FF:R-K enters new phase of life next part P-3n P-6 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very interesting Purvi.. much more than the show can even hope to be these days.. very nice track.. 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sasha, poetic, dew thanks dear for liking it. m now posting the next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Shubhankar is very handsome guy n is abt 24 yrs old. The women hugs him n starts shedding tears. Shubhankar tries to clam her n says "aap meri itni fikar kyun karti ho, ye sab mujhe kamzor kar dega". He notices a stranger in his house n asks "Maa ye'.? She replies "Juloos ne dange ki shakal le li thi agar ye na hota to aaj teri maa swargwaasi ho gayi hoti". Shubhankar gives a very indebted look to Raj n tries to touch his feet. Raj stops him. Shubhankar says to Raj, "Aapka ye ehsaan mein kabhi nahi utaar paaunga". He notices some wounds on the face n hands of his mother n says "Ye sab un kameene angrezo ki wajah se hua hai'.." She interrupts n says " Ye sab baate baad mein hogi.. choot to tujhe bhi bohot lagi hai . Main khana lagaati hu tu aaraam kar". He replies "Khana nahi khaya jaayega kal subah jaldi nikalna hai main ab sounga". She says "thooda sa kha le phir jaisi teri marzi"

Raj comes in the room where Kranti is sleeping. He finds her awakened. He notices Kranti is feeling bad for him. She says, "aapko ek zaroori baat batani hai.. hum yahan nahi reh sakte'..". Raj interrupts n says "tum aaraam karo kal baat karte hai" Raj tries to sleep sitting in the chair. Kranti understands that Raj is too tired n depressed to discuss anything. Kranti tries to get up from the bed n asks Raj to sleep on it. She says that she is alright now he needs to take rest in the bed. To this Raj says, " main theek hu. Tumhe chot lagi hai. Neeche sona chot ke liye achha nahi hai. Thand se dard badh jaayega.

Kranti: Chot to aapko bhi lagi hai. Kursi ya zameen pe sona aapke liye bhi achha nahi hai. Main kaafi aaraam kar chuki hu ab aap kijiye

Raj: Bakwaas mat karo. Jahan ho wahin leti raho

Kranti : Bakwaas aap kar rahe hai. Main to sahi baat keh rahi hu.

Raj: Baate karna band karo. Wo log sunenge toh kya kahenge. Ye hamara ghar nahi hai, kisi aur ka ghar hai

Having said so Raj feels very bad. The thinks why he got separated from his parents

Kranti: Dekhiye meri baat maan lijiye

Raj gets irritated

Raj: Kamse kam aaj nahi Kranti. main jaanta hu maine tumehe bahut dard diya hai. Par aaj ke din mujhe chod do. Main puri tarah se tut chuka hu. Main tumhare saath koi behes karna nahi chaahta. Jahan ho wahan leti rahi.

Kranti feels bad. She says, "Ab aap zor se baat kar rahe hai. Mera aisa koi iraada nahi hai' (10 secs pause) hum ek saath bhi so..."

Raj gets more irritated. Raj: Ek saath?? tumhe mujh par itna bharoosa kab se hone laga?

He gets up n starts for searching something. Kranti enquires what is he searching for. He give a smile in anger n says he is searching for curtain to partition the bed. Kranti feels bad. She has no counter-argument for this reply. Raj tries to sleep in the chair. He falls asleep

Kranti is now unable to sleep. Do I need to tell u the reasons? how Raj saved her, how he was worrying for he plus this lasted verbal warfare everything is coming in her mind again n again.

The woman who gave them shelter is Tulsi Singh. Kranti has seen her long back. Lahore is her Maayka. Kranti used to address her as Tulsi bua. Long back she came here with her son Shubhankar. She is widow. She came in Lahore after Sohan Singh's depature. Kranti cud recognize her but her Tulsi bua cud not. Kranti does not want to live here in her house. Shubhankar is Kranti's first crush. She thinks that when they will come to know that this Raj is Barrister Rajveer only who was prosecution lawyer in Sohan Singh's case Shubhankar may cause harm to him. She wants revenge from Raj yet do not want anyone to cause any harm to him. Her first crush is so near yet she is worrying abt her biggest enemy.

Kranti gets up early in the morning. Tulsi bua is doing her routine puja path the goes for kitchen. If Shubhankar becomes able recognize her???' this is her latest worry. She does want Shubhankar or tulsi bua to recognize her. Shubhankar gets up.

Tulsi bua asks" Uth gayi " . Kranti replies "Ji". She again asks " Aaj kaisi Tabiyat hai tumhaari? kal agar tum na hoti toh.. Bina kisi jaan pehchaan ke bhi tumne meri jaan bachaayi". Kranti feels relaxed that Tulsi bua has not been able to recognize her. Tulsi bua says "Itne savere uthne ki kya zaroorat thi tumhe aaram karna chahiiye"

Now Raj too gets up. But his whole body is badly aching. As madam Kranti is not there on bed he decides to relax on bed.

Kranti is avoiding any meeting with Shubhankar. Shubhanksr enters Kitchen where conversation between Kranti n Tulsi bua is going on. Kratni put her ghoonghat n goes back to the room which Tulsi bua allotted to her. She finds Raj sleeping on the bed. She removes his shoes. Put a shawl over him. Raj wakes up. Now subah-subah a romantic eye lock

Shubhankar calls form outside, "Rajveer bhai sahab agar aap jaag gaye hai toh bahar aa jaaiye maa bula rahi hai"

To be continued

Edited by coolpurvi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wonderful again. Good going purvi So shubhankar is krantis crush good one. Now i want to know what happens between the two guys.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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It is really beautiful. carry on please.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very good poorvi.. Keep going......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice one dear two good plz cont ... as i want to read the next part . plz upsate soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ranjna_m2010

wonderful again. Good going purvi So shubhankar is krantis crush good one. Now i want to know what happens between the two guys.



thanks ranju. ok pls comment how was R-K- conversation. I m waiting
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sridhar, pennu, Pari thanks once again.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30

Nice one Madam Purviji.....

So this is your first attempt....eh? A very one for that I must say........
Looking forward to see how the story progresses........
so Purviji shuru ho jaiye....
btw aren't you in love with Baby Krishna.....
Both my daughter and I fight over who is a bigger bhakt!!!!😆
Can't say Fan in this context....but matlab toh vahi hai.........😆

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