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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: namita25

skep a great piece of work as usaul............
I really liked to see BBR's character brooding in positivity while in the serial she was an inane character................
here the entire family is a united group........so much that even BBR's daughter addresses Kranti as choti maa....... yes no saas and saazish 🤢
kranti endures all the pain to make her family members happy.........................
Raj is really concerned about Kranti.............thats the basic reason he is sending her to shimla.....he wants her to recover as soon as possible...........
well I am impatiently waiting for the next part

Shall update on tuesday night 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: tetuty66

Skep as usual beautiful....👏
The way you showed Madhu I liked it ,she is a human here....yes she is!!....
No negativity.......so pure I felt such a good family....
Raj wants her to go to Shimla ...for her benefit only..though he knows how badly he will miss him!
Kranti angry on him for doing so...
Bond between Kranti n Pammi visible as she decides to talk to raj....oh!!...wao!!
n last but not the least the way u showed them in last...I mean both together...😍
...........waiting for next part..😳

Oye my beautiful dreamer ........ no update till tuesday night ........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: sasha722

Skepi What a Romantic piece of work
Very touchy , mature love
so aesthetic u r showing their feelings
Mar Jawa my dear
Impatiently Next part

I concentrate more on their emotions and feelings which I convey thro their dialogues
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: netu19

tit for tat...... 😆😆
everytime with your scenes u give love a far deeper meaning...

Thanks N2 ........ hope I can deliver as per yr expectations.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: akashruti12

ohhhhh its vry nice skepti...........

u hav shows raj's luv nd care 4 kranti vry nicely..........
its AWESMMMMMM ...............
want 2 read it agn n agn......

Oh Hi........ didn't know you were following the story.........😲
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: meftal

a great piece of work as usual,good to see madhu acting here positively,kranti as chhoti ma😎 so kranti wanted to chew his heart😆oh my dear raj waiting for next part.,really wanted to read again and again

You know there was a Red Indian custom of chewing the heart of the vanquished and spitting it out. Hahahahahaha
Just thought of it and used it here 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
@ skepi concentrate more on their emotions and feelings which I convey thro their dialogues

Ur Di alogues r just superb my dear
( dat i hve already praised u 4 this )
but I felt after a very long time u wrote romantic
feelings bet 2 which I was really looking 4ward
this happen coz when u read i get
emotionally & mentally so involved
dat we c R&K
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
OMIGOSH Skep ................ You're adding to "A Wintery night " !!!!!!!!!
That is an unexpected bonus !!!!!! 👏
Just came online as most of my work is over .....
And what do I find ?????
A tasty, tasty tidbit from my fav writer !!!!!!! 🤗
Superb intro ...........
Kranti's upset .... yet she knows; she'll have to go .....
Raj knows he'll miss her desperately .... but he knows.... its for her own good.....
What a beautiful husband-wife relationship this is !!!!!!!!
Sighhhhhhhhhhhh !!!!!!
So much love ............
Loved Kranti's bonding with BBR & Chaiji too .......
Thank you Skep ......... for wiping some of the bitter memories of the real MRD .............. 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
This one, the other story '.. encounter' and last week update all are 'awesome'
Sorry for late commnets as was out of home/ workplace last week.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: sasha722

@ skepi concentrate more on their emotions and feelings which I convey thro their dialogues

Ur Di alogues r just superb my dear
( dat i hve already praised u 4 this )
but I felt after a very long time u wrote romantic
feelings bet 2 which I was really looking 4ward
this happen coz when u read i get
emotionally & mentally so involved
dat we c R&K
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I think this effect is created because I am updating regularly........ don't you think? 😆

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