Love disclosed Concluded 12/4 - Page 7

Originally posted by: skeptical

Both the parts have been specially written to link up your concept and Poet's. Wait and watch.......uhum ===== wait and read............😉

wow wow wow wow skepy arey loved my raj being treated so sweetly by you ..aww he a thinker, and then talk with his mother ,and later on u left us at crucial point hehe ...yeh nainsaafi kar di tumne..chalo i will live waiting for urupdate but it indeed was for dreamers ....and i am one of those....and i can imagine raj on terrace......thinking and then winking sweetly awwwwwwwwwww thansk so much loved it

Skep........so beautiful.....loved every bit....I mean...wao!!!......
while reading I m just totally lost.......the convo between Pammi n Raj...👏....n between Kranti n Raj...😍......
aap toh sach mein jadugarni hai........

Originally posted by: namita25

beautiful update skep......
loved the entire convo between chiajee and Raj.............
poor raj.............. deep down he is going through a lot of pain but at the same time he is trying hard to be tough outside......
and the last part was stupendous..........
"what I feel for you is something more than love......."
both love each other deeply......

Originally posted by: meftal

skepti it's fabulous,u have shown the pain of raj,which he is not trying to show to kranti beautifully,and the end was superb⭐️⭐️ here is some line showing the pain of raj thank you for the stars 😆

Din bada suna aur udaas hai mann,teri yaadon ke aas paas hai mann,

mann ki bechaini hawaon ne pehchani hai,aaj wo door hai mere seher ke gali kuche se, mann ki ek baat kahun maan ka bhi udaas hai mann

Originally posted by: sim_ran

no problemo take u time....

Originally posted by: netu19

skepti.....very touching beautiful part

he cannot stay away from her.....weakness on Raj s part....but he hiding it not to make Kranti weak.....
the pain he goes through thinking of that accident....n the way he supported her in recovery....its very touching..... all this will be in a little more detail in MRD (her path to recovery) tab tak tadapte raho 😉

skepti when it comes to detailing of emotions.... everytime u just make me feel awed a 100 times more!! you cover a plethora of emotions...
like when kranti was injured and Raj taking care of her... she questioning him if he pities her...

they both doing everything for each other and dont want the gratitude....simply amazing

I love your slow walk!" he remarked.

"What'..why?"

"It makes the waiting exciting." He winked at her wickedly.

how you churn up such dialogues I knew you dreamers would fall those lines. I deliberately inserted those lines. And true to character, all of you fell for it like a ton of bricks 😆

end scene....great way with emotions again....

feeling that its more than just love is mutual...the bond between them is just too superb for words...

Originally posted by: watergirl68in

Hello:

Loved your story. At least you have portrayed Rajveer as a person who holds up against Kranti, not like the serial where he is show as someone who is not even able to get his message through to his own wife, when ever he opens his mouth Kranti just squashes him and walks off. In your story you have show Rajveer who has the guts to take important desicsion, stick by it, regarding the welfare of his wife, over riding any opposition from the family members and his wife. That goes on to show that the depth of love between husband and wife.

I am waiting for the rest of the story.

regards
water

Originally posted by: pennu

@red... Poetic did see that....😃

Originally posted by: sami01

wow wow wow wow skepy arey loved my raj being treated so sweetly by you ..serial mein to bilkul bekaar aadmi tha aww he a thinker, and then talk with his mother ,and later on u left us at crucial point hehe ...yeh nainsaafi kar di tumne..chalo i will live waiting for urupdate but it indeed was for dreamers ....and i am one of those....and i can imagine raj on terrace......thinking and then winking sweetly awwwwwwwwwww thansk so much loved it