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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Fazzzz

Thank you! 🤗🤗🤗

I've got all these ideas in my head. I just wish someone could have wrote them for me.😂

Hopefully I will continue. Will update when I can. I'm thinking whether to make this a weekend thing. Enjoy the episodes during the week and try and update on weekends. Let's see how I manage.

Bilkul Bilkul

Don't take too much pressure

Do it when you like it 🤗🤗

Vaise I like the weekends wala idea 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

ok i just finished reading it

this line has my heart

He regretted what he said, their marriage was the best thing to happen to him.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Fazzz..🤗 You are such an awesome writer...Where were you till now...This was a complete surprise..😳


Loved the way you expressed Virendra's pain and helplessness...Even before knowing Priyashi's truth he blamed himself was the best...

And I liked Daksh and Dhwani's conversation too...Sort of clear...Even Daksh is aware that she doesn't love him...Still he wants her to be his....


Please Please do continue this...❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: darkchocolates

Fazzz..🤗 You are such an awesome writer...Where were you till now...This was a complete surprise..😳


Loved the way you expressed Virendra's pain and helplessness...Even before knowing Priyashi's truth he blamed himself was the best...

And I liked Daksh and Dhwani's conversation too...Sort of clear...Even Daksh is aware that she doesn't love him...Still he wants her to be his....


Please Please do continue this...❤️

Thank you. Thank you. 🤗😊

I just really wanted there to be a scene of Priyasi finding out about Purvi's death. For me, I feel Vir said all that in a moment of anger. Obviously Purvi's accident happened but I think Vir would have apologised, at least for calling their marriage a mistake and for loving her. Regretfully that chance never came.

As I said to Nezu, I have all these thoughts but it's so difficult to put it in words. I wish someone else could have wrote for me.😂

Edited by Fazzzz - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

This is superb 👏 👌 ⭐️

I didn't know you were a writer Faz 😱

I'm dying to know what happens next 🤩 do update soon 😇

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: RamonaG

This is superb 👏 👌 ⭐️

I didn't know you were a writer Faz 😱

I'm dying to know what happens next 🤩 do update soon 😇

Thank you! 🤗

I'm glad you liked it.

PurVir inspire me to write. Honestly since the show has started, I've had all these different scenarios in my head. Finally had a bit of time to write. I just wish I could have wrote the dialogues in Hindi.😥

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fazzzz

Thank you! 🤗

I'm glad you liked it.

PurVir inspire me to write. Honestly since the show has started, I've had all these different scenarios in my head. Finally had a bit of time to write. I just wish I could have wrote the dialogues in Hindi.😥


No it's just perfect as it is 🤗

The English isn't looking out of place at all 👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

This is already going in my re-read list. I. Love. This. Heart


Amazing piece of writing, just loved it!! Would love to read more from you, you have commendable way of expressing raw emotions especially pain, longing helplessness in a character, it would be amazing if you continue this story.


Darsh-Dhwani's conversation was light-hearted and sweet. And then Darsh finally realising about what she was thinking about.. Her Past that mattered the most to her!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Sofia.K

This is already going in my re-read list. I. Love. This. Heart


Amazing piece of writing, just loved it!! Would love to read more from you, you have commendable way of expressing raw emotions especially pain, longing helplessness in a character, it would be amazing if you continue this story.


Darsh-Dhwani's conversation was light-hearted and sweet. And then Darsh finally realising about what she was thinking about.. Her Past that mattered the most to her!

Thanks! 🤗

I'm loving the comments. Thanks again.

Hopefully will post the next part soon.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Beautifully Penned!❤️

Kudos to you!🤗

The Flashback is exactly what we wanted to watch in the show! smiley32

Continue Writing & Update Soon! 👍🏼

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