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GUZAARISH


Backdrop : Aarav remarries in order to seek vengeance for his insult from the Pratap family.

He unveils the face of his newly wed wife. A bolt from the blue striked the Pratap family, specially Veer to see Priyashi. Land slipped off his feet to notice the currency garland around her neck - evidently, she became a Molkki Bride.

Priyashi reveals that she can't ruin her life, so she married a suitable man. Afterall, they both were ill treated by the same members.

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Veer asked in frustration - priyashi ji, apko ye sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi?

P - kya galat kia hmne Veer? Apki shaadi to humari di ne Sudha se karwa di. Ab aage hm kya karte? Apni zindagi yun hi barbad hone dete?

Veer - par apne ye Molkki.... Kyo ?? Aur ye abhi bhi Nandu ka pati hai...🤬

P - Kise ki Molkki banne ke lie uska kunwara hona zaroori nhi hai Veer. Humne sahi kaha na Mukhi ji? Itna sab hone ke baad jab Aarav ne hume propose kia, to humne haa kar di. Akhir burai hi kya hai unme? Achhe pariwar se hai, hume khush rakhega.. aur kya chaiye hme?

Veer and Nandini were evidently shocked.

N - Aarav tum itna gir jaoge maine socha bhi nhi tha. I'll file for divorce ASAP. Priyu, tumhe ye MOLKKI accept nhi karni chaiye thi.

P - (she looked pointedly at Purvi) humne kisi ko Molkki se maharani bante dekha hai. To socha kyo na apni kismat bhi azmaa le...!!


Priyu and Aarav bore absolutely crook expressions. They were here for a task - of portraying Purvi as a witch, who caused this ruckus. And undoubtedly they succeeded. Purvi was framed guilty.

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[Priyu and Aarav depart]

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Veer shouted in exasperation and sabotaged the objects nearby. All eyes were on Purvi.

N - ye sab tumhari vjah se ho rha hai. Tum meri aur meri bhai ki zindagi par grahan ho Purvi. Na tum mahaan banne ki koshish me meri shadi karwati aur na ye din aata. (She looked scornfully)

Veer - mai priyashi se pyar karta tha ye jante hue bhi apne meri shadi sudha ji se karwa di. Dekh lia nateeja? Apki vjah se aj wo apki trah MOLKKI ban gyi hai. You spoiled our lives.

N and V - WE HATE YOU...!!

They looked repulsively at her and left angrily. One by one everyone left.


Purvi was standing, her hands and body completely frozen. She was hurt. The family which meant the most to her, have announced her to be a traitor. All she wanted was love, but what she got was pure hatred. Tears dint leave her eyes alone. She wanted condolence, solace and hope. Any woman would look upon her man to provide her strength at such fragile time. So did she ! She looked at Vir who was sitting on the couch - visibly shaken and stressed. She took baby steps towards him. She wanted to hold his hand, cry on his shoulder and hear him saying "Stop crying. I trust you. You won't do wrong to my family on purpose. Things will fall in place. I'm with you..." Little did she knew that her fate is going to be more cruel on her.


Instead of getting a warm composure, she saw a stern look on Vir's face. "Vhi ruk jaaaa...." He said in a cold voice. This hurt her more.

Vir - "key bigada tha manne ya mhare pariwar ne thara jo tune itna bada dukh de dia hm sab ne?"

P - Mukhi ji.... (She was hell shocked) kam se kam ap to ...!!

V - (cutting her off) Aj thare se jyada pachtawaa manne ho rha hai. Pachtawaa is baat ka ki kaash tu meri zindagi me aayi hi na hoti. Kaash teri Molkki na hui hoti mere ta, kaash tere saath mera yo rishta na judaa hota... Kaash manne thare se pya.. (he stopped, not wanted to use the word 'love' for her) na hua hota. Aj mai bhagwan se yhi maangta hun ki wo manne fir se akele jeevan jeene ka mauka de... Taki kam se kam mai tere gunaaho ki saza se to azaad ho saku. Meri, mere pariwar ki khushiyon ko chheen kar na jane kis chiz ki keemat li hai tune...!!


Purvi's mouth fell open. She was trying to comprehend "tu meri zindagi me ayi hi naa hoti". Vir was still speaking/badmouthing about her existence in his life, but none of the sounds made their way to her ears anymore. She became a cold statue - wandering. She has been a strong spirited girl always, wishing for everyone's welfare prior to hers. But what she got in return? Hate? Distrust? Loneliness? Pain?

Her life was never a bed of roses, but she never complained. But today, she cursed herself, her fate, ner kanha ji. Why can't she be loved unconditionally? Why no one trusts her? Why does she finds herself alone in a bad situation everytime? Is she too bad to be loved back the way she does? Doesn't she deserves care and compassion like other ordinary people?


The man she loved the most, had disgraced her or disowned her in a way. Why was she here? Still standing to hear more curses on her name? She quietly made her way to the staircase. In a trance- she walked away.

Vir was annoyed at her departure. There was more left for him to speak, but she was done !! He dint bother to look at her, where she was heading to. He sat there in silence... pondering over the past incidents. And after a considerable time he too left for his room. Unconsciously, he had assumed Purvi to be there. But much to his dismay, she wasn't. Once again she turned down his expectations. He dint give a darn though and closed the door behind.

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Meanwhile, Sudha was standing in the corridor upstairs. She had overheard the one sided conversation of Vir from behind a pillar. Perhaps, the only one in the haweli who still had complete faith on Purvi. She dint intervene, thinking it was a matter b/w a man and his wife. But deep inside, she too was hurt by Vir's behaviour. An unbiased and wise mukhiya is not supposed to lash out with such harsh words on his wife.


She saw Purvi heading upstairs, to a vacant room. Purvi was staring at the ground, not blinking at all. Sudha knew by looking at her face that she had faced the worst ever time of her life. Purvi shut the door, not knowing sudha stood at some distance.

S - hum jante hai tujhe bhot chot pahochai hai aj sabne. Par tu dekhna, jab sabko ehsaas hoga apni galti ka to sab tere paas fir se laut ayge. Aj ki raat tujhe tere saath chhod dena hi sahi hoga. Subah baat karege hm tujhse Purvi... (She prayed)

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Purvi broke down on the floor. She dint have any courage to hold on even for a second more. A completely broken soul she was. She cried her heart out, shouted, cursed her luck, banged her head and what not....!! She cried until she could no more. She had lost her "jeene ki vajah" in one blow. She felt empty, void of all emotions. No one regarded her efforts, her sacrifice or her love. She was called a 'step mom' 'destroyer' 'a bad omen' 'an evil woman' and what not. She cried over her poor fate.


She gathered some strength and took a pen and paper. She wrote something on it and unlocked the door. She walked to the room which once belonged to her and Vir. Vir was probably asleep, he rested turning his back to the side where she used to sleep.


Purvi moved to the dressing table. She looked at her dark reflection in the mirror "humari zindagi me bhi is waqt aisa hi andhera chhaya hua hai". She removed her mangalsutra. Using her MS and vermillion box as a paper weight, she clipped her handwritten letter on the table. She looked back at Vir "apki GUZAARISH zaroor puri hogi Mukhi ji" Her eyes bore her pain. She took some of her selected belongings, packed them and left.....

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Wo Mohabbat bhi teri thi

Wo nafrat bhi teri thi

Wo apnapan, aur thukrane ki adaa bhi teri thi

Apni mohabbat ka insaaf hum kisse mangte?

Wo sheher bhi tera tha, wo adaalat bhi teri thi !!


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Perhaps, the nature cried on her fate too. It was heavily raining. Purvi walked away from the haweli under the midnight dark sky which was intermittently lit by lightning.

"Hum ap sab ko apni shaqal kabhi nahi dikhayge"




Continued.... !! 😊

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2 : Alvida


Purvi bids adieu to her past life, memories, her family and her love. "Alvida Mukhi ji... Humari galtiyon ka khamiyaza nhi bhugatna hoga aj ke baad apko." Deep inside her heart, their was an unsaid wish "shayad humare jaane ke baad apko humari ahmiyat ka ehsaas hoga." She dint expect it to come true, but could not resist this thought from invading her path; afterall she was a bawri for sure !! Otherwise, who will sacrifice so much for a family who doesn't value/regard her.

She vowed never to look back or interfere in their lives. She has been deceived, enough to last for a lifetime. Purvi is lost somewhere in the darkness. Soon her silhouette disappears too ....!!

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MORNING


No one in the haweli had barely got a good night's sleep except pra-jali. Probably the night gave them some time to introspect themselves, their actions and decisions. It was 8 in the morning and the place hustled with some activity. Pratap family gathered at the dining for breakfast [except JnM].

Nandini - Baba, I've decided to file for divorce. Mai aise admi ke saath ab koi rishta nhi rakhna chahti.

Vir, who was sitting absent mindedly was brought to the present by her voice.

V - thik hai... Mai wakeel se baat karta hun.

He looked away again. He was so lost that he had hardly noticed anything since yesterday. He would be unaware of a tumult as well at this time. He was again disturbed by Veer.


Veer - Baba... I think mujh se bhi galti hui hai.

Vir looked a bit confused. "Jo kehna hai saaf saaf bol"

Veer - baba, I was unable to sleep last night. Mai soch rha tha ki priyashi ne jo kiya uski vajah kya ho sakti hai. (He looked at Sudha). Use paise hi chaiye the, tabhi to wo Aarav ki Molkki banne ke lie tayar ho gyi.

Vir - tu key bole jaa rha hai ?? Hosh me hai ??

Veer - haa baba.. kal raat jab maine thande dimag se socha to mujhe ye ehsaas hua ki akhir kaun si ladki khushi khushi ek already married man se shadi karne ke lie haa kahegi. She is greedy.

Vir nodded "dekh beta, jo hua wo sahi naa tha... Par jeevan me aage badh ib"

Veer - nhi baba !!

Vir was a bit shocked.. "key??"

Veer - I mean, jo hua wo hi sahi tha. Gusse me mujhe pehle ye realise nhi hua par.... par Purvi ji ne sahi decision liya tha. Agar meri shadi us gold digger Priyashi se ho jati to God knows wo paiso ke lie mera kaise misuse karti...!

N - yes veer. Maybe you're right. Purvi ne apni behen ke khilaf itni badi baat yun hi to nahi kahi hogi. Maine bhi gusse me aa kar in sari baaton par dhyan nhi diya.


Sudha - Chalo achha hua ki ap sabko ehsaas ho gaya ki Purvi jaan bujh kar kisi ka bura nhi chahegi.

N - Please... haa mere bhai ke lie usne achha socha par maine Purvi ko maaf nhi kiya hai. She did a blunder with my life. (She looked annoyed)

Veer - you're right sudha (he reassured her) I'll go and apologize to her. Maine bhot galat trah se baat kari unse. (He smiled at sudha and held her hand... Indicating that he has accepted her as his wife).

Sudha (in mind) - Thank you Purvi, aj teri vajah se hume humare Veer mil gye. Hum tere ehsaan-mand rhege. Aur dekh, jaise inhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya waise nandu ko bhi ho jayga. Fir sab kuch achha ho jayga (she smiled thinking)


Vir - par yo baw....(he stopped) mukhiyain hai kaha?

Meanwhile JnM came. They were worried and anxious. Manas was crying.

Vir - aree manas... Tu ro kyo raha hai? Key hua? Bata manne...!

M - baba ....haathi...😭😭

J - baba, haathi aj subah se kahi nhi mil rahi. Hmne pure ghar me dekha par wo kahi nahi hai.

Vir - aisa kaise ho sake hai. Thik se dekho yahi kahi howegi. Kaha jawegi wo. Chhat par hogi shayd. Mai dekh ke aata hun (he became restless)

M - humne sab jagah dekha baba.. par wo kahi nahi hai. Humne sabse pucha... Kisi ko kuch nhi pata wo kaha hai.

Sudha - Manas, (she hugged her) dekho tum ro mat haa.. tumhari haathi tmhe chhod kar kaha jaygi bhala? Ho sakta hai kuch kaam se gayi ho, jaldi aajygi. (She assured them)


This was a matter for worry. How can she vanish altogether? That too so early in the morning. Something unexplainable happened. Vir rushed to his room and shouted for her name. "Bawriii..." Sudha and others followed.

He opened the cupboard to find all her clothes perfectly in their place. He sighed in relief.


Sudha gasped - "kanha ji...."


Vir's eyes widened. He turned back to find that purvi's kanha ji was no more there. He touched the void place. Tears already hampering his sight.


Veer - baba, wo table par kya rakha hai...!

Vir turned, another thunderbolt waiting to strike him hard. He reached the dressing table to find Purvi's MS and vermillion box kept on a neatly folded letter as paper weight. He felt a sharp pain in his chest. He wondered how he dint notice all this before? Perhaps he was too self consumed !


"Naaa.. yo naa ho sake hai!! Tu manne aise chhod ke naa ja sakti bawriii..." He could not hold his tears. The Mukhiya of Rewari was on the verge of breaking down. He touched the MS, it seamed merely a thread with black beads to him as it no more signified his right on her. Tears sliding down his cheeks, he reminisced the time he had filled her hairline with vermillion and took '7 vachan'. His hands shaked while lifting up the letter. He bit his lip and whimpered with agony. He stretched out his shaking hand to Sudha, asking her to read the letter for him. Bcz he doesnt has the courage to !!


Sudha who was already crying, accepted his command. How could she deny her best friend's wish? She opened the letter, cleared her throat and began reading ---


Humne is pariwar ko humesha khud se jyada ehmiyat di hai. Bina kisi swaarth ke sabko khush rakhne ki har mumkin koshish ki hai. Magar badle me hume kya mila? Nafrat, ilzaam, tiraskar, apmaan......!!!


Nandini, Aarav se shadi karne ka faisla tumhara tha. Humne tumhara saath diya, ye soch kar ki tum uske saath khush raho. Wo dhokebaaz tha isme humara kya dosh? Humse behtar to tum janti thi na use.. agar wo Chaudhary ki tarah chalbaaz hai to isme hum swaarthi kaha se ho gaye? Haa humari galti ye zaroor thi ki hum Mukhi ji ke khilaaf gaye, tumhari khushi ke lie !!


Veer, humari behen ko ek achhi zindagi mile bhala isse hume koi pareshani kyo hogi? Par uski keemat tumhari barbadi ho, ye hum nhi chahte the. Tumne jaan bujh kar sabke samne jhooth kaha, jhooth kaha ki tumhare shaadi ke faisle ki vajah pyaar hai. Jabki sach ye hai ki wo tumhe kuch Photos ke zariye blackmail kar rhi thi. Humne tumhe bachane ke lie har ilzaam apne sur le lia... Aur tumne apni zindagi barbaad karne ka ilzaam bhi hum par hi laga diya!!


Sudha sobbed. She stopped to take a breath before continuing. Vir was shocked to hear the last few sentences. He looked at veer for answers. He had no other choice than to confess.

Veer - haa Baba..... (And he told him everything about the photos) mujhe maaf kar dijiye ki maine pehle sach nhi kaha !! (He joined his hands to ask for forgiveness)

Vir broke down. He sat on the side of bed. He had started to curse his tongue, repent for his actions and bitterness towards her. He had left no paucity in blaspheming her and now, he was remorseful for each word he uttered.

"Yo... Itni badi galti kaise ho gayi mere ta? Wo baar baar manne sachhai dikhane ki koshish karti rhi aur mai andhaa banke use hi gunhegaar maan baitha." He was too shameful on his deeds. But, this was just a starting, the worse was still a surprise for him.



Sudha wipes her eyes and continues ....

"Mukhi ji... "

{Vir shut his eyes hard on hearing those words. Knowing it was his turn now to face his bawri's questions and pain.}


Kisi aur se hum kya kahe, wo hume jante hi kitna hai. Par apko to humara vishwas karna chaiye tha. Kitni asaani se apne hume 'sauteli maa' ka darja de dia... Har baar ki tarah is baar bhi apne saabit kar dia ki apki nazron me apki patni Sakshi ke lie jo vishwas aur sthaan hai wo is MOLKKI ka kabhi nhi ho skta. Apne to humare pyaar aur balidaan tak ki izzat nhi kari.


Ap, ye ghar, humare... nhi nhi APKE BACHHE, inhe humne apna sansar mana tha. Par hume kabhi bhi pure mann se kisi ne apna nhi maana. Ap aj bhi hume gair samjhte hai, naa ki is pariwar ka hissa. Kyoki agar aisa hota, to humare tyaag par dhanyawad aur galti par humara tiraskar nhi karte ap !!


Humne apse zindagi bhar ke lie pyaar kiya tha, aur aj bhi hme is baat ka afsos nhi hai. Apki tarah rang badalna nhi aata hume, aur shayad yhi humari sabse badi galti thi...

Ap fir se akele rehna chahte the na Mukhi ji... To lijiye, apki ye ichha bhi humne puri kar di. Ab apko humari maujoodgi par afsos ya pachhtana nhi padega !


Aur Sudha please humare juhi aur manas ka dhyan rakhna. Unki ankhon me ansoo mat aane dena. Kyoki is haweli me ek vhi hai, jinhone humesha humara sath diya hai, apna mana hai!!

Jate jate humari bas itni duaa hai ki bhagwan ap sabhi ko khush rakhe, salamat rakhe !!


Alvida !!

Apki bawri Molkki, Purvi

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Sudha held the letter close to her heart and sobbed. She grieved on her friend's departure. She was the only one who cared for her more than her own family, who staked everything for her welfare... And today, she has left !!

Nandini kept her hand on Sudha's shoulder to console her "tum itna pareshan mat ho, wo wapas aa jaygi jald hi.."

Sudha jerked her hand off angrily and shouted "Humari dost, ap sabki vajah se yha se gyi hai. Kya kuch nhi keh dia sabne use, har ilzaam uske maathe par laga dia. Fir bhi wo sunti rahi.... Sirf is umeed me ki kabhi to ap sab use samjhege. Par nahi...!!" She wept bitterly holding her head.


It seemed as if someone has taken vir's soul out of his body. He couldn't breath. He felt suffocated in his own body... How could he cuss his bawri upto this extent ?


JnM were standing at the door, listening what had happened to their beloved haathi. They stepped forward.

J - Baba, haathi hume chhod kar chali gayi na?

M - ap sabne kal use bhot daanta tha (he whimpered so much due to crying)

V - bachho.. meri baat suno (he extended his arms towards them)

Juhi stepped back "hume kuch nhi sunna baba... Apki vajah se wo chali gayi"

M - apki vajah se meri MAA mujhse durr chali gayi smiley19

J - hum apse kabhi baat nhi krege (she started crying and held Manas' hand and left)

Vir - mere bachhe fir se mere ta durr ho gaye

Sudha - kyoki jisne aj tak apke pariwar ko baandh ke rakha tha, apne aj use hi khud se alag kar dia.

(She stormed out of the room after putting this allegation on Vir)

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Veer and Nandini tried to console Vir but he requested everyone to leave him alone.

Now it was time for his repentance. His words had pierced purvi's heart, he realised this but unfortunately, it was too late to mend the gulf.

Vir - maine tanne itni chot pahocha di bawri. Socha hi naa ki beete dino me tune bhi to kitna kuch Saha hai. Hum sabne apne dard ka zimmedar tujhe thehra dia par teri takleef batne ki ek baar bhi koshish na kri maine.... (He cried)

He picked up the letter. He noticed the smudged alphabets, the dried read drops of his bawri. Visualising how bitterly she might have wept while writing this, while leaving her world behind.... All bcz he said he wished she dint exist. He touched her belongings, trying to feel her warmth and fragrance.

Vir - kaha dhundu mai tujhe bawri...! Tu chali gayi hai to manne saans lena bhi bhot bhari lag rha hai. Kis muh se samna karu mai apne ap ka ..!

Hours went by, and he kept cussing himself, crying in her memory, trying to figure out where she might have gone, composing himself to face her when they met....!!


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He gathered some courage "mai tanne kahi se bhi wapas leke auga bawri... Dharti asmaan ek bhi karna pade to mujhe manzur hai..."


He was preparing himself for the upcoming challenges when a catastrophe knocked at his door.... !!!

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To be continued.... !! 😊

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3 : SHATTERED ...!!💔


Vir hasn't stepped out of his room since he got to know about purvi's departure. Somehow he managed to gather himself up and make all efforts to get her back. Just then there was a knock on the door. It was Veer

Veer - Baba, darwaza kholiye please... (He was sobbing silently) bhot zaruri baat hai baba !!

Vir got a bit terrified. He immediately opened the door. Veer got shocked to see a strong built man like Vir in this condition - dull, shabby face, red and swollen eyes due to excessive crying, untidy hair as if he had tried to pluck them off his scalp, unbuttoned kurta (the upper buttons were broken).

Vir spoke in a hoarse voice - key hua ?

Veer (tears in his eyes and a glimpse of remorse) - baba... Purvi ji ke jane ke baad maine police se unhe dhundne ke lie kaha. Vo niche.... Niche aye hai kuch kehne..... (He stammered while completing his sentence and couldn't go further)

Vir hurriedly rushed and stepped off the stairs, nearly slipping once. He felt little dizzy due to extreme stress and couldn't maintain balance.

His voice showed how freaked he was - key hua inspector saab? Kuch pata chala mukhiyain ka?

Ins. - Kya ap in kapdo ko pehchante hai ? (He showed them a pair of clothes packed in a cellophane)

Vir's eyes widened and he immediately got hold of the packet. "Yo to bawri ka duppatta hai" he can never make a mistake in recognising her belongings. "Key hua mukhiyain ne?"

Ins - Mukhi ji.. ye kapde aur kuch saman (he pointed to some other objects in distinctive packets.) mila hai hume.

Vir looked at those packets. They were some family photos, snow globe (which he had gifted her once) and a few clothes (of Purvi and a black kurta of Vir which she might have taken along as his memoir).

Vir - kaha se mila apko yo sab?

Ins - Sharshwat jane wali bus kal raat khaai me gir gayi. Rescue squad ko ye saman ek aurat ke paas se mila jisne ye kapde (pointing) pehen rakhe the. Us bus ka koi bhi yaatri zinda nhi bach paya Mukhi ji... And we're very sorry to inform you ki Mukhiyain ji, ab is duniya me nahi rhi.

Vir's world came crashing in that very moment. The unimaginable has happened. He had lost his love, his reason to live, his everything. Words spoken in anger have costed him his bawri's life. And this time, life dint give him any chance to apologise, repent or amend his blunders. It has all ended for him... in a moment !!

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Meanwhile inspector to Veer (fading voice) - blast ki vajah se bodies kafi hadd tak jal chuki hai aur islie kisi ko bhi pehchan pana namumkin hai. We can't hand you over the dead body of Mrs Purvi. We're sorry !!

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Vir collapsed on his knees with a thud. His tears have dried up. All shock absorbers in his body have refused to work. He hated himself more than anything on this earth, and this burden of compunction was not letting him breathe. He banged his head and shouted her name at the top of his lungs... "BAAWRRRIIIIIII...... BAAAAAWRRIIIIIII ...........!! smiley38" He sat in the same position, weeping over his luck, over his loss.

Sudha was taken aback by the news. Purvi was her support, during all situations, however tough they might be. "Purviii... Ye sab kya ho gaya kanha ji...!!" She was aggrieved.

Just then JnM arrived, they have partially heard the news. "Sudha maasi, kya ab haathi kabhi laut kar nhi aygi...??" They asked with tears in their eyes. The kids have lost their mother once again. Juhi turned to Vir "ap bhot bure ho baba..." She shouted. "naa haathi apki vjah se ye ghar chodke jaati naa ye sab hota.." she began crying loudly, hugging her brother.

Nandini followed her little siblings. She wanted to be there for them at such delicate moments.

Veer came forward to console sudha, "ap sab ki galtiyon ki saza humari dost bhugat rhi hai.."

Veer - Purvi ji ne bhot kuch kia hai mere lie, par maine unke sath bohot galat kia. Agar tum mujhe maaf kar dogi to shayd mera guilt kuch kam ho.

Veer too cried. He have had a short interaction with Purvi, but that was enough for him to realise how pure a soul she was.

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There was nothing left in this world that could excite Vir now. He had lost all interest and fun in life. He dint cry much, instead decided to cherish the pain - to punish himself.

He locked himself in his room, just setting it right to evoke more memories of his bawri, and thus more pain !

He placed Purvi's portrait right in front of the bed so that he could always see her. Also, he got a couple of pictures framed of himself with her -- some memories of their happy times !

He placed her belongings or scattered them throughout the room. So that he could feel her presence all around him.

He broke off the topmost button of all his kurtas, hoping she would sew them someday. And if she dint, then he'll continue wearing them like this - to always keep in mind what little things she did for him !

Since the day, he resolved to never wear a 'black kurta' and 'blue pagdi' as it was her favourite. And he won't be wearing it again for anyone else except for his bawri.

He gave up on keeping his things organised. She was the one arranging everything right for him, be it in their room or their life. And after she left, everything fell out of place, then what was the meaning of a well-organised room?

No one in the house was allowed to enter his room, just in case they touched something and bawri (who now lives in Vir's heart) dint like it. It was only Vir and his bawri in their bedroom.

He hardly spent anytime with his family. All his day was for panchayat and other official works and his nights were only meant to repent in her memory and miss her smiley28


Vir staring at Purvi's picture -

Sari duniya se thak kar jab mai yha aata hun to manne sukoon milta hai. Teri tasweero aur teri chijo se bhare is kamre me aa kar tere saath bitaya har pal meri ankhon ke samne zinda ho jata hai. Sakshi ki yaadon ko to maine ek kamre me samet kar band kar dia tha, par teri yaadon ke saath to mai jee rha hun.

Mai khud se nafrat karne laga hun, khud se hi nazre naa mila pata ki akhir kaise Maine tujhse itni kadwi baatein keh di.


He cried.

Tera kroor singh tere bina adhura hai, bhot bhot pyaar karta hun mai tere taa.... ! Laut aa bawri mhare paas, laaut aaa....!! Zindagi ek saza ban chuki hai ib, aur sirf tu manne azaad kar sakti hai isseee.... (He knew he's asking for something that might never happen. Par apne dil ko wo kaise samjhaye, jo sirf bawri ka naam le kar dhadakta hai aur yhi duaa karta hai ki kismat use ek aur mauka de apne pyaar ko pura karne ka)


Tere dil ka mere dil se rishta ajeeb hai,

Milo ki hai dooriyan, par dhadkan kareeb hai !! ❤️


And somewhere in this cosmos, his prayer was answered - his bawri regained her normal breathing. Admitted in ICU, in a nearly lifeless condition, she revived. A miracle happened. But actually, somewhere a heart cried for another and destiny had to change its coarse !!


** THE END **

Edited by Suppss - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#4

Look who is back 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

Where do go without letting us know 🤔

Will read soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
#5

Supriya di🤗🤗

Back with a bang 💥💥💥

Such a soulful part. 🥺🥺

Eagerly waiting for the next part😳

Please Jaldi upload karna😛

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Posted: 3 years ago
#6

Look who is back 🤗🤗🤗

Kal I was asking about this

And aj hi tune gift dediya



So in the next part accident will happen

Sudha ne sab sunliya😔

Hopefully accident ki news ke bad sabko sunaye ache se

And viru ka dimag to next part me kharab hoga 🤣🤪

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Posted: 3 years ago
#7

Dekho..dekho wo aagayi, wo aagayi😆🤣

But on a serious note what a comeback yrr..missed you😳 & your suspenseful stories😆

Kitne dino se forum mei kisi ne koi story nhi likhi thi..aaj finally itne dino baad kuch padhne mila..acha laga 💃

Nicely written💯 jaldi dena agla part bhi🤭

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Posted: 3 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: Nezuko

Look who is back 🤗🤗🤗

Kal I was asking about this

And aj hi tune gift dediya

Aree waahh.. kya timing hai 😎


So in the next part accident will happen

Sudha ne sab sunliya😔

Bechari ek vhi to sachhi dost hai Purvi ki 😭


Hopefully accident ki news ke bad sabko sunaye ache se

Done Dona done done 👍🏼

And viru ka dimag to next part me kharab hoga 🤣🤪

Fatt jayga uska dimag abhi 🤣

I'll update soon guys...

Thanks for reading 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: Sampada001

Supriya di🤗🤗

Back with a bang 💥💥💥

Such a soulful part. 🥺🥺

Eagerly waiting for the next part😳

Please Jaldi upload karna😛

Thank you sampu 🤗🤗


Yeah I'll update very soon !!

Edited by Suppss - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#10

Wo wada karke gye the ki kal milte hai aur mil rahe hai mahine baad😆

Aai ho to ab mat jana, 🤗

Padh kar reply karungi, thodi der me

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