Italy our new destination - Behir FF New Chapter 10 LAST updated - Page 10

That means i was right wasn't i?🤣

Originally posted by: sarahgul

Thank you. 😊

No one more chapter to goo.

I will come up with a new story soon.. 😉

Originally posted by: sarahgul

Thank you. 😊

No one more chapter to goo.

I will come up with a new story soon.. 😉

Originally posted by: Maria.Jewel

That means i was right wasn't i?🤣

i will give your chapter a proper review at night :)

Yesss Maria you already Saw that coming !! 😆 👏

Intezaar for your review 😉

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer

Sarah ARE YOU SERIOUSLY ENDING THIS???😡😡

I am NOT talking to you.😭🤢

Yaar i am not that good as you haha.

I always had 10 Chapters in my mind 😆 i dont how to continue it.. boring na hojaye.. so keeping it to 10 Chapters 🤣

BUT I AM COMING WITH A NEW STORY!! I will need your feedback for that.

@maria - I am coming with a New story .. 🤗

Originally posted by: sarahgul

Yaar i am not that good as you haha.

I always had 10 Chapters in my mind 😆 i dont how to continue it.. boring na hojaye.. so keeping it to 10 Chapters 🤣

BUT I AM COMING WITH A NEW STORY!! I will need your feedback for that.

@maria - I am coming with a New story .. 🤗

Hi buddy! 🤗

I'm a little late with my review. But as promised, here it is.

When I finished reading this chapter, I knew the end of this story was near.

This was amazing Sarah! I don't know which other word to use.

One thing that I love about your stories is how real you make everything. Nothing is forced to fit the scene or story. Your writing is perfect and your details are very clear.

But I have one complaint. I missed your Italian this time.

Ash, I couldn't agree more about wishing to write like Preeti. I wish this everytime someone updates a chapter, but this time I'm going to try it!

I'll be reviewing each part of your chapter Sarah. Be ready! 😈

Mahir didn't have the perfect date planned but he didn't need to. They're both so simple with their love. They don't need to go on fancy dates.

They went to the hotel 🤣. You are imagining Behir's SR too much that you had to include THAT here. I will need to promote this chapter so that everyone sees your version.

Behir are both very funny. They can make jokes in almost every situation they face. It's amazing 👏

Mahir trips on a shoe 🤣. Very smooth! But it's so real 😆

You wrote about THAT perfectly! You didn't need to describe too much in detail but we could still understand what is happening in the scene.

The conversation after is so needed and again perfect. Then they do it again hahaha.

This is just perfect. Amazing update Sarah 👏

I'll be waiting for your next chapter. Please update soon

It's sad that this story is coming to an end next chapter but it looks like Ash will be punishing you for making this story short so I will wait to see what she decides.

I can't wait to see what story you write next. I just have one request: MAKE IT A LONG STORY

I hope I was able to provide a good review of this chapter 😃

Originally posted by: fortitudeoth

Hi buddy! 🤗

I'm a little late with my review. But as promised, here it is.

When I finished reading this chapter, I knew the end of this story was near.

This was amazing Sarah! I don't know which other word to use.

One thing that I love about your stories is how real you make everything. Nothing is forced to fit the scene or story. Your writing is perfect and your details are very clear.

But I have one complaint. I missed your Italian this time.

Ash, I couldn't agree more about wishing to write like Preeti. I wish this everytime someone updates a chapter, but this time I'm going to try it!

I'll be reviewing each part of your chapter Sarah. Be ready! 😈

Mahir didn't have the perfect date planned but he didn't need to. They're both so simple with their love. They don't need to go on fancy dates.

They went to the hotel 🤣. You are imagining Behir's SR too much that you had to include THAT here. I will need to promote this chapter so that everyone sees your version.

Behir are both very funny. They can make jokes in almost every situation they face. It's amazing 👏

Mahir trips on a shoe 🤣. Very smooth! But it's so real 😆

You wrote about THAT perfectly! You didn't need to describe too much in detail but we could still understand what is happening in the scene.

The conversation after is so needed and again perfect. Then they do it again hahaha.

This is just perfect. Amazing update Sarah 👏

I'll be waiting for your next chapter. Please update soon

It's sad that this story is coming to an end next chapter but it looks like Ash will be punishing you for making this story short so I will wait to see what she decides.

I can't wait to see what story you write next. I just have one request: MAKE IT A LONG STORY

I hope I was able to provide a good review of this chapter 😃

Thanku claire 🤗

One of the reasons for Loving Jim and pam is the way they both Can make jokes in all kind of situations..

I wanted behir like that .. haha Yes the Best date would only be in mahir's hotel room 😆

Claire Thanks man for always supporting me !!

my next story is definetly going to be longer as i am going to get some tips from Ash .. 😆

Oh Yes I missed the Italian touch in this Chapter.. I guess my mind was only on one thing as you can see 🤣

Thanks buddy for always being by my side !! 😉

Sarah ne apni sr wali feelings rakhdi hain in this part hope u were highly disappointed with current track lol

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

Sarah ne apni sr wali feelings rakhdi hain in this part hope u were highly disappointed with current track lol

Coming to this u finally United the so long lasting couple who have longued for one other but situations over took their love

But now finally after so many hurdles two souls became one without having any regrets of the past and made a new beginning trusting each other in true sense

Sad that next part will be last

But u r an amazing writing

Will wait for ur further new stories.

Do update last part soon