Love disclosed Concluded 12/4 - Page 6

Originally posted by: sim_ran

hey skep sorry for being late read both the parts today as always loved ur work u r soooo good i giving a detailed narrating of the scene i just love it. so tell me where is ur Mrd my way update??

Originally posted by: dilipc302

Wonderful part II.

The story is like movie of Gulzar, who uses flashbacks. You are also using them effcetively to make story very interesting

Great!!

Originally posted by: sasha722

I went thru every possible books, cards
to find the correct word which I can Convey u
when I sat down to jolt few lines
I remember
Oh Skepi
U r just FAntansic in ur writing
I wish I knew someone in telly world
I would hve surely suggested ur name
Our writer in telly world r Without human Emotion

( basically dey show house Fights bet Women
that I dont enjoy)
I just love lovestory types)
Simple & Cute
That what ur story r

But Being Greedy Pl dont forget Ur Previous MRD My Way
I am waiting what happen after Raj feeds Kranti the touchy scene

This 4 Raj 2 Kranti on the Terrace on his feelings
Mere Honton ke mehaktay hue naghmo par na ja
Mera seenay main kaye aur bhi ghum paltay hain
Mera Cherhray par dikhaway ka tabassum hai magar
Meri Aankhon main udaasi kay diye jalte hain

Originally posted by: pennu

Ahh!!! Skep this for you dear...🤗 what a wonderful update Skep... Raj recollecting that horror night.. He felt her pain.. and me his.. thanks to your way of writing... 👏 And he is not ready to show his pain before her.. only bcos he don't want to see her sad... the way dai-ma wiping her tear every once in while.. is very touching... Loved the way Raj and Pammi share those silent moments in the terrace... Kranti listens to her pammi than Raj... Hmmm so here is your Kudi... anytime ready to chew Raj's heart.. huh??? And the shadow in the wall seems to become one... Woww what a way to picture it...simply loved... And yes kranti said it right... its something more than love which they both share... And the way she wispered it before her lips met his.... Ahh... Great.... So they are going to miss each other like anything....

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

Awwww ................ Skep ..... that was heart warming ....

Raj struggling to come to terms with the fact that he will be separated from Kranti for a long time ...... at least what seems like ages for him .....

Loved Chaiji-Raj bonding .....

Raj's recounting of the horror of Kranti's accident ...... could feel his pain and anguish here .......

And Kranti's passionate declaration was the perfect finish to this wonderful piece .....

Great going Skep ...... 🤗

Originally posted by: skeptical

Arre baba ....... shall do it. Do you want me to update side by side? Actually that cuts my link Hence I do one at a time. But MRD .... my way will come on by Monday, till then this will finish.

skepti.....very touching beautiful part

he cannot stay away from her.....weakness on Raj s part....but he hiding it not to make Kranti weak.....
the pain he goes through thinking of that accident....n the way he supported her in recovery....its very touching.....

skepti when it comes to detailing of emotions.... everytime u just make me feel awed a 100 times more!! you cover a plethora of emotions...
like when kranti was injured and Raj taking care of her... she questioning him if he pities her...

they both doing everything for each other and dont want the gratitude....simply amazing

I love your slow walk!" he remarked.

"What'..why?"

"It makes the waiting exciting." He winked at her wickedly.

how you churn up such dialogues

end scene....great way with emotions again....

feeling that its more than just love is mutual...the bond between them is just too superb for words...

Hello:

Loved your story. At least you have portrayed Rajveer as a person who holds up against Kranti, not like the serial where he is show as someone who is not even able to get his message through to his own wife, when ever he opens his mouth Kranti just squashes him and walks off. In your story you have show Rajveer who has the guts to take important desicsion, stick by it, regarding the welfare of his wife, over riding any opposition from the family members and his wife. That goes on to show that the depth of love between husband and wife.

I am waiting for the rest of the story.

regards
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