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Posted: 16 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: tetuty66
Skep........so beautiful.....loved every bit....I mean...wao!!!......
while reading I m just totally lost.......the convo between Pammi n Raj...👏....n between Kranti n Raj...😍......
aap toh sach mein jadugarni hai........

T2 sweety, it was all for you...................... 😉 Bechare JC ko aapne jo chhod diya

Edited by skeptical - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#72

Here is another update. Sorry for the delay but my internet was bad. This one is for Pennu. Happy Reading............ 😉

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Posted: 16 years ago

#73

skepy me first today yeyyyyyyyyyyyy raat ko sone se pehle what a treat superb.....too good just wow wow wow.................

so u showed us such sweet story everyday life of RK , the way u captured raj's eyes and their expression......and yes indeed sehr has wonderfull father awwwwwwwww very very sweet writing , i made another VM skepy , i must say it was ur story which inspired me to do a VM on pammi as well chaiji was such loving woman .....u r showing her personality beautifully thnks once agin i will read once kids sleep and will recomment take care..

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@chimuli

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Posted: 16 years ago

#74

Oye!!....Skep.............another beautiful update......
Loved the way you showed Raj teasing her in flashback.....And Kranti was thinking this.....
n interaction between K n Seher u showed on train was also so natural n beautiful...👏
And yes indeed Seher has got wonderful father..rather I would say Skep abominable word compliments it....cant wait for next update....😳

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netu19

@netu19

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Posted: 16 years ago

#75

WOW!!!!! stunned by the his audaciousness ...and floored by his love...poor Kranti….
lovely update altogether

Ok that's how they got married

So they were having live in relationship before marriage….😉

would love to read that wedding part in detail….

I too think that Kranti looks nice in red

Skepti the best was Seher s part….her reaction to her mother n father….awesome….

I believe kids really understand the emotions far better then grown up…they always know who loves them truly….only that they can't communicate through words….

great piece of writing i must say as always 👏👏👏

P.S. skepti are all parts going to be prelude to wintry night...or its going beyond that

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poetic

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Posted: 16 years ago

#76

Skep

What a beautiful update!

Today's word from thesaurus is Beautiful!

The first part from Seher's POV was so cute and it showed her parents in different perspectives. And love the way how the baby understood her parents presence and the love they showered on her. Even she understands that her Mother pours all her love on her which she did not receive as a child.

Good to know that the baby enjoys all the relationships that exists.

Loved that part where Raj-Kranti visit a stall to buy things, only to spend time together. Thats the beauty of a sound relationship.

It's painful for both of them to stay away from each other. So touching!

The flashback part was excellent. Though Kranti was mortified earlier at the idea of being married to Raj, yet she seemed happy when she garlanded him. 😊 Does this imply that she fell in love with him during the mid-phase?

Their chemistry is so palpable in this part. Loved the nok jhok during the garland ceremony and his wicked, oh-so-cool comments. He was really being naughty. The passion flaring up was so visible in his 'red-related' comment.

And the scene inside the room, is just too pristine and roamntic. Let me dream about it! 😍

Kranti's love for Raj is so beautifully reflected in her statement to Seher that she has the best Father 😳 even though he is an abominable person. 😉😆 Even Kranti's love for Seher reflects her love towards Raj, as she continuously thinks about him and longs for him. Seher is a part of Raj she's taking along with her.

BTW, loved that part also where Kullu thumped Raj on his back so that his DIL could put the garland around his son's neck. SO sweet! 😃

Ok same question as netu, so those two had a live-in relationship?

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pennu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#77

Ahhhh !!!! Skep.... It was a very touching update.... I just loved the way you picturised Sehr POV... how she recognise her mom,dad and grany... brilliant... And Raj's touching doubt.... whether Sehr will remember him on next visit.... It clearly showed his fatherly affection towards her... and how he is going to miss her... And that wedding ceremony.... Simply Grant... mee too looking forward for its details.... And Kranti saying to Sehr.. that, she had a wonderful father.. clearly showed the depth of her love towards him... And at last I am also having the same doubt of netu and poet about the live-in-relationship....😃...

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skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: sami01
skepy me first today yeyyyyyyyyyyyy raat ko sone se pehle what a treat superb.....too good just wow wow wow................. I sat up late in the night and wrote it. Looks like it was worth it.
so u showed us such sweet story everyday life of RK , the way u captured raj's eyes and their expression......and yes indeed sehr has wonderfull father awwwwwwwww very very sweet writing , i made another VM skepy , i must say it was ur story which inspired me to do a VM on pammi as well chaiji was such loving woman .....u r showing her personality beautifully thnks once agin i will read once kids sleep and will recomment take care..

@ pink

I am not able to see yr VMs in Z share I can them in only youtube. But the last one was not uplaoded to youtube....... 😭

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: tetuty66
Oye!!....Skep.............another beautiful update......
Loved the way you showed Raj teasing her in flashback.....And Kranti was thinking this.....
n interaction between K n Seher u showed on train was also so natural n beautiful...👏
And yes indeed Seher has got wonderful father..rather I would say Skep abominable word compliments it....cant wait for next update....😳

Hello dreamer, I'm glad you liked it ..................... 😉

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: netu19

WOW!!!!! stunned by the his audaciousness ...and floored by his love...poor Kranti?.
lovely update altogether Thank you

Ok that's how they got married Looks like you have missed this sentence " Raj told him that they were married"

So they were having live in relationship before marriage?.😉 This statement is erroneous

would love to read that wedding part in detail?. N2 my pet this is a short story........ not a saga!!

I too think that Kranti looks nice in red yes I think so too

Skepti the best was Seher s part?.her reaction to her mother n father?.awesome?. Good, I am glad you all have loved that angle.

I believe kids really understand the emotions far better then grown up?they always know who loves them truly?.only that they can't communicate through words?. Yes and babies relate to their parents through the sense of touch and smell.

great piece of writing i must say as always 👏👏👏

P.S. skepti are all parts going to be prelude to wintry night...or its going beyond that

@ pink

all parts are a prelude to Wintry night. 😊

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