Love disclosed Concluded 12/4 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

OMIGOSH Skep ................ You're adding to "A Wintery night " !!!!!!!!!

That is an unexpected bonus !!!!!! 👏 I am glad you liked the treat

Just came online as most of my work is over ..... good for you

And what do I find ?????

A tasty, tasty tidbit from my fav writer !!!!!!! 🤗 muuaahhhhhhh!

Superb intro ...........

Kranti's upset .... yet she knows; she'll have to go .....

Raj knows he'll miss her desperately .... but he knows.... its for her own good.....

What a beautiful husband-wife relationship this is !!!!!!!! Why couldn't they have shown MRD in this manner? boo hoo!! 😭

Sighhhhhhhhhhhh !!!!!!

So much love ............

Loved Kranti's bonding with BBR & Chaiji too ....... i hate that saas bahu melodrama

Thank you Skep ......... for wiping some of the bitter memories of the real MRD .............. 🤗

Originally posted by: dilipc302

This one, the other story '.. encounter' and last week update all are 'awesome'

Sorry for late commnets as was out of home/ workplace last week.

Hi Folks,

Wonderful update Skep 👍🏼

Now we know how bad things were goign to be, his heart must have been in his mouth. I am sure that's a scene he is never going to forget all his life. A nightmare actually.
Why does Kranti have to suffer always?

It's admirable how he became a pillar of support to her while she was recovering. It takes courage not to becoem weak in fornt of the pain of your beloved.

No wonder Raj wants her to get completely well soon, he can't see his Firebrand in that state!

And how considerate is he! Not wanting a child, so that she doens't have to go through the process once again, of being in hospital and stuff.

Good portrayal of Mother-son relationship. Pammi understand her son so well and realises that he has unspoken things in his mind.

a small bit - Kranti obeys or rather listens to her mother in law, but all her revolt is against Raj. It's then that the fire and ice thing starts playing.
But she understands him perfectly. Like she realises that all his glib talk is to cover up his anxiety.

Loved the flirting between the two, how he finds her slow walking exciting 😉, spicing up his anticipation.

The two of them are goign to miss each other so much,a nd they will have to travel through the pains of separation to become one again.


The warmest part of the update is Kranti feeling much more than love for Raj. SO for both of them, the relationship runs deep, a soul-binding relation. The initiation of the kiss was beautiful.

hey skep sorry for being late read both the parts today as always loved ur work u r soooo good i giving a detailed narrating of the scene i just love it. so tell me where is ur Mrd my way update??

I went thru every possible books, cards
to find the correct word which I can Convey u
when I sat down to jolt few lines
I remember
Oh Skepi
U r just FAntansic in ur writing
I wish I knew someone in telly world
I would hve surely suggested ur name
Our writer in telly world r Without human Emotion

( basically dey show house Fights bet Women
that I dont enjoy)
I just love lovestory types)
Simple & Cute
That what ur story r

But Being Greedy Pl dont forget Ur Previous MRD My Way
I am waiting what happen after Raj feeds Kranti the touchy scene

This 4 Raj 2 Kranti on the Terrace on his feelings
Mere Honton ke mehaktay hue naghmo par na ja
Mera seenay main kaye aur bhi ghum paltay hain
Mera Cherhray par dikhaway ka tabassum hai magar
Meri Aankhon main udaasi kay diye jalte hain

Awwww ................ Skep ..... that was heart warming ....

Ahh!!! Skep this for you dear...🤗 what a wonderful update Skep... Raj recollecting that horror night.. He felt her pain.. and me his.. thanks to your way of writing... 👏 And he is not ready to show his pain before her.. only bcos he don't want to see her sad... the way dai-ma wiping her tear every once in while.. is very touching... Loved the way Raj and Pammi share those silent moments in the terrace... Kranti listens to her pammi than Raj... Hmmm so here is your Kudi... anytime ready to chew Raj's heart.. huh??? And the shadow in the wall seems to become one... Woww what a way to picture it...simply loved... And yes kranti said it right... its something more than love which they both share... And the way she wispered it before her lips met his.... Ahh... Great.... So they are going to miss each other like anything....

Originally posted by: poetic

Wonderful update Skep 👍🏼 Thanks

Now we know how bad things were goign to be, his heart must have been in his mouth. I am sure that's a scene he is never going to forget all his life. A nightmare actually.
Why does Kranti have to suffer always? He is suffering too......

It's admirable how he became a pillar of support to her while she was recovering. It takes courage not to becoem weak in fornt of the pain of your beloved.

No wonder Raj wants her to get completely well soon, he can't see his Firebrand in that state! With her spirit, she'll never be the meek sort

And how considerate is he! Not wanting a child, so that she doens't have to go through the process once again, of being in hospital and stuff.

Good portrayal of Mother-son relationship. Pammi understand her son so well and realises that he has unspoken things in his mind.

a small bit - Kranti obeys or rather listens to her mother in law, but all her revolt is against Raj. It's then that the fire and ice thing starts playing. dead right
But she understands him perfectly. Like she realises that all his glib talk is to cover up his anxiety.

Loved the flirting between the two, how he finds her slow walking exciting 😉, spicing up his anticipation. He doesn't want her to ever feel she is lacking

The two of them are goign to miss each other so much,a nd they will have to travel through the pains of separation to become one again.


The warmest part of the update is Kranti feeling much more than love for Raj. Remember he tells the same to Manpreet. I just put the link.
SO for both of them, the relationship runs deep, a soul-binding relation. The initiation of the kiss was beautiful.