens for real in n3

Wishful thinking Mari!


Overall really enjoyed reading it, the part where Bela decided to transform into gidh was really funny

Thanks dear!.šŸ˜†šŸ˜ƒ


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