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Posted: 4 years ago
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When we are getting the next part?

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Ok..I will be waiting🤗

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Originally posted by: Red_eyes

Purvi comes home vir says “I thought you won’t come back. What made you change your mind”? Purvi said I wanted to come vir thinking why did she want to?? He is very confused purvi says can I ask u something? Yes why where cursed?? Vir gets really mad shouts at HOW DO U KNOW THIS? WHO TOLD YOU? she is very scared when I was on my walk I saw sudha and yogi they told me. What did they say? She says that you hate love and people that fall in love that why you punished them. Yes I hate love marriage o god it just sucks.

She goes very close to him and says “love is such a blessing how can you hate it”?

She touches his dark face and kisses it his skin color changes. She happy and says it worked my true loves kiss.

He shouts at and drags her. Where are you taking me? Let go you beast!

Stay here but here this is a jail I’m not staying here she is about to leave he pulls her.

You have a black heart that why no one loves you but I know there is good in you. He leaves she shouts I KNOW YOUR A GOOD MAN YOUR HEART IS GOOD NOT EVIL.

Vir in his room thinks to himself

What if purvi is right? I’m good???

No vir ur evil don’t forget it was a deal between you and her dad she is just her for the deal nothing else.

In jail purvi is crying and says vir I just hate you so much!!! She shouts SOMEONE HELP!!!!! No one hear her voice.

Next day vir gets up and goes to the jail to see purvi.

He is lost in her he is about to wake her but she sees him and is scared why are you here?

I am here to free you go back to you parents tht need you. She is about to go before going I just want say you have a good heart I know you do someday I hope you find love she leaves...

TBC in part 3

Hey Mini lovely update ❤️....Pur kissed Vir hayyees☺️ and his colour changed....seems the curse is fading away ...but y is she leaving???😒😭


Hope they ll miss each other during their separation 😒


Please update soon Mini


Btw I hope your leg is better now...TC 🤗🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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After purvi leaves vir goes to the living room. He is sad tht she is gone he thinks of her words. He gets FB of her saying “one day you will find”. In the floor he finds a cup FB scene of when she gave me tea and cup drops. He cried while looking at.


The bell rings vir answered the door.

We see the evil queen anjali enters what are you doing here he says. Well I am hear to tell you that purvi is DEAD vir is shocked. He screamed NO YOU ARE LYING. No I am not.

Vir recalled anjali and his first meeting and how she brainwashed him to curse yogi and sudha.

Purvi is shown in a mental hospital she forgets her time with vir only remember her parents.

Vir is in his room thinking in his mind FB scene of vir he calls purvi and is looking at her beautiful yellow dress. Can I dance with you? She says yes but with shyness.

Tum hi ho plays in the background.

Purvi you were right about love it’s beautiful feel. He thinks will purvi ever love me or does she love someone else?

Purvi thinks will vir ever love me the I love him? Vir asks he what kind of guy did dream of? Music stopped

I dreamed of a guy my age and not my uncle’s. Vir is shocked what you think I’m your uncle’s age? Who is this guy I want to him. Purvi says forget it why am I tht old to you. No I was just. Vir get out of his FB come to present time he hears some at the door come in he say.

Hi can I get some water please she says he turns and sees purvi. Your alive he hugs her very tight. She get off of me I don’t know who you are?

This shocked vir! It’s me vir your vir remember he shows her the cup you remember this right it’s a cup she says yes it’s the same cup u give me tea in and u broke it. I got mad at you.

What are talking about?

Ok you don’t remember it’s fine just take a seat please sit.

Now tell me what happened to you the evil queen Anjali did this she says

Anjali told me you died. She lied to you anjali kept me in mental hospital all these years. I only remember my parents no else.

Vir thinks to himself I will make you remember our love. I can’t tell purvi about the deal I mad with her dad.

She will hate him.

What happened to u? Nothing he says

I want to remember everything.

You will with a big smile I will make sure of it.

In the living room purvi sees the blinds and gets hallucinations of her fall in vir catching her. She screamed I CAN REMEMBER WHAT HAPPENED!!! Vir run into her arms it’s ok don’t worry I will make you remember. What if I don’t remember all my life? I will still try...

Main phir bhi tumko caahun ga plays.

She about to leave he hold her hard you want to know who I am right wait here

He goes to he room and wears a beast costume.

He comes to this is me. Vir vir she screams where are you there is a beast here he going to kill me!

He takes off the costume she says you’re a beast she tries run run vir pulls her to himself leave me you beast I hate you.

I was a beast before meeting you. Your the one who changed me for good please don’t go I can’t live without you.

I changed you she says yes remember how you used to say there is in in me and I have a good heart.
You remember your uncle (tauji 😂) yes he is a great man. Vir says she remember him and not me if I meet him I will kill him for sure 😂😈....

TBC

Edited by Red_eyes - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Red_eyes

After purvi leaves vir goes to the living room. He is sad tht she is gone he thinks of her words. He gets FB of her saying “one day you will find”. In the floor he finds a cup FB scene of when she gave me tea and cup drops. He cried while looking at.


The bell rings vir answered the door.

We see the evil queen anjali enters what are you doing here he says. Well I am hear to tell you that purvi is DEAD vir is shocked. He screamed NO YOU ARE LYING. No I am not.

Vir recalled anjali and his first meeting and how she brainwashed him to curse yogi and sudha.

Purvi is shown in a mental hospital she forgets her time with vir only remember her parents.

Vir is in his room thinking in his mind FB scene of vir he calls purvi and is looking at her beautiful yellow dress. Can I dance with you? She says yes but with shyness.

Tum hi ho plays in the background.

Purvi you were right about love it’s beautiful feel. He thinks will purvi ever love me or does she love someone else?

Purvi thinks will vir ever love me the I love him? Vir asks he what kind of guy did dream of? Music stopped

I dreamed of a guy my age and not my uncle’s. Vir is shocked what you think I’m your uncle’s age? Who is this guy I want to him. Purvi says forget it why am I tht old to you. No I was just..


Will purvi says ILU to vir?

Hey Mini lovely update 🤗

Waiting for more😇😇

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sargamif

Hey Mini lovely update 🤗

Waiting for more😇😇

I’m glad u liked will continue part 3 over the weekend untill then think will purvir say ILU to each other??

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Red_eyes

I’m glad u liked will continue part 3 over the weekend untill then think will purvir say ILU to each other??

Yup will do so.Purvir fans are very fast when it comes to making baseless theories 😜😜

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice update miniiiii... intresting hote jaa raha hai...pls continue soon...❤️❤️🤩😘😘

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Red_eyes

After purvi leaves vir goes to the living room. He is sad tht she is gone he thinks of her words. He gets FB of her saying “one day you will find”. In the floor he finds a cup FB scene of when she gave me tea and cup drops. He cried while looking at.


The bell rings vir answered the door.

We see the evil queen anjali enters what are you doing here he says. Well I am hear to tell you that purvi is DEAD vir is shocked. He screamed NO YOU ARE LYING. No I am not.

Vir recalled anjali and his first meeting and how she brainwashed him to curse yogi and sudha.

Purvi is shown in a mental hospital she forgets her time with vir only remember her parents.

Vir is in his room thinking in his mind FB scene of vir he calls purvi and is looking at her beautiful yellow dress. Can I dance with you? She says yes but with shyness.

Tum hi ho plays in the background.

Purvi you were right about love it’s beautiful feel. He thinks will purvi ever love me or does she love someone else?

Purvi thinks will vir ever love me the I love him? Vir asks he what kind of guy did dream of? Music stopped

I dreamed of a guy my age and not my uncle’s. Vir is shocked what you think I’m your uncle’s age? Who is this guy I want to him. Purvi says forget it why am I tht old to you. No I was just..


Will purvi says ILU to vir?

too good 🤩🤩🤩🤩jaldi update karna

Love the way aap bhi bullet train chale k twists n turns de rhe ho 🤩

Edited by Piyaazzz - 4 years ago

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