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yaar suppa.. Tu kyu rulane par tuli hai...my heart is shaking..😭

What brilliant brilliant piece of writing..👏❤️

Hum tumhe forum ka best writer aise hii nahi kehte.. You deserve that.. ❤

Yaar what portrait of emotions..👏😭

This is painfully beautiful.. 😭❤

Chalo bade baccho ko finally akal to aai... Par der se aai..

Finally vir comes to know about pur is missing..

Bawari kehte kehte ruk gaya.. Ab bol nahi paayega usse ye.. 🤦‍♀️

Paglaya na usse na pakar... Pehle to kuch bhi bol do.. Aur na mile to pagal ho jaata hai ye.. Kaisa aadmi hai..

Pur ka letter.. Rula diya uss letter ne..😭

Finally vir realised his mistakes.. Royega ab..🤦‍♀️🥺

Sudha..👏 chalo accha sunaya sudha ne... Sabko.. Thoda aur class leti.. Dimag thikane aata sabka.. 🤦‍♀️

J&m bhi gussa ho gaye uske baba se...yaar bura bhi lag raha hai aur thik bhi..

Viru..😭😭

So he vows to take her back.. But abhi to ek aur bomb baki hai.. Are yaar mai nahi dekh paaungi isse rota hua..😭

Shayari..😭👏

Loved loved it suppa..❤

Plz update soon.. ❤

And sorry for late reply.. 😝

Originally posted by: Suppss

Arey kehaar...likha hai

I read both parts together...mazza aagya...🤩

Dialogues toh ufff❣❣❣😻😻

3rd part likhne se pehle hi bhaag gyi tu

Serial ka toh manne pta nahi..but yaha toh atleast apni man pasand ending mill sakti hai..haina

Sorry for the late guys..

updated the next sequel on page 1 🤗

Originally posted by: Suppss

Sorry for the late guys..

updated the next sequel on page 1 🤗

SUPRIYA🤗

2nd part ka mera comment jaroor dekhna

Aur kaha gayab ho jati ho. Tabiyat kaisi hai

sorry if i forgot someone 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Suppss

Thodi der mein padh ke aati hu😳

Originally posted by: pallavi_p28

SUPRIYA🤗

2nd part ka mera comment jaroor dekhna

Aur kaha gayab ho jati ho. Tabiyat kaisi hai

Haaa dii i saw the comment ... :)

thank you sooooo much ...luv you 🤗

I'm all good now😆 🤗

Supps yrrrrr ye kaha end kardiya story 🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧

But this was such a well written 👏👏👏

Loved every word of it

This was so painful and beautiful at Same time ❤️

Aree yaar di 🥺😭

Hall mein padh rahi thi aur rone lag gyi main 😭😭😭😭

Sacchi bol rahi hoon yaar papa puch rahe the kya huva 🤧🤧🤧

Itna accha likha hai... Mai kya comment karu isspar...

The End 🥺🥺

Yes, you are late.

But the way you have written 3rd part, it was worth waiting. 😭❤️

Your apology is accepted.😆👍🏼

Kudos to you. 🤗👏

It was so painful, heart-touching and emotional.

ek baar fir se rula diya yaar. 😭

Bas aise hi likhte raho. 🥳

& take care of yourself.

& Thanks for tagging.