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Posted: 4 years ago
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Ok when I click the post I was not expecting this

This is really good ❤❤❤👏

Mini you should better continue this

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Posted: 4 years ago
#22

Bahut accha hai. Short and sweet. Plz keep writing👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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So Vir was cursed😲😒


Now y he is putting Pur in jail 😳???


Plzzz update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Nezuko

Ok when I click the post I was not expecting this

This is really good ❤❤❤👏

Mini you should better continue this

Thanks dear will continue for sure 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It's like fairy tale...superb mini....❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Purvi comes home vir says “I thought you won’t come back. What made you change your mind”? Purvi said I wanted to come vir thinking why did she want to?? He is very confused purvi says can I ask u something? Yes why where cursed?? Vir gets really mad shouts at HOW DO U KNOW THIS? WHO TOLD YOU? she is very scared when I was on my walk I saw sudha and yogi they told me. What did they say? She says that you hate love and people that fall in love that why you punished them. Yes I hate love marriage o god it just sucks.

She goes very close to him and says “love is such a blessing how can you hate it”?

She touches his dark face and kisses it his skin color changes. She happy and says it worked my true loves kiss.

He shouts at and drags her. Where are you taking me? Let go you beast!

Stay here but here this is a jail I’m not staying here she is about to leave he pulls her.

You have a black heart that why no one loves you but I know there is good in you. He leaves she shouts I KNOW YOUR A GOOD MAN YOUR HEART IS GOOD NOT EVIL.

Vir in his room thinks to himself

What if purvi is right? I’m good???

No vir ur evil don’t forget it was a deal between you and her dad she is just her for the deal nothing else.

In jail purvi is crying and says vir I just hate you so much!!! She shouts SOMEONE HELP!!!!! No one hear her voice.

Next day vir gets up and goes to the jail to see purvi.

He is lost in her he is about to wake her but she sees him and is scared why are you here?

I am here to free you go back to you parents tht need you. She is about to go before going I just want say you have a good heart I know you do someday I hope you find love she leaves...

TBC in part 3

Edited by Red_eyes - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Mini hope u r able to edit ur post title ...it's 00.13 ovhere ...feeling sleepy..good nite.. see u trow dear


Rab Rakha 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Red_eyes

Purvi comes home vir says “I thought you won’t come back. What made you change your mind”? Purvi said I wanted to come vir thinking why did she want to?? He is very confused purvi says can I ask u something? Yes why where cursed?? Vir gets really mad shouts at HOW DO U KNOW THIS? WHO TOLD YOU? she is very scared when I was on my walk I saw sudha and yogi they told me. What did they say? She says that you hate love and people that fall in love that why you punished them. Yes I hate love marriage o god it just sucks.

She goes very close to him and says “love is such a blessing how can you hate it”?

She touches his dark face and kisses it his skin color changes. She happy and says it worked my true loves kiss.

He shouts at and drags her. Where are you taking me? Let go you beast!

Stay here but here this is a jail I’m not staying here she is about to leave he pulls her.

You have a black heart that why no one loves you but I know there is good in you. He leaves she shouts I KNOW YOUR A GOOD MAN YOUR HEART IS GOOD NOT EVIL.

Vir in his room thinks to himself

What if purvi is right? I’m good???

No vir ur evil don’t forget it was a deal between you and her dad she is just her for the deal nothing else.

In jail purvi is crying and says vir I just hate you so much!!! She shouts SOMEONE HELP!!!!! No one hear her voice.

Next day vir gets up and goes to the jail to see purvi.

He is lost in her he is about to wake her but she sees him and is scared why are you here?

I am here to free you go back to you parents tht need you. She is about to go before going I just want say you have a good heart I know you do someday I hope you find love she leaves...

TBC in part 3

Yaar next time do come with a longer part🙏.

M padna shuru kart hu r khatam ho jata h😒

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Posted: 4 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: sargamif

Yaar next time do come with a longer part🙏.

M padna shuru kart hu r khatam ho jata h😒

Sure will come wil a longer part next time 😊 thanks for your feedback

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Posted: 4 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Red_eyes

Purvi comes home vir says “I thought you won’t come back. What made you change your mind”? Purvi said I wanted to come vir thinking why did she want to?? He is very confused purvi says can I ask u something? Yes why where cursed?? Vir gets really mad shouts at HOW DO U KNOW THIS? WHO TOLD YOU? she is very scared when I was on my walk I saw sudha and yogi they told me. What did they say? She says that you hate love and people that fall in love that why you punished them. Yes I hate love marriage o god it just sucks.

She goes very close to him and says “love is such a blessing how can you hate it”?

She touches his dark face and kisses it his skin color changes. She happy and says it worked my true loves kiss.

He shouts at and drags her. Where are you taking me? Let go you beast!

Stay here but here this is a jail I’m not staying here she is about to leave he pulls her.

You have a black heart that why no one loves you but I know there is good in you. He leaves she shouts I KNOW YOUR A GOOD MAN YOUR HEART IS GOOD NOT EVIL.

Vir in his room thinks to himself

What if purvi is right? I’m good???

No vir ur evil don’t forget it was a deal between you and her dad she is just her for the deal nothing else.

In jail purvi is crying and says vir I just hate you so much!!! She shouts SOMEONE HELP!!!!! No one hear her voice.

Next day vir gets up and goes to the jail to see purvi.

He is lost in her he is about to wake her but she sees him and is scared why are you here?

I am here to free you go back to you parents tht need you. She is about to go before going I just want say you have a good heart I know you do someday I hope you find love she leaves...

TBC in part 3

Short but beautiful!❤️

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