Love disclosed Concluded 12/4 - Page 9

Originally posted by: poetic

Skep

What a beautiful update!

Today's word from thesaurus is Beautiful! hahahaha

The first part from Seher's POV was so cute and it showed her parents in different perspectives. And love the way how the baby understood her parents presence and the love they showered on her. Even she understands that her Mother pours all her love on her which she did not receive as a child. Yes she does

Good to know that the baby enjoys all the relationships that exists. Seher is a happy baby

Loved that part where Raj-Kranti visit a stall to buy things, only to spend time together. Thats the beauty of a sound relationship. hmmmmmmmm

It's painful for both of them to stay away from each other. So touching! yes

The flashback part was excellent. Though Kranti was mortified earlier at the idea of being married to Raj, yet she seemed happy when she garlanded him. 😊 Does this imply that she fell in love with him during the mid-phase? For knowing that you will have to read MRD ..... my way when I start updating it.

Their chemistry is so palpable in this part. Loved the nok jhok during the garland ceremony and his wicked, oh-so-cool comments. He was really being naughty. The passion flaring up was so visible in his 'red-related' comment. yes 😉

And the scene inside the room, is just too pristine and roamntic. Let me dream about it! 😍 Enjoy my dreamer

Kranti's love for Raj is so beautifully reflected in her statement to Seher that she has the best Father 😳 even though he is an abominable person. 😉😆 Even Kranti's love for Seher reflects her love towards Raj, as she continuously thinks about him and longs for him. Seher is a part of Raj she's taking along with her.

BTW, loved that part also where Kullu thumped Raj on his back so that his DIL could put the garland around his son's neck. SO sweet! 😃 glad you noticed and liked it

Ok same question as netu, so those two had a live-in relationship?

Originally posted by: pennu

Ahhhh !!!! Skep.... It was a very touching update.... I just loved the way you picturised Sehr POV... how she recognise her mom,dad and grany... brilliant... And Raj's touching doubt.... whether Sehr will remember him on next visit.... It clearly showed his fatherly affection towards her... and how he is going to miss her... And that wedding ceremony.... Simply Grant... mee too looking forward for its details.... And Kranti saying to Sehr.. that, she had a wonderful father.. clearly showed the depth of her love towards him... And at last I am also having the same doubt of netu and poet about the live-in-relationship....😃...

Originally posted by: skeptical

@ pink

I am not able to see yr VMs in Z share I can them in only youtube. But the last one was not uplaoded to youtube....... 😭

and yaar it was indeed worth it.....it was amazing story i loved it ..arey skepy i post all my vms on youtube....its jsut i post them embeded on page itself here in forum so u couldnt see so i can send u links if u want they r all on my channel ..if u go in videos and click all you will see here is link to my channel on youtube..'

Originally posted by: skeptical

Pennnnnnnnnnnnnnn ..............................

This is yr concept....... were R-K living together? You wanted a marriage anniversary celebration which was to be a surprise for them and arranged by Pammi. So I have given you all that.

@ pink .....Aur kitna detail mein likhu? Aap sab bore ho jaoge..........😉

Originally posted by: skeptical

@ pink

How cujju...............? I thought you were Kranti's biggest champion like me 😕 Would my kudi ever agrre to live in sin with that abominable man????? 😡 For knowing exactly what all this is about.........wait till MRD .... is updated. 😉

Ha ha, of course I am. NO doubts about it. 😉 JUst too curious about the in-between portion.

Seems like he is an abominable snowman or Yeti kind of thing .... 😆

And me waiting toooooooooooooo patiently for MRD ... my way, I mean your way. 😉 I am sure abt Kranti but not that abominable man. 😆

BTW, did notice that thumping part. it means Kranti did manage to win Kullu's favour too. 😊

Originally posted by: sami01

and yaar it was indeed worth it.....it was amazing story i loved it ..arey skepy i post all my vms on youtube....its jsut i post them embeded on page itself here in forum so u couldnt see so i can send u links if u want they r all on my channel ..if u go in videos and click all you will see here is link to my channel on youtube..'

http://www.youtube.com/user/shaa100

do see the maa one itsreally very close to my heart...........and its inspired from your story

Originally posted by: namita25

.thanks a lot skep for the update..........I have been waiting impatiently for it............
...............thoroughly enjoyed reading the wedding ceremony scene.....😍😍😍
must say raj is very daring..............
loved the way raj rallied kranti in the beginnng.........
and that seher part really touched my heart

Originally posted by: pennu

Yes I know Skep... But you write it in a beautiful way...I almost forget that its my concept... I just love the you end everystory of yours... Its having an amazing, unique style of yours.. just like the O Hentry twist...

Originally posted by: poetic

Ha ha, of course I am. NO doubts about it. 😉 JUst too curious about the in-between portion.

Seems like he is an abominable snowman or Yeti kind of thing .... 😆

And me waiting toooooooooooooo patiently for MRD ... my way, I mean your way. 😉 I am sure abt Kranti but not that abominable man. 😆

BTW, did notice that thumping part. it means Kranti did manage to win Kullu's favour too. 😊