BeHir Memory Loss Part 4 UPDATED.

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Priya

@Priya258

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Wow amazing I just loved it

Excellent Ash👏

I don't know what makers gonna show but by reading this OS I got a satisfaction

Atleast in this Mahir got to know about Purple's evil intention and marrying Vish is just a plan.

Loved how Bela teased him😉

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Alemurity

@Lunamovas

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#12

Sabki tamanna poori wat a wrote

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Wat a bold side of bela u showed..

though it will never happen in serial its really good to imagine bold bela

flirting and teasing her hubby

Finally Mumma's boy gave up and became a gentle hubby Lol

Do make such writeups often ash

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Maria

@Maria.Jewel

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#14

Okay so i am here only because of claire and mafaaza😉 (you should pay them now😉😆)

At first i wanted to start with your FF but then i saw the title which says chapter 38! Did you seriously write 38 chapters!?😲Reading your FF means taking out a LOT of time😆 Its going to be like reading a novel, Isliye main OS parhne agayi, short kaam😆

Okay so what do i see as soon as i set my eyes? MY NAME! my name!?

I think this is the first time i have been dedicated an OS❤️🤗

I still haven't started reading your OS abhi tak😳, first post dekh ke dil garden garden hogaya ...hence this comment.

Let me read and then give a proper comment😃

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The.Wanderer

@The.Wanderer

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: fibrinogen9
Now this is the way to cope 😆

Ash 🤗

I have no idea how I managed to read this at work, with poker face 😆

Ps- illogical?!
Which show have you been watching babe?
😉
Logic ko bohat peeche chodiya hai cvs ne, this makes more sense than the actual track 😆

Thanks Fibby!! 🤗

You are really amazing if you managed to read anything related to BeHir with poker face. 😲The mere mention of BeHir makes me blush. ☺️

And I did not want to stoop to the Cv's level. I wanted to make basic sense when I wrote this. I am glad the it is making sense. 😛😳

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The.Wanderer

@The.Wanderer

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Vrishthi04
So hot I want to go for a shower

Don't know why but seems like ur story is gonna be true with the bts n story going like there's full possibilities of bella kidnapping mahir n mahir obviously remembering everything... .

@Bold ☺️

I hope Bella really manages to kidnap him and he remembers everything. 😳

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Sarah Gul

@sarahgul

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#17

ASH ASH ASH..

Kya bolu main. Wow 👏👏👏 I love it. I want n3 to hire you. You can help them with some logical tracks upar se give us behir romance jo hum behirians ko kush kar de.. 😆😆😆

Bela kitni naughty nikli lekin hamare mahirji bhi kam nahi.. 😆😆

I loved the way you used all the characters soo good. Like belas mother, chuhi and sumi.

Very good.

Bela should do some team work with her family like you showed.. It would give so much sense and will be good to see how a Naagin family helps to unite behir.. 😳😳