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Posted: 16 years ago
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"Main paanch dus minute mein aata hu" Raj replies. Kranti wants to ask how he is now. But she cudnt ask. Raj get up n goes out of the room. He goes to kitchen. Tulsi bua n Shubhankar r having some conversation there. Shunhankar says, "Mujhe maut se dar nahi lagta. Aaj raat ko mujhe jaanaa hi padega. Abhi savere nikalna mumkin nahi. Pure sheher mein curfew hai. Aap is tarah mere liye royaa mat karo. Mujhe har baar haskar vidaa karna aur agar meri maut ki khabar aaye '." She interrupts n says "Ye subah subah kaisi ashubh baat kar raha hai". Shubhankar says " desh par mar meetne se zyada shubh aur kya ho sakta hai". Raj overhears everything. He is confirmed now that Shubhankar is Krantikari. He hates KKs so decide to leave this house soon as possible. Raj knocks the door n enter kitchen
Raj : Aapne bulaya tha
Tulsi bua : Ha. Abhi kaisi tabiyat hai tumhari beta.
Raj: Ji theek hu
Tulsi bua: Achha to naha lo phir mein khaana laga deti hu
Raj : Main aata hoon
Raj determines that he'll leave this house as soon as possible. He goes to the room allotted to them.
Raj: Mein is ghar mein nahi reh sakta
Kranti: Kuch kaha kya Tulsi bua ya Shunhankar ne?
Raj: toh tum en logo ki achhi tarah se jaanti ho?
Kranti: Ha
Raj: Aur isiliye kal unhone hame rehne ko diya
Kranti: Nahi
Raj: kya matlab? Tum nahi jaanti Sohan Singh ki behen ko? Tum nahi jaati Sohan Singh ke bhaanje ko? Tum nahi jaanti ke ye log Krantikari hai??
Kranti: Ha. Achhi tarah se jaanti hu. Par wo log mujhe nahi pehchaan paaye hai. Tulsi bua aur Shubhankar Lahore kayi saal baad aaye hai. Aur shaaayad meri shakal bhul bhi gaye hai
Raj: Yahi tumhaare liye achha hai. Mein en aatankwaadiyo ke ghar ek pal bhi nahi rahunga.
Kranti: Jo bhi ho kal enhi logo ne hame panah di thi. Kam se kam uska ehsaan to jatao
Raj: Maana ki hum par ehsaan kiya hai. Par main apne usulo ko nahi chod sakta. Aaj cerfew hai. Cerfew khatam hote hi mujhe aashiyaane ki talaash shuru karni padegi.
Kranti doesn't argue with Raj because she too doesn't want to stay here. She is worried how she'll explain to them why she married Barrister Rajveer. She is fearing that Shubhankar may cause harm to Rajveer when he'll know his truth. Both of them do not want to stay here for their own different reasons
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Shubhankar: Rajveer ji aaiye khaanaa khaane baithte hai
Raj: Sirf Raj kehkar bulaa sakte ho.
Shubhankar: Raj. Raj hum log toh zameen par baith kar khaate hai. Aap to kisi ameer gharaane ke lagte ho. Zameen pe baith kar kha sakenge na.. koi taqleef toh nahi hogi?
For Raj it is not easy to sit on floor for breakfast. But he ensures Shubhankar that that he is feeling no discomfort. Kranti goes to Tulsi bua n says she'll help her in serving the food. When kranti was serving the food Shubhankar sees Kranti's face. Kranti's face becomes pale to see his reaction. She is fearing that Shubhnkar has recognized her. He is thinking that he has seen her somewhere. He has acquaintance with her but cannot recollect. Shubhankar says nothing to her.
Shubhankar: Maa ne kaha ki aapne ghar choda hai. Kyun?
Raj feels embarrassed. He does not want to say anything abt his elder bro's n SIL's conspiracy n family problems to them. He smartly tells lie. After all a lawyer is a liar. He says that he was ousted from his home because he married against the family wishes. Kranti gets shocked to hear this statement. Shubhankar smiles
Raj: Yaha kahi ek kiraaye ka ghar mil sakta hai
Tulsi Bua: Kiraaye ka ghar kyun? Tum dono hamaare ghar reh sakte ho.
Raj is in trouble now how to deny them. He says that he is lawyer n wants house near the court. Then they say that he cannot go out for searching a rented house because of the curfew which has been declared for indefinite period.
Though they r very kind n noble people, Raj is feeling very uncomfortable there. He is waiting for the curfew to get over. That night he sees Shubhnakar going outside. Kranti too sees him going outside. Raj then sees Kranti praying to God. He is confused for whose welfare she is praying. She is praying for Shubhankar's safety. Shubhankar doesn't returns that night. Tulsi bua is worried abt her so n so is Kranti. Raj is confused to see Kranti's worry. He form a hypothesis that Kranti is worried abt Shubhankar n she knows everthing abt Shubhankar's mission as both them r KK. He is angry to see this. He is feeling jealous.
Someone knocks door at the mid night. Tulsi bua goes to open the door. Raj n Kranti too come out of their room. A KK with veiled face come in says, " Gazab hoga Chaachi! Shubhankar giraftaar ho gaya"

to be continued
Edited by coolpurvi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
Purvi just read your last two parts...woww what an interesting turn the story is taking😲👏...
The best thing about your FF is even though Raj is concerned about Kranti's pain but still he is sticking to his own ideologies and beliefs👏👏...He was feeling guilty about Sohan tauji's death but at the same time he was clear in his mind that KKs r wrong and no way he can support them or stay with them in the same house👏...this is what I wanted...Raj should transform but the transformation should not b an overnight process..it should b logicall and step by step😳..
Kranti's thought process was very interesting here😉...She din't want Shubu to know the truth about Raj because she din't want him to harm her patidev when she too married Raj for his destruction😉😆..So Kranti thinks only she has the reserved rights for her patidev's destruction😆😉
So Shubu is Kranti's first crush😲..this was a superb twist👏..so it will b interesting to see a jealous Raj in action now😛..on one hand he is confused about staying with KKs and is also guilty about the Sohan Singh case and on other hand he will b extremely jealous about this Kranti-Shubu prem kahani😆😛..
Purvi I wish the creatives could follow yours or Skepti's or Ananya's or Ranju's FF for a good logical storyline👏..the whole Shubhanker Twist is wonderful👏...I think now Raj might fight the case in favour of Shubu if Bua insists or for Kranti's sake at least😳...so then Raj can easily get the forgiveness of Bua and Shubu even if they learn about Sohan Singh's death😃
Outstanding depiction Purvi👏..do continue soon😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
Jyoti thanks for liking it. U've predicted so many things. aage aage dekho hota hai kya. Havent watched todays episode now downloading it. will watch it after having dinner.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow wow what a sweet story line yaar really really cool twists tehy can show something yaar in serial too even ranjus ff too i feel both can soemhow get incorporated in serial ....am actaully very impressed loved rajs tone of voice and way he says things i was able to picture everything in my mind thanks a ton fo rsuch sweet treat infact read both parts abhi.......amazing work keep it up hope raj will save shubhankar ...lets see
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Its an amasing work yaar...it seems Raj will definitly help subhankar to get out of the arrest.... keep on waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i am so sorry purvi i am replying late.
i am very busy.
ok lets come to the story.
first of all thanks for posting it so soon.
i love the current story track.
i love the part where raj has a suspicion about krantii and shubhankar.
i love the fact that rajis still stick with his ideology .
he hates KK but krantii is worried about something else.
now i want to see raj krantii in their own house.
just both of them.
raj seems to be so manly in this story.
keep posting soon plz



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sami01

wow wow what a sweet story line yaar really really cool twists tehy can show something yaar in serial too even ranjus ff too i feel both can soemhow get incorporated in serial ....am actaully very impressed loved rajs tone of voice and way he says things i was able to picture everything in my mind thanks a ton fo rsuch sweet treat infact read both parts abhi.......amazing work keep it up hope raj will save shubhankar ...lets see



Sami thanks for appreciating my work. I m feeling so happy. BTW u've not yet posted rest three pic in KTOW m eagerly waiting for them
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pennu

Its an amasing work yaar...it seems Raj will definitly help subhankar to get out of the arrest.... keep on waiting for the next part...


Pennu thanks dear for likin it

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I was in hurry yesterday when I saw ur post. I was busy in downloading MRD

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Purvi just read your last two parts...woww what an interesting turn the story is taking😲👏... Thanks

The best thing about your FF is even though Raj is concerned about Kranti's pain but still he is sticking to his own ideologies and beliefs👏👏...He was feeling guilty about Sohan tauji's death but at the same time he was clear in his mind that KKs r wrong and no way he can support them or stay with them in the same house👏...this is what I wanted...Raj should transform but the transformation should not b an overnight process..it should b logicall and step by step😳.. Got idea to write FF from forum discussion only. i'll keep this point in mind while writing the succeeding parts of my FF
Kranti's thought process was very interesting here😉...She din't want Shubu to know the truth about Raj because she din't want him to harm her patidev when she too married Raj for his destruction😉😆..So Kranti thinks only she has the reserved rights for her patidev's destruction😆😉 m gald u like it
So Shubu is Kranti's first crush😲..this was a superb twist👏..so it will b interesting to see a jealous Raj in action now😛..on one hand he is confused about staying with KKs and is also guilty about the Sohan Singh case and on other hand he will b extremely jealous about this Kranti-Shubu prem kahani😆😛.. yeh toh hai
Purvi I wish the creatives could follow yours or Skepti's or Ananya's or Ranju's FF for a good logical storyline👏..the whole Shubhanker Twist is wonderful👏..lets see
.I think now Raj might fight the case in favour of Shubu if Bua insists or for Kranti's sake at least😳...so then Raj can easily get the forgiveness of Bua and Shubu even if they learn about Sohan Singh's death😃 u'll have to wait yaar
Outstanding depiction Purvi👏..do continue soon😳 thnks again for all encouragement



Edited by coolpurvi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
u allways creat suspense pur]vi n that is tha best part come on tell me the next part soon i cant wait now update soon. trooo good

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