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Maria

@Maria.Jewel

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Posted: 6 years ago

#71

@Sarah i am going to read the rest of the chapters tomorrow, too.sleepy right now

@claire being a PR head, its your job to bring the others here ;)

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Maria

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Posted: 6 years ago

#72

Okay read chapter 3 and oh my my Sarah! God i never knew you were such an amazing writer! Your descriptions of the hotel, the taxi, the hotel room, washroom, the internet cafe...I seriously feel as if i am reading some best seller novel by a famous writer. Girl you describe so well!

And oh and the part where Mahir has his own moment of reflection where he is thinking of Bela

He wished he could stare at her as she breathed in all the details.

A small sentence and yet conveying so many feelings <3

And then Bela's experience in the internet cafe was beautifully described again! Bela's nervousness and the pain :(

I just love love how you have managed to show Bela and Mahir individually thinking of each other in each chapter so far <3

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Maria

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Posted: 6 years ago

#73

Also what inspired you to come up with such a bathroom? A shower over the toilet🤣🤣 LOL

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Maria

@Maria.Jewel

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Posted: 6 years ago

#74

Sarah i don't think i can do justice with a mere comment for chapter 4 and 5. You did a remarkable job with Mahir Bela's chat! Making it so so realistic! The awkwardness, their jokes, the anticipation all blended so well!!!!👏

I think thats what the best thing about your FF is that is so realistic!!!

Also that scene of Anu mopping off the water from the floor was really funny!🤣

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The.Wanderer

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: Maria.Jewel
Also what inspired you to come up with such a bathroom? A shower over the toilet 🤣🤣 LOL

I have unfortunately seen one such bathroom in a hotel. It made showering very awkward. 😕😆🤣

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The.Wanderer

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Posted: 6 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Maria.Jewel
Sarah i don't think i can do justice with a mere comment for chapter 4 and 5. You did a remarkable job with Mahir Bela's chat! Making it so so realistic! The awkwardness, their jokes, the anticipation all blended so well!!!! 👏
I think thats what the best thing about your FF is that is so realistic!!!

Also that scene of Anu mopping off the water from the floor was really funny!🤣

Yeah Anu mopping floor was very satisfying somehow. Even though I knew that this Anu is way more sensible, it made me feel very good. 😆

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Maria

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Posted: 6 years ago

#77

oh Sarah!!! WHat are you!??

i am out of words after reading chp 6 and 7 and it makes me sad because chp 8 is the last one for now.

Mahir and Anu's breakup was amazingly written! I am glad that Mahir didn't chicken out and propose Anu out of obligation. It was great to know that Mahir didnt say sorry or anything and instead just checked out of the hotel😆

Mahir's meeting with Bela was pure magic! I can imagine the dance, the music, the snow everything!

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Maria

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Posted: 6 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: sarahgul
Eventually she found it. There, on page 120 staring back at her, was the translation. Her face reddened; her heart felt like it was ready to leap from her chest.
I'm in love with you.
Sono innamorata di te.
Bela was stunned. She had to have remembered his words incorrectly. There was no way that he would have uttered that translation, especially if he was in Rome with Anu.

WHAT WHAT WHAT!

😲😲😲

☺️

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Maria

@Maria.Jewel

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Posted: 6 years ago

#79

omg the misunderstanding between them was so on point! Of course Bela was confused at that time and then later Mahir didn't want to showcase his 'stupidity'.

Mahir bhi pagal hai, he kept on pursuing Bela when he knew she was engaged! It was natural for Bela to feel guilty just like he felt guilty thinking about Bela when he was involved with Anu.

I take back my words, this Mahir is not like our Mahir ji😆 Mahir ji would have never let go of Bela :(

But i am really glad both of them met and talked :D

Oh and Sarah how do you come up with such realistic and yet romantic details? Their meeting at "portico at Santa Maria in Cosmedin" i have no idea about this place but your descriptions were perfect! And like overall the whole conversation starting with the jokes and then getting to the point, the transition was beautiful!

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fortitudeoth

@fortitudeoth

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Posted: 6 years ago

#80

You are finished Maria 👏. A few more stories to go!

I can see Ash was following your reading too.

Sarah, you are full of talent. Keep writing and sharing your chapters with us 🤗

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