TS - Heartbroken |completed| - Page 3

Welcome back Supriya

Kahan chali gayi thi...We missed you so much

This is so painfully beautiful... Finally the forum's best writer is back...How can the writing be on perfect...

Loved this strong version of Purvi who isn't ready to listen and take any more sh*t

Pleasssseeses...Issbar I want the continuation of this...Chod mat dena...

Apne bahut hi accha likha hai ap saba se acche writer ho... Ap apni story direct ekta mam ko send kijiye vo definitely ap hi ki story choose karengi... Apne rula diya... Ansu ruk nahi rahe hai ab pata nahi night main kya hoga mera God knows... Mukhiji ka ye rude nature bhi dekhne milega saba mam ki meharbani se pata nahi tha.. 😭😭😭😭😪😪😪

Originally posted by: darkchocolates

Welcome back Supriya

Kahan chali gayi thi...We missed you so much

Thank you diii 🤗

Meri tabiyat kuch achhi nhi chal rhi thi kafi time se.. ab jaise hi thik hui bhaag ayi idhar 😎

This is so painfully beautiful... Finally the forum's best writer is back...How can the writing be on perfect...

Is zarra-nawazi ke lie bhot bhot dhanyawad🤗

Loved this strong version of Purvi who isn't ready to listen and take any more sh*t

She should be bold enough to show ppl their limits.. log utna hi bola jitna jayaz ho... No bakwas sidhi baat!!

Pleasssseeses...Issbar I want the continuation of this...Chod mat dena...

Nahi chodugi pakkaa.... Be ready to read the next part 😊😊😊🤧🤧

Originally posted by: Anjana03

Apne bahut hi accha likha hai ap saba se acche writer ho... Ap apni story direct ekta mam ko send kijiye vo definitely ap hi ki story choose karengi... Apne rula diya... Ansu ruk nahi rahe hai ab pata nahi night main kya hoga mera God knows... Mukhiji ka ye rude nature bhi dekhne milega saba mam ki meharbani se pata nahi tha.. 😭😭😭😭😪😪😪

Thank you for sparing some time to read this.

Aree ye to bhot badi baat hai mere lie 😅😅

Next part me to aur rona aygaaa 🤧🤧🤧🤧

Just wait and watch 😉

Fabulous Supriya🤗

Very well written. Her ek line aankhon k saamne create ho gai, sach me. Kitni dukhi hai purvi. Bas sudha aur bacche hai jo uska saath denge.

Mujhe last me shayari bahut acchi lagi.aage kya hoga, iska intezaar rahega❤

Hey guys... I updated the next part 😉

It's on page 1

New update on page 1 🥳

Kya bawal likha h ree ye🔥 👍🏼

harr ek character ka harr ek dialogue was soo on point👍💯 aur Purvi ka letter🥺

Sudha op👍👏

Viru ki feelings bhot ache se describe ki h😭👏

Super happy ki ek hi din mei 2 chapters mil gaye😆

Read it twice🤝 Kudos!🔥 Ese hi likhte raho aur jaldi update karte raho😳😆

Originally posted by: Anahita_143

Kya bawal likha h ree ye🔥 👍🏼

harr ek character ka harr ek dialogue was soo on point👍💯 aur Purvi ka letter🥺

Sudha op👍👏

Viru ki feelings bhot ache se describe ki h😭👏

Super happy ki ek hi din mei 2 chapters mil gaye😆

Break lag jaye usse pehle socha pura kar de😆

Read it twice🤝 Kudos!🔥 Ese hi likhte raho aur jaldi update karte raho😳😆

Thank you sooo much 🤗🤗

Bechara Vir kya karega jab darwaze pe ek aur jhatka milega use 🤧🤧🤧

Loved the second part, how Purvi opened up her heart to everyone. Everyone just dumps their crap/blame on her. It was good to see her actually state it in the letter. I know we will never get such a scene in the show so it's great to see you put it so perfectly in writing.

I asked if you were Saba before. Sorry, that was an insult to you.😂 If only she put the effort on even the little things that matter. I can't wait till the next part.