TS - Heartbroken |completed| - Page 4

Originally posted by: Suppss

Thank you sooo much 🤗🤗

Bechara Vir kya karega jab darwaze pe ek aur jhatka milega use 🤧🤧🤧

Haa bhot badiyaa aur suspense badha ab tu😏😏

Mujhe ek purani ff ke update ka abhi tak intezaar h.. suspense bana kar chhod diya usse yrr tumne😂😂

Originally posted by: Suppss

Hey guys... I updated the next part 😉

It's on page 1

Supriya 🤗

Kahan thi itne din? Aur aate hi FF ❤️

I'll read both parts tomm and comment...thanks for tagging, I wouldn't want to miss your story for anything

Originally posted by: Suppss

2 : Alvida

Purvi bids adieu to her past life, memories, her family and her love. "Alvida Mukhi ji...

Pehle toh thank you so much...iss week ke starting se chahiye tha koi iss situation par FF likh de..aur likha toh kya khatarnak likha hai👏..merko writing ka itna pata nahi hai..toh uss sense mein feedback nahi de sakti..phir bhi itna keh sakte hai jo yeh likha hai isko easily imagine kiya jaa sakta hai.. dialogue padh kar lag raha..yeh Viru bol raha yeh Sudha bol rahi hogi..unke way of talking se imagine kar sakti hu..aur emotions toh kya bhar bhar ke daale hai..idhar aaram se ro jaayega banda.

Show version accha hai..lekin yeh usse better hai..isme alag level ka feel aa raha hai..jo show mein bullet train ke kaaran nahi mil paata.. emotional scenes toh lamba chalne diya karo bey..rone hi waale hote hai ki next track aa jaata hai🤦

Abb iss story pe baat karte hai

FF mein bhi Nandini ko koi intelligent nahi dikha sakta🤣.. idhar bhi Pur ko blame kar rahi hai😡..chaaro bacche mein yahi hai jo Sakshi par thodi gayi hai😑...waise yeh waala Veer kitna sahi hai..Baat samjhne ki koshish toh ki..Show mein toh pagla rakha hai🤢...Sudha ne sahi sunaya..show mein bhi suna de toh maza aa jaayega.

Now talking about Viru..bhai meri kidney mein heart attack aajana tha..jab yeh Pyaar aur Bawari word bolte time ruka..itna painful laga na🥺...aur Jab nahi mili toh kaise room mein bhaga aur Bawari chillaya..yaar jab itna pyaar karta hai kyu hurt karta hai usko??? Baad mein regret karta phirta hai.. terko dhakkan , gadha, dumbo , khadoos kuch bhi bol lu na kam lagta hai.

JnM ka Viru se aise bolna 😭 😔

Bawari ne accha sunaya sabko...line se sabki jo class li hai..maza aagya padh kar..bas yeh khud samjh jaaye Veer ki aise shaadi nahi karni chahiye thi...aur apne pariwar ka hissa na maane waali baat kya sahi boli thi..Viru ko yeh cheez samajhna chahiye..patani show mein aisa kuch dikhayenge ya nahi.. sirf trust issue problem hai nahi😣..baaki iske letter ke end mein jo aapki Bawari Molkki likha hai😭 ..ahhh..itna Dukh lekar kaha jau mein😑

1st paragraph idhr sab writers ke liye hai..saare ek se badhkar ek talented ho👏

OMG!!!👏🤗

Kudos to you!❤️

Kya likha hain aapne ... Matlab I'm short of words.

You're a Fabulous Writer. 2nd Part is full of emotions.

I literally cried while reading this.

Awesome yaar... Jitni tareef kru utni kamm hain.

Update 3rd part soon please

Waise James bond Vir par kon likhne waala tha??? 🙃

Originally posted by: Fazzzz

Loved the second part, how Purvi opened up her heart to everyone. Everyone just dumps their crap/blame on her. It was good to see her actually state it in the letter. I know we will never get such a scene in the show so it's great to see you put it so perfectly in writing.

Just hope if we can get some emotional ride to witness. And not a bullet train 🙏🏻

I asked if you were Saba before. Sorry, that was an insult to you.😂

These words are so precious for me 🥺🥺🥺

If only she put the effort on even the little things that matter. I can't wait till the next part.

Thank you buddy 🤗🤗

This appreciation means a lot to me !!

Originally posted by: PSP07

Waise James bond Vir par kon likhne waala tha??? 🙃

Maiii 🙂🙂🙂🙂

But I'm really sorry yaar. My health hit me hard. Couldn't complete my prev work

But don't worry, I'll do what I said. Is wali FF se jaise hi space milega I'll give you James bond 🤗

May I know your good name pls ?

@Anahita_143

Very well written Supriya 👏 👌 👍 ❤️

Waiting for part 3 now

Originally posted by: grace_10

OMG!!!👏🤗

Kudos to you!❤️

Kya likha hain aapne ... Matlab I'm short of words.

Bhot bhot dhanyawad🤗

You're a Fabulous Writer. 2nd Part is full of emotions.

The whole scenario was emotional 😭

I literally cried while reading this.

Here comes my achievement 🥺🥺🥺🤗

Awesome yaar... Jitni tareef kru utni kamm hain.

Update 3rd part soon please

Thank you sooo much 😊😊🤧🤧🤧

Is baat mai bullet train ki speed se parts likh rahi hun 🤣🤣I'm so moved by this track 😝

Will update soon 😉

Originally posted by: RamonaG

Very well written Supriya 👏 👌 👍 ❤️

Waiting for part 3 now

Thank youuu romi dii... 🤗

Very soon !!