FF:R-K enters new phase of life next part P-3n P-6 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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gud work yaar ,......................really vry nice i seriously feel dat one day R s goin 2 protect K frm lathi charge in d siimilar way as u hav describd
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow purvi...........u have included everything that we wont to see in MRD....continue wit this bcos i really want to know what happens next😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very creative purvi, u have brought great twists in between, shubhankar , raj, kranti , all in one house, ab maza ayega, I wonder when we will get the real shubhu in show, amazing mind work purvi, as cool as urself😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sorry purvi I couldnt relate when you mentioned about this FF but i ad already read it and it is amazing now you have tocontinue I am dieing to know what happens next.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww very nice twist indeed hope to see more from u.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wowwww poorvi.. nice work yaaar.....
It was awsome..
Hmmm.... and what a twist at the end......
eagerly waiting to know, rest of the story....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh no what a twist to the tale Purvi😲👏...so now the woman who is seeing a son in Rajbir is actually Sohan Tauji's sister😲...this means poor Raj will become guilt conscious now😭..and Shubu is that woman's son is like cherry on the cake😆...Shubu might recognize Kranti...both r good friends I guess😕..So Raj will b guilty as well as Jealous seeing his wife getting too friendly with another man😲😉😳
Purvi u hv started your FF on a very interesting note and the story has lots of scope to take a very interesting direction in the future👍🏼...
This whole idea of RK on the streets with the riots suddenly happening and RK coming under the shelter of this lady was a very well thought out script👏..
Superb narration...do continue soon😳
And yes whenever u update your next part na,just edit your post title and give the page no also😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ekta, akashruti, Arwen, Saba, Ranju, Sami, Pennu I m so happy that u liked it. Thanks for ur encouragement. I'll post the next part soon

@ Jyoti- she said so before police only to save his own son Shubhankar. She did not wanted to disclose abt shubhankar before Police. Thanks dear for encouragement
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh purvi what a story
i feel that the creatives will pick up our FF ur story line everyone who writes
amazing work
but my dear i am waitng 4m jan 2nd after their heart throbbing milan
2 be one 1 then let subhankar come or any Tm dick harry come
i dont mind any twist or turns takes place then
pl in the story make them one then bring subhankar
anyways R is going to feel jealous bcoz he is extremely possessive of her
he will not be able to bear his wife talking 2 any smarty
wait 4 ur 2nd part


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Purvi 👏

Absolutely nice story track and it's nice to see RK together.

Interesting must say. And we have Shubhankar entering into the fray too ... 😊

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