Italy our new destination - Behir FF New Chapter 10 LAST updated - Page 12

Hi Sarah 🤗

I made you wait for this comment just like you made me wait for your update. I'm made Ash wait too but I'm finally going to review the chapters 🤣

You have ended this beautiful story 😭. Please come back soon with another one. I hope your cell mate will inspire you soon 😉

This was such an amazing chapter. I loved it! You tied everything perfectly together . They danced together again but this time she introduced him as her boyfriend!

The scenes and the dialogues are so perfect. Nothing is every forced in your chapters!

I have no words. You are my very talented buddy 👏

Now write another story! 😆

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer

Sure darling. Anytime. You just let me know.

And about the review. I HATE goodbyes. But for you I will review this chapter.

It was a beautiful story. Not too dramatic, not too far fetched. It was a relatable story that had a proper start, middle and end. Thanks for not making Any the vamp. No one goes on a revenge spree after getting dumped. Especially not the educated and the self respecting types. So Anu fading away was the best part about the story.

I loved the conversations thatBeHir had on the net. They were natural like any normal person would have. I can't describe it right but the conversations flowed but there was an undertone of awkwardness of the hidden feelings that they both had .It was so beautifully explored. 😳We readers were constantly aware that something had happened that made these two individuals so awkward. Those conversations gave an hint of how easy flowing and comfortable that relationship once was. Those were the second best part of the story for me.

Their first time together was too beautiful. It was not perfect but taht is what made it perfect. I am I love with how you described the emotions. 😳

Overall great story although a short one. I loved it. 🤗

Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball

Life is but a dream, when one wakes up so much has changed. All the events of life pass by like a fleeting horse, in the blink of an eye. In just recent months, the changes in the world have already caused upheaval. As two geese that parted ways.

Originally posted by: fortitudeoth

Hi Sarah 🤗

I made you wait for this comment just like you made me wait for your update. I'm made Ash wait too but I'm finally going to review the chapters 🤣

You have ended this beautiful story 😭. Please come back soon with another one. I hope your cell mate will inspire you soon 😉

This was such an amazing chapter. I loved it! You tied everything perfectly together . They danced together again but this time she introduced him as her boyfriend!

The scenes and the dialogues are so perfect. Nothing is every forced in your chapters!

I have no words. You are my very talented buddy 👏

Now write another story! 😆

It was awesome update
Loved it
Mahir surprise was nice.
He transferred to buffalo to be with her.
It was well written story
Thanks